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Posted: 15 years ago
Sani
Really sorry for the late reply
I loved this FF so much
This is what I wanted to see in the show but *sighs*
Continue soon hun
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Posted: 15 years ago

I wrote this friday but didn't have the time to post it, so here it is. I hope you like it.

This ff will will be Mayank and Nupur ff mainly, and samrat and Gunjan will be minor. This is only because SG are in the show ...and MN aren't. I only made this decision because the majority of the readers wanted this.

Part 2

* here the main focus was Nupurs life.so the next part will be on Mayank while the story continues"

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Everything was scattered over the room, clothes on the floor, bedsheets on the dresser, shoes on the bed and Nupur was standing admist all observing it all.

It had been 3 years ..and she had not changed one bit, still the outspoken bubbuly girl who left morena and came to mumbai.


Nupur knew she had to clean the mess but to actually clean it, she would have to pick up the clothes,shoes.ie..but could she do that? now actually the better question was did she want to do that? NO, the answer came. shrugging to herself.

she flung open the cupboard and pulled out her suitcase when a picture flew out and landed in her hands. She flipped over the picture and smiled to herself,

" sadru mayank sharma, tum hamesha aise hi rehna" the grin on her face told a million stories caressing the picture with the tip of her finger she felt her blush.

Here she was blushing just because of his picture wonder if he was there infront of her she would fainted.

Nupur pushed back a strand of hair behind her ear, " tumhe kahbi meri yaad nahi ayi ?" she asked the picture questioning it to be a real human being instead of a picture.

She pulled open her drawer and taking out her diary placed the picture in it, then forgetting everything else she was doing,

she sat on the bed and closed her eyes for a bare moment forgetting everything, " aaj mere pass sab kuch hai, par woh nahi jiski wajah se maine yeh sab kuch paya. Zindagi toh chal rahi hai apne haal pe..aur mein bhi chalti rahungi apne haal mein par kahbi dobara hum dono ki mulaqat hogi , kya hamara faisla sahi tha? Kya humara pyar itna kamzor tha, ek hawa ke jhonke uski dehleez hila di? kya hamari bas yehi kahani thi?" before she could think any futher , the telephone rang intruding her thoughts.


She took a quick glance at the clock and picked up the receiver, " Nupur sha...I mean Nupur bhushan speaking" the voice on the other side was settle one.

"arre aunty aap, Namaste Aunty " yes in all these years, even though her and Mayank had decided to part ways, Shilpa aka mayanks mom had never lost in touch with nupur,

she had been there for her first job to her first promotion and even when she got her first solo assignment. But that did not mean Shilpa ever conveyed eithers life acheivements to the other.


"main bikul theek hoon, bas aaj thora sad hoon, par samose kha kie theek ho jaungi" laughter spread in the conversation.

"nahi aunty aisi koi baat nahi, aap chinta mat karein!" Nupur tried to maintain shilpa but after hearing nupur was sad she became worried and constantly questioned her why.

The strange thing was even nupur herself failed to realize why she was so sad all of a sudden.


"accha aunty aapke liye ek suprise hai!" nupur spoke excitedly into the phone, she didn't want to tell shilpa about her trip to india but she just wanted to give a hint, a tease.

That was nupur nothing could stay in her stomach for too long, If she had a secret she would spill it and if she kept to herself than her nights would be restless.


"nahi nahi jaldi pata chal jaye ga aapko" nupur said giving an hint, they continued on there chatter about life and its events and never did the conversation ever go to mayank and nupurs relationship.

Because that was the relationship nupur shared with shilpa aunty, she was her friend and even maybe like a motherly figure in her life there whenever she needed her.


An hour later the conversation ended and Nupur got back to her packing but again she was disturbed by the doorbell " TINGG !!"

She walked out of her room closing the door and headed towards the main hall, opening the door she smiled to herself,

" Additi ?" she said in a less suprised and more shocked manner.

Additi pushed her aside and entered the house, " you don't seem happy?" she asked looking at her,

Nupur looked away and walked to the living room, " its not like that! i'm just wondering....what you are doing here..now at this hour?"she asked picking up the tray from the table and walking towards the kitchen.


"kyun dost dost se nahi mil sakti?" additi asked munching on the freshly baked cookies on the counter.

"maine aisa kab kaha?" nupur replied but still was distant in her behaviour. additi sighed and walked up to her, " dost ko maaf nahi karogi?" , nupur broke away and walked to the fridge pretending to be busy to avoid answering the question.

"main kaun hoti hoon tumhe kuch kehne wali....woh kya...kehte hai..haan hum aapke hain kaun?" additi's face lit up hearing her dialouge, " nupur i'm really sorry na ..please i only left because i didn't want you to feel bad for what happened" Nupur looked up and seeing the guilt on her face, she melted.
"..tum bhi kya yaad karogi ...Nupur bhushan ne tumhe maaf kiya" additi smiled and hugged her.

" ...nupur i still don't understand ...why u are going, you left your husband" nupur looked at her frazzeled because additi had spoken the truth

," -oh..nupur i didn't mean it like that...i just ..was...I'm sorry yaar" additi said confused at her own words seeing nupurs plight, she felt regret for the words that left her mouth.

"adi chor na...the real reason i'm going there is for gunjan ...and then also i have a friends wedding to attend...sajjal she is very close friend of mine from mumbai" additi smiled and sighed relief as she saw nupur acting normal but still she felt guilt over what she had said just moments ago.

The two friends caught up on each others life and talked for hours about serious to the most random stuff. Additi had been Nupurs main support in rebuilding her life all over again and in that process additi became her best friend someone she could share everything with. By 11.00 additi left and nupur headed for bed as she had to attend office in the morning and her flight was at night.

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Seasons Hotel

The hotel was small and very reserved..it was hidden in the hills of Provence - close to the glamour of the Riviera - It had a breathtaking veiw and accents luxurious comfort with vistas of mountains, medieval villages and fragrant fields of thyme and lavender.

Mayank and His mom walked to their reserved table and took a seat. The beautiful water fall could be seen from table ..and it just brought awe to his moms face, " tuhje yeh sab karne ki kya zarurat thi?" shilpa asked sensing the very hugh class glamour of this place.

" ma..please ab dehko yahan ayi ho toh enjoy karo..cheap mat bano" mayank said with a slight grin taunting his mother.

" ohey ..main cheap nahi hoon...bas..." before she could continue her very reserved son cut her, " janta hoon tum toh...woh kya kehte hai..low - priced tag machine ho..haina..."his mother smiled and shook her head.

" tu joh bhi keh le...main toh ...cheap nahi hoon..." mayank smiled and handed over the menu to her, " ma, phele order karlein phir hum poori raath debate kartein raheinge kaun cheap hai or kaun nahi okay ...." taking the menu ...shilpas eyes widened at the prices of the dishes.

"ab kya hua ma?" mayank asked seeing her prepelexed expressions, " beta ... tune bataya nahi ...tune kab lottery win ki?" squinting his eyes he asked, " ma ..seedhe bolo...yeh ...guma phiran ke baat mat karo"

"beta in dishes ki prices dehki hain?" mayank sighed, " ma..aaj hum dinner yahan hi karaienge, aur tumhe is menu se order karna parega" shilpa nodded authoritively and queitened down.

"...jaise tumhari marzi" she started to analyize the menu when a thought occured in her mind, " mayank, tune sajjal ki wedding ka invite dehka kya?" mayank nodded and contined to look through the menu, " waiter ..." he called and ordered for himself and his mother since she was already having a heart seeing the prices.

"pata nahi ma, kaam." he started out but this time was cut by his mother, seems like apple doesn't fall far from the tree, " dehk muhje koi bahana nahi suna tu sajjal ki shaadi pe jayega, usne...kitne pyar se tuhje bulaya hai" mayank smiled.

" ma ...phir utne hi pyar se business kaun sambhalega? ahbi ahbi toh meri promotion huyi hai" his grinned , " koi baat nahi unhe keh dena tumhe 1 week ki chutiyan chahiye"

"haan haan zaroor ..mein apne boss ko keh doonga meri ma ne kaha tha..ke 1 hafte ki chuti lena! kyun?" shilpa smiled and nodded in coherence, " bikul sahi!"

"kya sahi ma?. I don't think mein ja sakunga" mayank said looking at the pasta infront of him.

"business hi wajeh hain yahan phir kisi aur ko wahan dehkne ka darr hai." shilpa said ...talking around the suject and not getting to the main point.

"ma please. bas main nahi ja sakta" shilpa nodded and got back to eating, " jana tu tuhje parega beta, ghee seedhi ungli se nikale yan teri muhje farak nahi parta bas nikal na chahiye" she thought to herself.

"ab aise smile kya kar rahi ho?" mayank asked seeing his mother smile widly, " kyun mere hass pe koi tax hai.! ek bete ki ma has nahi sakti kya?" she asked emotionally making mayank laugh/

They had their dinner with their little fits here and there enjoying their time together. After dinner they headed home.

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Inca. corporate.

"sahil woh singhgania's ki file lana mere office mein" nupur spoke into the phone as she ananylized the file infront of her.

"may i come in mam?" nupur smiled and nodded, " thank you sahil" she said grabbing the file from his hand and opening it.

"sahil, what were the Sihna's textiles profits from last year?" sahil checked his note pad, " mam, last year ...they decreased by 2% but ever since january 2010 they have been on the rise"

"and singhnia's?" she added

"well singhnia are doing well in a but since their product has been out for several months it is in the deflaion stage ..meaing their profits could go down severely in a month or so" nupur nodded and wrote down what he said.

"take seat please" sahil nodded and sat down, " okay so Gupta's are going more towards the enviornmental concern and sinha's aren't! so which company do think is better for us?"

she asked hoping for a second opinion on her decision that was still to be made.

"well i think sinha's would save us alot more money because we would not be paying for pollution free machinery...but." he stopped, " but..being GREEN is the new in right?" sahil nodded.

"so it would be wise for our company to side track with the Gupta's because even though in short term there isn't any benefit but in the long term...it would save us alot" she concluded typing her report.

"exactly" sahil took the project file from her and smiled, " sahil remember keep a check on Mr chopra and make sure he does not smoke...if you see anything like that call me okay."

" i know i know...don't worry i will handle it" sahil replied seeing her frenzy as she colllected her files and pushed them into her oversized purse.

Nupur opened her mouth to speak sahil beat her to it, " i know, Mr chopra likes his coffee with 1 teaspoon sugar! also during lunch time shut his office blinds because his headaches kick in during that time....and on" nupur placed her hands on her hips, "..thank you sahil"

He nodded in " and thank you nupur also, now get out before you miss your flight" nupur picked up her bag and left the office.

"pagal larki" sahil said to himself seeing her scaramble out of the office quickly in the process knocking over alott of things.

4 Hours Later....

"The Flight to Mumbai India is now ready for takeoff , Please buckle your seatbelts" The air hostness spoke into the phone. Nupur sighnd and closed her eyes with a huge smile on her face, " Mumbai here i come again" she thought. The plane took off and nupur dozed off for a little nap.

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Pre - Cap - What does destiny have instored for these two?

Pleas forgive for any mistake guys.

Do comment :) good or Bad

Sanam

Edited by PheliNazar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Akki - 13-10.... never fall in the same trap again... LOL
Sanam,
Finally I caught up with the update... got some break from Akki.... LOL...
It is amazing update Sanu... I'm glad you are focussing on Mayank and Nupur... and I love this story... I love this smart, intelligent successful Nupur.... aww...and she still misses Mayank... the talk with his photo.... it's sooo Nupurish.... she might be loud and nautanki from outside... but inside she is very sensitive, delicate and emotional person...
I loved that Nupur and Shilpa are in touch.... afterall Shilpa is and always be a strong influencial force in bringing these two together....
So Sajjal's wedding is where they are gonna bump into each other... awesome...love it...
I'm very excited for the next part.....update soon...
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no matter how clever you are you always will have something to learn from your adults...
Always listen to your adults not because they are never wrong because they have more experiences of being wrong than you..

Step no. 7 a wisecrack once in a while helps ease the tension n lets the adult know you are not an easy target.?but dun over do this step..if you turn out to be more adamant, you can never win..

@sanu..
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Sanu...*hugs* for you....
That was an awesome update....

Nupur will always be the same...n her talking yo mayu's photo had my tears glands strained...

N then the shilpa aunty n spendthrift mayu scene...that was wow!

So they will meet up at sajal's wedding...*rubs hands in anticipation*

n thanks for keeping our request....

Update soon...please!

Love n hugs,
Akki!

P.s. Had fun with you today n im sorry if i irritated you..bye...love ya hun! N that poem was so beautiful n sweet....love ya loads..gn!


Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear superb update loved it and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update...wanna read futher....eagerly waiting 4 it......
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ akki - as long as we r *dicussing* not spamming😆&& Go jess di! i hope u win!👍🏼
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Originally posted by: PheliNazar

@ akki - as long as we r *dicussing* not spamming😆&& Go jess di! i hope u win!👍🏼

Aww... thank u Sanu for being on my side....
Akki.... I know you are leading...but just wait and watch....
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Interesting story, do continue soon
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Originally posted by: -Jess-


</div>Aww... thank u Sanu for being on my side....
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Akki.... I know you are leading...but just wait and watch....



Di, i have already spammed this thread badly...what say sanu? What did you think..who consist of the 'majority readers' who wanted MN? You know mw just too well to know thw answer di..

N yeah..13-10 competition is fun! Anyways as i told ya before i m a very encouraging opponent..😉

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