FF-Nothing Can Keep Us Apart*Pts.1-40+Note - Page 55

Really Nice... update soon pls!

wow.. waiting for the next part..

thanks for such a wonderful update.😊

Awesome! The whole party description.......portrayal of Maan and Geet's feelings........the convo between the family.......Mama, Mami, Dadi, Maneet........it was all so fabulously done. Loved it! Maan was jealous hun......lolz.....and Geet was amazed at him calling her beautiful......lolz......superb! Can't wait to read the next rain part......do continue soon.

lovely update laxmi......wow rain sequence coming up....do we get another song-dance here??😍 Edited by amotlymileo - 13 years ago

amazing update.loved it.
loved the conversation between dadi and mami.....
continue soon.

loved this update! cant wait for the next part!

omg that was an amaing update

lovely part sweety
that creep rahul enters here too but no worries maan is here so no fear
geet was really a hit in the party and maan calling geet beautiful and geet questioning was so sweet dadi was really proud of geet and rajkumarji and her husband was really sweet
do continue

Loved the update