Arrange Marriage #2 [Mayur] : NTL : Page 147 - Page 82

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Mahiiiii!🤗 i'm glad u updated this FF....seems like itz been ages since u did!

wow dude! u've become an expert in describing every feeling of Mayank n Nupur 👍🏼 [occasionally others too], be momentary pleasure/unhappiness, confusion, hesitation or embarassment...

hmm....Nupur's dear Uday Bhaiyya came n Nupur's behaviour was understandably baccha-ish!😆

Mayank's joy at discovering diff. aspects of Nupur's personality feels nice 2 read...
the choc. scene was too good!😆 [i assume its based on ur own love 4 chocolates😉]
& also nice was their small convo...

aha! Mayank read Nupur's diary....maybe its good in a way coz it helped him 2 understand her own dilemma when she 1st got 2 know of the proposal...it helped Mayank 2 relate with her...

thanx 4 the invitation Mahi, needless 2 say, its beautiful!👏
eagerly waiting 4 their engagement....

P.S:(1)i love the title of this chapter! 'chocolate effects'- how cute!😃
(2) sorry 4 editing late....😳

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Wow..Am I really the first one to comment??

Seriously this was like awesome..one thing which I loved about the part or maybe this whole FF is its simplicity..its beauty. So sweet. Loved the chocolate part..nicely written. Nupur feelings well expressed! LOVED Uday..hes my jaanu! ❤️ And also the Mayank-Gunjan part..sweet 😳 And obviously my jaanualble MAYUR are always the best! Superb! Keep it up!! :):)

Mahak you write extremely well. Im Mansi btw :)

Thanks a lot mansi.....

Yup u really are the first one to comment.....aaj toh main itni der se kisi comment ka wait kar rahi thi...

first comments are always very meaningful to me.....coz i don't go offline until i see one comment atleast.....

Thanks a lot.....i am really very happy that u loved my ff.....

i really believe in simplicity....so i wanted this ff to be very simple.....

i am really happy that u loved the chocolate part......i was really very nervous about it......

Glad that i could express their feelings.....

Thanks for loving Uday......

Thanks a lot......

I am really very happy that u think that i write well......it's really an honour....and i will try to improve my level best......

Thanks a lot......

love,
Mahak

OMGGGG Mahiii Janiiiiii you are the besttttttttttt🤗 Goshhhhh lots of MayUrrr in thisss partttt Ahhh canttt imagineeeee their engagement dayyyy and i am sureee it will concet their hearts😍 Ahhh u ve written it soooo beautifullyyyyy❤️ i am sooo falling in love with this part Gosh loved the childishhh Nupsssssss 😍😍 and her buming to Mayankkkk☺️OMGGGGGGG

i noo u will forgive ur lazy friend for unreserving this later...!

anyway i was the first one to read😆 am proud on it...😳yet u should no am lazy enough though...!

i loved ur title.....ur title itself i know ur give a beautiful part...👏

from me for making a lovely part....!

wow here uday change of character from mjht...i can imagine him very much caring...really it suits him very much..!😊😛😉😃😳😊👏👏👏

here nupz acting so funny and kiddy...but i too love chocolate but i do share with everyone...here i am giving gunjan some of my chocos......

mayur hitting scene....

am still on my imagination...! i couldnt get out of their cute world...!

i really enjoyed the part were mayu reading nupz feelings....god y not nupur came little bit late...so that mayu would have got some time to read more😳😳

so cute , card was simply great....!am gonna make you choose my wedding invitation card...but i should stop dreaming more...yet full 3 years left for it though...😆

wow finally u've updated.
that was a sweet & cute part.
the way she was talking with uday like a kid & having ice creams. so sweet.& uday thinking abt nupur was so touching.
loved the jeeja saali convo.
loved the confusion that was mayu feeling abt reading the diary.
awww he gave her his number..
can't wait to read the next part.
continue soon.

Originally posted by: bhavana92

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bhavana.....jaldi karna.......coz i wil be waiting.....

rocking mindblowing superb
just loved the chocolate effects really
gr8 fab job
thanks for the pm
intezar ka phal chocolate hogaya lols
what an update enjoyed it very much
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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mahi simply awesome update

i loved uday n nup's part mayur part was olso good thanks 4 d pm n plz update life in a movie if u can 🤗

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

Thanks a lot mansi.....

Yup u really are the first one to comment.....aaj toh main itni der se kisi comment ka wait kar rahi thi...

first comments are always very meaningful to me.....coz i don't go offline until i see one comment atleast.....

Thanks a lot.....i am really very happy that u loved my ff.....

i really believe in simplicity....so i wanted this ff to be very simple.....

i am really happy that u loved the chocolate part......i was really very nervous about it......

Glad that i could express their feelings.....

Thanks for loving Uday......

Thanks a lot......

I am really very happy that u think that i write well......it's really an honour....and i will try to improve my level best......

Thanks a lot......

love,
Mahak

Your most welcome dear..I really understand how it feels..Ive been an FF writer too! 😳

Mahak meri Jaan atlast tujhe ye FF yaad aagaya