Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys heres a oneshot on a  NaKsh.hope u all like it.plz do give ur precious comments n press d like button.
PART 1-
At singhania's house,all were sitting in hall except of daddaji n rajbanna.nandini,rashmi n akshara were seeing naksh wedding album.they were seeing d scene when naitik was facing difficulty to climb d mare.
rashmi:didi yaad hai aapko dada ko kitni problem hui thi ghodi chadne me.πŸ˜†
akshara:achha?
nandini:ha akshara aur hume bahot mazaa aa raha tha.πŸ˜†
naitik(embaressed😳):to kya hua.......hota hai....sabke saath hota hai.
all started laughing.πŸ˜†
nandini:rashmi tum janti ho kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki shaadi ho jane k baad log sab kuch bhul jate hai.
all were confused.πŸ˜•
rashmi:aap kehna kya chahti hai didi?
nandini:tumhe yaad hai rashmi naitik ne hume ghodi chadne se pehle promise kiya tha ki wo hume jo hum chahe wo dege.
rashmi:are ha didi main to bilkul bhool gayi thi.dada apne wada kiya tha na ki aap mujhe pura naya wardrobe le kar denge.kaha hai mera naya wardrobe.
naitik:wo rashmi..... main to bhool hi gaya tha.... achha thik hai aaj hi hum chalte hai shopping k liye.
rashmi:thnxxx dada.
nandini:aur mera gift.tumne poori duniya ghumane ka wada kiya tha na."agar main poori duniya ko apke kadmo me rakh kar un uchaiyo se dikhau jo aap sirf aapne sapno me sochti hai to.... " yahi kaha tha na tumne.tab to itne bade bade wade kiya aur 1 bhi poora nahi kiya.
naitik:didi aap to janti hai shaadi k baad kitni zimmedari bad gayi hai,time hi nahi mila to main kaise...aur aap to janti hai na daddaji ko,wo hume kabhi nahi bhejenge.
suddenly daddaji comes n says:kyu nahi bhejunga.
there was silence all around n every1 was really nervous.
daddaji:nandini tune je baat to bahot achhi chhedi.waise bhi pechhle kuch dino se mhare ghar ka mahool thik na tha.ab tum log kahi ghoom phir aaoge to achha rehvega.
every1 becomes happy.πŸ˜ƒ
daddaji:par ha 2 din se zyada k liye nahi.
rashmi:par 2 din k liye kaha jaa sakte hai.
nandini:GOA??? goa chale mujhe samudr dekhna hai.maine aaj tak samudr nahi dekha.
every1 agrees.
daddaji:rajbanna,jaa munna,bahu,nandini aur rashmi ki tickets kar va de.
all 4 of dem thanked daddaji n went 2 dere respective rooms 4 packing.
in naksh's room:
akshara was packing when naitik comes n hugs her from behind.❀️
naitik:mujhe to ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki daddaji ne hum sab ko jane ki permission de di.
akshara:yakeen to mujhe bhi nahi ho raha hai naitik.
naitik:par akshara rashmi aur nandini didi bhi humare saath jaa rahi hai.ye 2 din main apke saath akele bitana chahta tha.πŸ˜”
akshara:koi baat nahi naitik,akele nahi to kya par hume 1 dusre ka saath to milega.😊
in nandini's room:
rashmi:wow didi kitna mazaa aayega na.hum kitne dino baad udaipur se bahar jaa rahe hai.
nandini:ha rashmi par dhyaan rahe naitik aur akshara bhi humare saath jaa rahe hai.jitna ho sake unhe 1 saath samay bitane dena waise bhi shaadi k baad dono 1 saath kahi ghumne nahi gaye hai.πŸ˜ƒ
rashmi:ha thik hai didi.chaliye na 1 baar dekhte hai dada aur bhabhi ki packing hui ya nahi.
nandini:thik hai chalo.
both go 2 naksh's room.naitik was still hugging akshara.rashmi clears her throat n says:lagta hai hum galat time par aaye hai didi.chaliya wapis chalte hai.
both gets separated n akshara says:nahi nahi rashmi aao.kuch kaam tha.
rashmi:bhabhi hum to bas plans banane aaye the.daddaji ne se 2 din diye hai ghoomne k liye.
naitik:ha kal subah 10 baje ki flight hai.6 ghante to lagta hi hai udaipur se goa jane me.matlab shaam k chaar baje puhchenge.phir thoda rest karne k liye bhi time chaiye.1 din me goa kaise ghoomenge.πŸ˜•
akshara:kuch nahi hota kal hum shopping kar lenge aur parso goa ghoom lenge.waise bhi parso to raat 9 baje ki flight hai to humare paas poora din hoga ghoomne k liye.πŸ˜ƒ
nandini:kya 9 baje ki matlab hum ghar subah 3 baje puhchenge.πŸ˜•
naitik:didi aap tension mat lijiye maine daddaji se ghar ki dusri chabi le li hai.hum raat ko aayenge aur kisi ko jagna bhi nahi padega.
rashni:to phir done hum aisa hi karenge.
every1 says gudnite 2 each other n goes to sleep.
guys 1 more part coming up n dat 2 full of naksh romance.❀️
Edited by VivaciousBhavya - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago

wowww bhavz!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

present unfavourable conditions mein to aise oneshot ki kitni jarurat thi yaar!!!!! thanxx!!

NaKsh ka indirect HM!!!!! v all r praying 4 the same after their patchup!!! gud 1!!!

looking forward to ur next part full of romance!!!!!πŸ˜‰ updt soon.........
Posted: 14 years ago
thankzzzzzzzzz
very nice dear
plzzzzzzzzzz continue
wating for naksh romance 😍 😍 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute oneshot
 i remember that goda scene!!
that was nice to watch!!!!
continue!!

Posted: 14 years ago
hey bhavzz it was amazinngggπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Posted: 14 years ago
omg..thts soo lovely bhavzz !!😊
plzz update d 2nd parrt sun !! m w8ing..
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...πŸ‘
well written..plzz continue..

Posted: 14 years ago
@manu,anjy,pree,anu di,sethu di,YRKKH1 n karachi21 n luv_naksh{sry dont know ur names}
thnxxxx a lot guys 4 ur precious comment
i'll update d next part asap
thnxxx n luv ya
Edited by VivaciousBhavya - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
Wow ya awesome writing !!
Ur Onshot came as a real sweet gift to us naksh fans in the current disappointing track
Pls continue Soon
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome o.s dear
loved it
thanx for the pm

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