Hello Guyz........
This is my VERY FIRST NaKsh oneshot.......I hv just given it a try......Its just my prediction..
I have taken some ideas from the future track too......Would like to thank moonlight08 aka kaumudi and jowsorrow aka ankita(for giving the star sansaar update which helped me!)karandeewani(who gave me an idea indirectly..)
It starts from Friday's episode end.......
Akshara picks up the phone.There is an ere of silence.Both are speaking words just through their mere silence.There's an immense desire to speak up so much with each other.Both the minds are filled with emotions and feelings.Akshara's eyes are filled with tears;her tears overpowering her desire to talk with Naitik.Naitik's condition is none better than this.But this stubbornness isn't permitting him to start the conversation.Both are reading loads from each other's silence!Finally,trying her best to control her tears and emotions,Akshara is about to speak up,just then..
Suddenly,she hears Nani's loud voice,shotuing 'Rajashri!Rajashri!Kahan gaye sab log?' Akshara in haste,is unwantedly compelled to keep down the receiver.Consequently,Naitik again feels it to be his insult and is once again hurt from within.
Akshara is coming down the staircase,completely clueless of the next disaster awaiting her.Rajashri,Dadi and Varsha have already arrived in the drawing room in response to Nani's calling.Nani angrily asks Rajashri "thaari beti ko kya ho gaya hai?tu mujhse kya rahi hai"?
Rajashri:Maa..aap ye kya keh rahi hai?Hum aapse kya chupaenge?
Nani:Jitni bholi dikhu hu utni hu na.koi to baat jaror hai!
Rajashri:Aap aisa kyu keh rahi maa?Kuch baat hui hai kya?
Nani:Meri akshara ro kyu rahi thi phone par kisise baat karte karte?Mujhe sach sach bataa kya baat hai?
Rajashri:Meri bacchi phone par ro rahi thi?Par..
Akshara comes down the staircase and is now face to face with Nani.She interrupts Rajashri.
A:maa!
Rajashri:Akshara!beta tu ro rahi thi?Kiska phone aaya tha?
Akshara:Wo...Naitikji ka..
Rajashri is a litle happy thinking that maybe they have solved the problem a little bit.
Rajashri(happily):Kya baat hui?Sab kuch theek ho gaya?
Akshara:Unho ne mujhse kuch bhi nahi kaha maa..(starts crying)
Nani:Accha to main ab samjhi.Javaaisa Akshara se naraaz hai!
Rajashri:Maa..aisi koi baat nahi hai!Wo to bas..
Nani:Akshara apne maayke mein itni der rahegi to javaaisa naraaz ho hi jaenge.Haan nahi to kya.Sasural mein itni rach-bas gayi hai ki unhe yaad karke roti rehti hai.Beta tu abhi apne sasural chali jaa.
Dadi:Samdhanji,Akshara kuch din aur yahan ruk jaegi to aapke saath chaar baatein kar paegi.Usse rehne dijiye.
Nani:Na na samdhanji.Mhari khushi se jyada akshara ke sasuralwaalon ki khushi maayne rakhti hai.Akshara abhi sasural laut jaegi.
Varsha to Akshara:He bhagwaan!Naniji ne to jidd pakad rakhi hai!Akshara tu ghabraa mat!Kuch hi der mein bauji ghar aa jaenge aur wo sab sambhaal lenge.
Akshara to Varsha:Varsha,kab tak nani se ye baat chhupi rahegi!Mujhe lagta hai nani ko ab bataa dena hoga!
Varsha to Akshara:Akshara tu ye kya keh rahi hai?
Akshara:Nani,main..apna ghar chhodkar ayi hu..
Nani:kyaaaa??
Rajashri and everyone else is very tensed.Nani is shocked!
@Singhania house
Gaya3-Rajshekhar's room
Rajshekhar:Kya baat hai Gaya3ji,aap kuch pareshan lag rahi hai?
Gaya3:Ji..kuch nahi bas..Wo munna ke kuch kapde yaha rakh diye gaye.Ye gulabo bhi na.Ek kaam theek se nahi karti.Kitni baar kaha hai ki munna ke kapde ussi ke room mein rakh diya karna.Bahu na ho ghar mein,to ek kaam theek se nahi hota!Par dono apni jidd par jo ade hai!Kitni takleef ho rahi hai hamare munna ko!
Rajshekhar:Sach kaha aapne high command!Dono bachche apni naadaani mein khudko hi chot pahucha rahe hai!Waise hamari bahu to samajhdar hai!Phir Naitik ko bina bataye wo ghar chhodkar kaise chali gayi?Kitne dino se main yahi soch raha hu!
Gaya3:Ji..chali to wo bataa kar hi gayi thi par munna ne..
Rajshekhar:kya??Akshara beti aapko bataakar itni raat ko maayke chali gayi thi?
Gaya3:Ji nahi..Akshara munna ke liye chitthi chhodkar gayi thi.Jab main subah munna ke kamre mein gayi thi tab maine wo chitthi padhi thi.Maine munna ko wo chitthi dikhayi bhi thi aur samjhaane ki koshish bhi ki thi.Par wo sunane ko taiyyar hi nahi tha.Usne chitthi padhi hi nahi!Gussa jo bhara tha uske mann mein.
Rajshekhar:Phir Gaya3 ji,apne baad mein usse wo kyu nahi padhne ko kaha?Ab kaha hai wo chitthi?
Gaya3:Peechle dino ghar mein jo kuch bhi ho raha tha,usme maine chitthi kaha rakh di,mujhe yaad hi nahi aa raha hai!
Rajshekhar:Gaya3ji!Bahu ne munna ke liye likhi hui chitthi apne iss tarah ghumaa di?!
Gaya3:Ji wo..
Suddenly,his mobile rings.
He says,"Haan theek hai.Main abhi dastakhat le leta hu aur kal aap tak saaew papers pahucha deta deta hu".
He cuts the phone.
He says to Gya3:"Aapko kuch din pehle maine kuch kagjaat diye the rakhne ke liye,wo kaha rakhe aapne?
Gaya3:Uss drawer mein.Kya hua?
Rajshekhar:Peechle kuch dino se munna ka kaam mein mann hi nahi lag raha hai.Darasal usse office ke kuch papers par dastakhat karne hai.Munna ko to yaad hi nahi hoga.
He removes somes papers from the drawer,and leaves the room to enter Naitik's room.
Naitik's room
Naitik is lying down on his bed.He is restless and is not feeling like sleeping.Rajshekhar enters his room.
Rajshekhar:Munna,tum so to nahi gaye na?
Naitik:Nahi bauji.Kuch kaam tha?
Rajshekhar:Haan beta.Wo kuch papers par tumhare hastakshar chahiye the.
Naitik:Ji bauji.Main sign kar dunga.
Rajshekhar:Achcha,phir main kal subah tumse woh papers le lunga.
Naitik:Ji.
Rajshekhar leaves the room.
Naitik picks up the papers to sign them.After signing two papers,he comes across a letter.He opens it..It is the letter written by Akshara!!
He reads it.
"Naitik, jb ap ise padh rhe honge, tb main jaa chuki hongi , yha apna sb chod kr...wo sb...jise hmne haste-muskurate...roothe manate hue, sath me sanjoya tha,,ye ghr apke sath mera b ban gaya...is nayi duniya ko apnane ki main koshish kr rhi thi....is ghar ki bahu ki zimmedariyon ka samna maine kuch apki madad se kiya kuch apne tarike se..is choti si chatt me sb kuch dekhna chahti thi..lekin shayd sbko khush rkhne ki koshish mein, main kisiko khush nhi rakh saki....
jante hai naitik, is ghr me jb main pehli bar apke sath aayi thi, to maine jana nhi tha ki shadi kya hai...ki rishta kya hai...ek bharosa tha...aap par...aur aapne mera wo bharosa tutne nhi diyaa naitik...mera hath apne haath me lekar..apni poori duniya ka hissa banaya..sabke beech barabari ki jagah di...hr pal mera hausla bane aap... aur tb mujhe smjh me aya, ki ye rishta kya hai..hmare is khoobsoorat se bandhan mein muje nayi pehchaan dii...naye rishte jud gaye..lekin aap hi agr mera sath nhi chahte to fir..is ghr me meri kya pehchaan reh gayi...aap chahte hai main chali jaoon..main jaa rhi hoon...aur laut kr bhi ap hi ki marzi se aaoongi.....!!!!"(Courtesy:starry.phoenix aka Shikha)
Naitik is still..speechless..stunned..heartbroken..
@Maheshwari house
Nani:Itna sab ho gaya aur tum logon ne mujhe kuch bhi nahi bataaya!Chaar baatein bulva hi lete ho mujhse.Haan nahi to kya.Rajashri!Tune ye sab mujhse chupaya?!
Rajashri:Maa..hum chupana nahi chahte the par..
Nani:mhaare khaandaan mein ab tak koi bahu-beti apna sasural chhodkar nahi aayi thi!Arrey jab puri biraadri mein ye baat phail jaegi to jaanti hai kitni badnaami hogi!
Dadi:Samdhanji,aap shaant ho jaiye.Vishambhar sab kuch sambhaal lega.
Nani:Main apni beti ki zindagi barbaad nahi hone dungi!
She is pulling Akshara.
Nani:Main abhi usse uske sasural chhodkar aungi.
Akshara:Nani.....
Vishambhar enters the house and sees nani pulling Akshara.
Vishambhar:Akshara kahi nahi jaegi....
To be Continued soon.........
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Edited by manasi_31 - 14 years ago
