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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
great job tina
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
guys first i am going to answer diya's questoins
Q:if bhhomi had the tape then why did she left the house?
she recorded the video when gopal gives her the camera and when in madhvapur shefali is talking to her self.

ok now the fan fic.
shakuntala:vasvudev main bhoomi ko dhoom dham se iss ghar main dulhan banna ker lanna chahti hun.
vasvudev and keshav are very happy.
also bhoomi and arjun are happy.
now every body is packing to go back to heritage house.
when baisa and bhoomi comes in the room
manasvi:aree bhoomi baisa aaiye na.
baisa:manasvi hamain tum se kuch baat karni hai.
manasvi:ji baisa
baisa:main chahti hun abb tum bhi shaadi karlo
manasvi is shocked.
manasvi:nahin baisa main abb kisi aur see shadi nahin karun gi.
bhoomi:laikin bhabhi abhi app ki umar hi kiya hai widhwa banane ki.aur bhabhi khusi kay bare main bhi toh sochiey.
manasvi:khushi mere saath bohat khush hai.aur uss ko mere aur aap logon kay siwa kisi ki zarrorat nahin.
bhoomi:nahin bhabhi please app shadi karlein.
manasvi says that she needs time..
ok guys going.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
awesome part!
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
manasvi after thinking says:ok baisa
bhoomi is very happy also baisa is.
baisa(to bhoomi):abb humain larka dhundana ho ga
bhoomi:baisa meri nazar mein eik larka hai
baisa:kaun
bhoomi:suraj ji.
baisa is shocked.
baisa:yeh toh acha hai agar manasvi ki shaadi ghar main hi ho jaye toh woh hum se door bhi nahin ho gi.laikin bhoomi manasvi se tum baat karo gi.
bhoomi:ok baisa
bhoomi(to manasvi):bhabhi baisa aur main ne aap kay liye eik larka chunna hai.
manasvi:kon
bhoomi:suraj ji
manasvi:laikin bhoomi....
i will continue toommorow
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
i hope manasvi says yes
great job
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Thx for clearing my doubt.Again another thx for being sooo fast in posting fics and for writting a nice story 👏 .I have a request that pls write something about Arjun's guilt.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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bhoomi:bhabhi agar aap yeh kehna chahti hain kay app ne suraj ji ko kabhi uss nazar se nahin dekha to bhabhi arjun ne bhi kabhi mujhe uss nazar se nahin dekha tha per ab dekhiye woh aur main aik dusre se kitna pyar karte hain
manasvi(after thinking):ok
bhoomi is very happy.
she tells every thing to baisa.baisa is very happy.
baisa(to every one):abb iss ghar main 2 shadiyan hon geen.
every body is realy confused.
siddharth:kiya matlab..
baisa:manasvi ki bhi shaadi kar rahi hun.
every body smiles expect suraj
suraj(sadly):kis se.
baisa:tum se.
suraj becomes happy.
suraj:per kiya manasvi ne maanna
bhoomi:toh kiya aap ne yeh samjha hai kay hum aise hi sab kuch bol dain gay
suraj smiles.
then baisa goes to mansen
baisa:mansen jab kay tum ne suraj ko apna beta bannaya hai main chahti hun kay tum suraj ki shaadi manasvi ki saath shadi karne ko maan lo
mansen is about to say somethin but bhoomi says:baisa aap ko kaka sahib se puchne ki koi zaroorat nahin abb jab itna kuch hum logon kay beech saaf ho gaya hai toh eik aur sach sun lijiye suraj ji maan ji kay baitee hain..
every body is shocked

continuing tommorow bye




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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
great job!
please write soon!
i wonder what will everybody's reaction will be
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
every body is really shocked.
arjun:yeh tum kiya keh rahi ho bhavri.
bhoomi:arjun main sach bol rahi hun..tum maan ji se pooch lo..
arjun:maan kiya bhavri saach bol rahi hai.
shaku is quite..
bhoomi:maan ji app sach bol dijye warna main arjun ka viswas kho dun gi.
shakuntala:haan bhoomi sach bol rahi hai.
every body is shocked.
suraj:haan yeh sach hai.laikin maan ne yeh sab kuch tum logon se iss liye chupaya kay woh tum logon ko khona nahin chahti theen.aur tumhari factory blast wale din satya mujh se yehi baat kerne aya tha aur jab main bahir nikla jab ke satya abhi bahar nahin nikla tha toh factory main blast ho gaya.
manasvi:toh yeh sab bhoomi ko kaise pata hai.
bhoomi bhabhi woh eik dafa satya bhaiya aur maan ji se baat kar rahe toh main ne sun liya..
ok guys i have to go.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
👏 👏 👏
great job i hope the whole family accepts him especially arjun and mansavi.
keep up the good work