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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
that was really fantastic marriyam 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
when every body(including arjun and shefali) goes too madhvapur and while walking they saw gopal's side(where bhoomi work's)
baisa:yahan chalein
others:chaliye
while seeing the work manasvi sees bhoomi
manasvi:bhoomi!!!!
gopal listens to him and says:ji yeh bhoomi nahin sugandhi hai
arjun quitely goes from there
guys i have to go because i have to do my home work i will continue

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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
nice part
please write soon!
good luck on your homework
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
plzz cont soon   😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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manasvi:nahin yeh bhoomika arjun goenka hai meri devrani
gopal(to bhoomi):kiya yeh sach hai
bhoomi is quite
baisa:aree arjun kahan gaya
every body start looking for him.
shakti sees him and says arju ghar chalo
arjun:nahin mera dil nahin kar raha
shakti:chalo sab pareshan hai
arjun(thinking):ok
every body is in the house manasvi have told gopal every thing about bhoomi
gopal:jitna main bhoomika ko janta hun woh aisa nahin kar sakti
baisa:haan main toh bhoomi koh bachpan se janti hun pata nahin uss ne kiyun aisa kia

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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
nice story plz cont. i can't wait 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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baisa(to bhoomi):ghar chalo
bhoomi:nahin baisa
every body is astonished
arjun:kiyun bhavri
bhoomi:pehle main aap sab ko apni begunhai sabit ker kay pataun gi
arjun:iss ki koi zaroorat nahin hum sab ne tumhain maaf kardiya.
bhoomi:nahin main apni begunahi sabat ker kay rahun gi.aap log mujhe sirf 2 din dijye main apni begunahi sabit ker dun gi.
every body goes from there but gopal gives bhoomi something.............suspense
shefali is still there.
she says:bhoomika tum yeh kaisay sabit karogi kay yeh sab main nain tum se karne ko kaha tha.
bhoomi laughs littely
bhoomi:yeh app ko eik or din kay baat pata chal jaye ga
shefali angriely goes o her room
shefali(talking to herself):yeh bhoomika itni khush kiyun ho rahi hai.uss kay paas toh koi sabut nhi nahin hai kay yeh sab main ne karvaya hai.
in morning
every body is gadhered in hall.shefali comes.bhoomi says abb mere paas sabut hai kay yeh sab main ne aap logon kay ache kay liye kiya.
suspence will continue tommorow
marriyam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
that was good
please continue soon with your suspense
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
bhoomi show every body a tape that was the video when shefali is talking to herself taht how can bhoomi proov her inoocence
shefali is shocked.
shefali switch off the vcr and says:yeh sab kuch jhoot hai
bhoomi:kiya saboot hai app kay paas.
shefali is quite
arjun gets angry.
and says:shefali yeh kiyun kiya tum ne aisa kiyun kiya main ne tum koh apna dost samjha aur tum ne.
baisa slaps shefali....
manasvi:bhoomi ab to ghar chalo
baisa:nahin....
every body is shocked
baisa:aree main toh keh rahi hun kay abb hum bhoomi koh dulhan banna ker dhoom dham se iss ki shadi karvake iss ghar main lan gay
every body starts laughing
shakuntala:haan main ajj hi vasvudev se baat karun gi
guys me going to sleep bye
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
Everything is good but that video part is not very realistic coz Bhumi is not that much clever and one more thing that if she had that video then why she left that house?She could expose Shefali much earlier.Anyway ur fic was good.