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Posted: 18 years ago
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in night when arjun comes in his room
bhoomii says:arjun mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai.
arjun:bolo!!
bhoomi:mujhe us bare main baat karni hai joh tum ne mujhe or suraj ji ko eik saatth dekha tha
arjun:(angry 😡 )mujhe uss bare main koi baat nahin karni.
bhoomii:mujhe karni hai dekhoo arjun
arjun:(interrupt bhoomi)please
bhoomi:arjun tuhain sunanna ho ga socho agr kal ko tum mujhe shakti bhayyia kay saatth dekho gay toh kiya tab bhi yeh hi soccho gay nahin na.arjun mera suraj ji se wohi rishta hai joh mera shakti bhayyia se hai.
arjun remain silent...
Bhoomi:or haaan arjun sunno kal ghar main shaadi hai iss liye kal hum aisi koi baat nahin karen gay.
in morning
bhoomi is going somewhere when she and arjun had a takkar when bhoomi is trying to go where she was going she saw that her mangalsutra is in arjun,s coat buttons.
a phone call comes for bhoomi arjun pick it up its gopal.
gopal:kiya main sughandi seh baat ker sakta hun
arjun:sorry is ghar main koi suganddhi nahin rehti.
bhoomi listens to arjun and run to phone.
ok guys i will continue it in noon
bye
marriyam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
ziddi i tried to write a long part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
marriyam that was great!
you did a nice job!
but please make the next part longer!
i wonder what will arjun's reaction will be!
write soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Very nice.Pls post a little longer one next time and when r u going to solve the misundestandings?post it soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
it was graet can u please cont.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
than bhoomi talks on the phone arjun is astonished to see that.
the marriage is going on but arjun is still thinking about what happened.
after they come back to home after marriage arjun calls bhoomi in room and ask:yeh sab kiya hai bhavri
bhavri:kiya kiya hai.
arjun:yeh sugandhi ka kiya chakkar hai.
bhavri tells the truth to arjun.
in the living room every body is sitting (arjun included but how can be bride groom their?? no they are not)then bhoomi comes with a atechi(bag) in her hand every body is astonished to see that
bhoomi:pareshan mat hoiye shaadi khatam ho gai hai aur mai ab jaa rahi hun.
every body is astonisheed.
but bhoomi wahan se chali jaati hai or ussi waqt god ki murti kay kareeb se ek diya bujhne lagta hai joh arjun bhag ker bajjata hai(bhujne se)
(guys that mean arjun is going to bring ghar ki laxmi back)
arjun is in his room and crying with remembring bhoomi and says that
arjun:shaid suraj sahi kehta hai bhavri main tumhain cahne laga hun kyunki tum to pehle bbhi eik dafa iss ghar ko chor ker gayi thi jab hum donon ki badnami hui thi per main tumhain uss waqt yaad ker ke rota toh nahin tha
i love you bhavri
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
awwwwwww how sweet and sad at the time!
please write soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
it was really nice 👏 plzz continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
somebody is listening to all this.
u know who!!
its shefali.
and she is angry 😡
she came to her room furiesly and
shefali says:yeh sab kiya hai arjun main ne tumhare liye itna kuch kiya per tum uss bhoomika ko chahte hoo.chalo kuch nahin hota main uss bhoomika ko kabhi iss ghar main nahin aane dun gi aur agar woh aa bhi gayi toh main use chain se jeene nahin dun gi.
next morning
every body is having breakfast (its sunday)
arjun in his room and he have an imagination bhoomi comes in room and says:are arjun uth gaye tum tehro main tumhare liye nashta laati hun. but when arjun sees back at the door no one is there.
on breakfast table
baisa:aree manasvi arjun nahin aaya
manasvi:pata nahin kiyun baisa main uss ko bulati hun.
when manasvi goes to her room she sees that arjun is looking at bhoomi's photo and crying.she feels bad.she than knocks the door arjun cleans his tears and says:aree bhabhi aap aiye na
manasvi (with a sad voice):nashta karlo
arjun:mujhe bhook nahin hai
manasvi:ok
she goes down
arjun goes to a park where he and bhoomi goes almost every day in child hood and play.
at night when arjun comes back home he remembers that whenever he comes back bhoomi says:aree arjun aa gaye tum tum fresh ho jao main khanna laga deti hun.
but now no one is here arjun sadly goes to his room.
bhoomi in madhvapur is also thinking about arjun.
gopal comes there and says:jab main ne tumhain phone kiya toh yeh kiyun bola gaya keh yahan koi sugandhi nahin rehti.
bhoomi sadly goes from there.gopal is astonished.
in heritge house every body is discussing a reception party for shakti and soniya(soniya is shakti's bride)
baisa:manasvi mujhe lagta hai hamain iss dafa saari cheezeen madhvapur se lani cahhiyen.
manasvi:theek hai baisa
i will continue tommorow
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
you did a wonderful job tina 👏 👏 👏
please write soon!
make it longer and i hope that arjun and bhoomi patch things up!