Mayur Sajan FF: Milege kabhi hum tum??? # 1 - Page 86

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Posted: 15 years ago

amazing update dear!

continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey friends... Thank you so much for all the comments.
I am happy that you all liked the last part.
I am updating it in a few minutes...
Love,
$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago

Ok, so here is the next part… Read it and comment…

Part 20:
Nupur came out of her room and went to the hall. Mayank didn't know that she left with luggage. He went in her room to offer her help for her luggage. He saw that everything was cleaned. But he noticed a note on the side table. On a closer look, he saw that it was a diary. He wondered if it was of Nupur?

He opened the cover. And saw Nupur's name decoratively written on it. He smiled and closed the diary. He put that in his bag to give her afterwards.

S: Mayank, chale?

M: Ha, Samrat. Chalo. Gunjan taiyar he?

S: Haan. Hum ab car ke paas jate he.

M: Ok.

And the foursome goes to the car after walking on that small road.

Samrat and Gunjan put their bags in dickey and went to the front seat.

In the car:

S: Gunjan…

G: Ha Samrat?

S: Aaj sham ko date pe chale? Hum log 7:00 baje pahoch jayege. Me tumhe 8:00 baje pick karne auga. Ok?

G: Magar hum jayege kha?

S: That will be a surprise. (He winked)

G (Blushed): Ok.

Outside the car:

Mayank was putting the bag in the dickey while he saw Nupur coming there. She was not feeling comfortable as the bag was heavy. Mayank went 2 steps forward and took the bag from her hand. He put it in the dickey.

N: Thanks.

M: It's ok. Chalo.

Nupur went to the back seat and sat in. Mayank also went to sit beside her. He was still standing when Samrat suddenly started the car and Mayank fell on Nupur. They shared a cute eye lock. Nupur was feeling uneasy and Mayank was lost in her beauty. He stood up as the car got steady on the road.

They played antakshari for some time. After that Nupur and Gunjan fell asleep.

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When they reached, Mayank and Samrat both had to wake up nupur and Gunjan. They dropped Nupur first, then Gunjan. Then Samrat went to drop Mayank and finally he reached home.

He was excited about his date with Gunjan tonight. He went to get ready. As he came out after the shower, he saw 2 missed calls from Gunjan.

He called her and said teasingly. "Kya hua, Gunjan? Bahot betab ho hamari DATE ke liye?

G: Stop it, Samrat. I called you because I have to cancel our date.

S: You are joking, right?

G: Nahi. I am serious. Mr. Rathore ko mene phone kiya ki me overtime kar lungi next week. To unhone kaha, aaj hi aa jao. Aur jaldi. As Suzane is on leave, he needs someone to handle her place tonight. We will postpone our date to some other day, Ok?

S: Ok. Bye.

And Samrat cut the call.

G: Ye Samrat bhi na! Koi baat nahi. Use to me baad me mana lungi.

She left for call center.

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Here, Mayank was in his room and rearranging his clothes in the cup board, when he found Nupur's diary.

M: Nupur ko uski diary dena to bhul hi gaya. Abhi use de aata hu. Pehle use call karta hu.

He called her. "Hello, Nupur!"

N: Haan. Mayank. Bolo. Kya hua? Uncle ne kuchh kaha kya? Unhe pataya tumne? Maagr abhi uncle ghar aa gaye kya? Abhi to sirf 8:00 baje he na?

M: Relax Nupur. Ek bar saans to bhar lo. Parth sahi kehta he. Nupur masi bahot bolti he.

N: Mayank tum…

M: Haan, Nupur, bolo na?

But the call was disconnected.

Mayank tried to call her again, but it was switched off. "Arre, nupur to naraj ho gayi? Ab use manane jana hoga. He bhagvan, Please help me."

He leaves the room as it is, and goes to Nupur's place.

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Just in 5 minutes, Surash Sharma enters the house and the servant informs him that Mayank is back from trip. Suresh Sahrma doesn't stay to listen that he left in his car and goes to meet him in his room. He saw the room empty. The bed contained of his bag, clothes and a diary. He goes and takes the diary. He opens and saw Nupur's name on it.

SS: Nupur ki diary, ye Mayank ke paas kese ayi? Kahi Nupur bhi to unke sath hi nahi gayi thi?

Because of the questions in his mind, he opens the diary and reads everything about how Akhil had cheated on Nupur. He came to know about Mayank and Nupur's friendship, then Nupur's one sided feelings for Mayank, then about Mayank's calling her to meet him alone in park as he needs to say something. And he read that how excited she was about this thinking it as a date. Then how Akhil created misunderstandings for them, How her mom-dad took Parth with them leaving Nupur alone. And Nupur believed everything happened just because of her. She was the only guilty. Then how she felt that she had ruined Mayank' life. Then she wrote about their trip in which Samrat convinced her to join. How she felt after seeing Mayank after a long time. How they confessed their love. Then the moments they shared together. What happened in that haveli last day.

Finally, there was a paragraph, which touched Mayank's dad's heart.

"Diary, I really love Mayank. He is a very nice person. Uska dil bhi bahot saaf he. Koi aur hota to vo mera faida uthane ki koshish karta, he na? Magar Mayank vesa nahi he. Please diary… PLEASE pray for me. I hope ki Uncle mujhe maaf kar de. Me Mayank ke bina nahi jee paugi. Mayank se milne ke baad hi to mujhe pata chala he attraction, infactuation aur love ka difference kya hota he? Aur agar uncle mujhe maaf nab hi kare to bas itna jaroor karna ki vo Mayank ko galat na samjhe. Mayank bahot respect karta he unki, Aur unhe bahot pyar bhi karta he. I wish Uncle mere papa ke jese react na kare. Mumma aur papa ne to is kadar mujh se muh mod liya he ki jese mene koi crime kiya ho. Ek baar sirf phone kiya jane ke baad. Uske baad phone bhi nahi kiya. Parth bhi mujhe bhul gaya he. Meri life me khushi naam ki koi chiz hi nahi he? Gunjan bhi shadi ke baad America jane vali he. Agar Mayank aur mujhe bhi alag kar diya gaya to me nahi jee paugi Diary. I just hope ki agar esa ho to, Mayank mujhe bhul jaye. Aur vo khush rahe. Mujhe aur kuchh nahi chahiye, Kuchh bhi nahi."

"Bye diary. I love you. As you always help me pour down my heart. You are my best friend ever, Silent, sweet and So much helping. Take care. Good night…Only yours, (and Mayank's – Don't get jealou, ok?) Nupur…"

Suresh Sharma, the great businessman, wiped his eyes and put the diary on its place. He went in his room and kept thinking.

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Here, Gunjan reached to the call center in taxi. She saw that the other offices surrounding her call centers are already closed. She got a strange sense that something is not right. But still she went in the building. She reached the office and found it empty as well. Only one light was on, In Mr. Rathore's cabin.

She went towards it. "May I come in Sir?"

RV: Ya. Sure.

G: Sorry sir, I am late.

RV: It's ok. Better late than never.

In a swift movement, RV came to her and grabbed her by waist.

G: Sir, ye aap kya kar rahe ho? Leave me, otherwise I will shout.

RV: No, Gunjan, koi fark nahi he. Aaj public holiday he. So yaha ar hum dono ke alava koi nahi he, JAAN.

G: Mene kaha mujhe chhodo.

RV: Kyun? Timhe to compensate karna than a, 2 din nahi aa payi is liye. What better way than this?

Gunjan freed herself from his grip, slapped him tightly and ran out of office.

RV followed her. As Gunjan was out of the building, she looked for auto or taxi but she couldn't find any. Finally she noticed a car coming in that direction and sighed in relief.

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Mayank was just going to meet Nupur while he noticed someone familiar standing on road and asking for lift. He stopped at once. "GUNJAN? Tum yahan? Abhi kya hua?"

Just the Mayank notices RV some steps behind her and he opened the door for Gunjan. "Betho."

Gunjan obeyed him, and Mayank started the car.

After some time, Gunjan started crying.

Mayank got worried and stopped the car. "Kya hua? Gunjan? Bataogi bhi ya nahi? Please pehle tum rona bandh karo. Aur vo ladka kaun tha?"

Gunjan tells Mayank everything about her part time job, Samrat's will of leaving that job, but her oppose and the today's incident.

M: Koi baat nahi. Ab to tum thik ho na? Chalo, hum ghar chalte he.

G: Mujhe mere ghar nahi jana he.

M: Kyun? (Shocked)

G: Bas yu hi.

M: To mere sath chalogi?

G: Nahi. Me is waqt uncle ke samne nahi jaa paugi.

M: To phir kya krogi?

G: Umm… Nupur ya Sheena ke ghar jaugi. I need some friend.

Mayank could understand that she wanted her friend and that too a girl to cry her heart out. He took her with him to Nupur's place.

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Nupur heard the doorbell and was surprised to see Mayank there.

M: Hi. Nupur.

N: Mayank? Tum is waqt yaha?

G: Hi Nupur. (Coming from behind)

N: Gunjan? Tum… tum ro rahi thi?

G: Nahi to.

Gunjan went inside without further discussion.

Nupur looked at mayank questioningly.

M: Vo… she… she was crying. She needs someone right now. So please take care of her. Me jaa raha hu. Bye.

N: Bye.

M: Vese nupur…

N: Haan, Mayank?

M: Tum gussa ho mujh pe?

N: nahi to!!! Kyun?

M: Vo tumne phone cut kar diya tha aur phir switch off bhi to mujhe laga ki…

N: Arre, baba, phone me battery nahi thi is liye. Abhi charge ho gaya hoga. Don't worry. Aura b tum jao. Me Gunjan ke paas jati hu.

M: Ok. Bye.

Mayank kisses her cheek swiftly before leaving. And Nupur was stunned by this. She looked at him. He turned after reaching the car and winked at her. She smiled at him. And Mayank drove away to his house.

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Nupur went to Gunjan.

She was sitting staring at nothing.

N: Kya hua? Gunjan?

Gunjan sobbed. Nupur let her cry for some time, then made her quite and then Gunjan told him everything. "Ab me Samrat ke layak nahi rahi, nupur."

N: Nahi Gunja, esa kuchh nahi hota. Tumhare sath kuchh hua to nahi.

G: Lekin us RV ne…

N: Gunjan. Dekho, Samrat sir bahot understanding he. Vo tumhari baat jaroor samjeghe.

G: Magar.

N: Chup raho abhi.

And Nupur consoled her and tried to explain her.

After some time, Gunjan was ok and they both went to sleep.

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As Mayank reached home, he found his dad waiting for him. Mayank touched his feet. "Kese ho aap, Dad?"

SS: I am fine Son. How about you?

M: I am also fine. Umm.. Dad…

SS: Yes, son.

M: I wanted to talk to you.

SS: Han, son, bolo na?

M: Dad… vo actually…

SS: I know, Son. You and Nupur want to marry each other, Right?

M (Shocked): Ji, dad.

SS: Permission granted. Nupur se acchhi koi ladki tumhare liye ho hi nahi sakti he. Me kal hi uske papa aur maa ko phone kar ke baat karuga.

M: Sach?

SS: 100%. Any doubt?

M: Magar aap to…

SS: Haan. Ab tumhare dad me thodi akal aa hi gayi he. Kya kare? Ab koi option nahi he, tumhare paas. Ab job hi ho jaye tumhe Nupur se shadi karni hi hogi.

Mayank hugged his dad. "Thanks dad."

SS: Nahi Beta. It is a right decision. So no need of thanks. I just want my children to be happy. And that reminds me, Gunjan kesi he?

M: Thik he.

SS: Hmmm… Aur tumhari aur Nupur ki engagement next week me hogi, Sath me hi Gunjan aur Samrat ki engagement bhi hogi. Ok?

M: Haan, dad.

SS: Ab jao, jaa ke so jao. Kal se office aoge na?

M: Of course dad.

SS: Ok. Good night, son.

M: Good night dad.

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After Gunjan talked to him, Samrat was feeling weird. "Mujhe itni becheni kyun ho rahi he? Kahi kuchh galat to nahi hone wala?"

But after thinking for some time, he fell asleep.

So here ends the update...

Comment and criticize..
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Love,
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Posted: 15 years ago
I am damn happy to be the first one!

Is baar mayank gira? lol...usually its the other way around.....

Awww.....yaar mayank ke papa ka diary padhna toh aur bhi acha hai...

I love u for this behena.....

Aww......yeh gunjan toh bach gayi......

Wow......so engagement?

jaldi update karna yaar....

i LOVED the update!

Beautiful...

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
he it was wonderful update
Nupur ki diary Ss ne padi aur ro bhi diye
chalo ek bada sa problem solve ho gaya unka
ab jaldi se engagement wow
Samrat will understand the situation
ab please nupur ko bhi ye good news jaldi mile
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update shrey
i'm so happy myur engagment is nxt week woow
thnx 4 d pm lov
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome........
Amazing....
Lovely.........
It is too good.........
Continue soon..........
And thnks for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow loved it update sooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update dear!
gosh! that RV Gunjan part was a bit scary...
good that Mayank was able 2 save her in time...
Mayank's dad got 2 read the diary! how wonderful!
now he knows the truth n abt Nupur's innocence...
wow! MayUr n SaJan's engagement....can't wait...

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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful updt shreyaaaa
thank god mayank was there when gunji escaped
finally mayu's dad ko akal agayyy..lol
by reading nups diary
finally theyll be 2gether
but what will happen abt sajan??
im sure sam will understand!!...
great work!!
ok cont soon when u can
see yaaa
love uuu

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