It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10

Anila

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Posted: 15 years ago

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here angad is a self confessed nautanki'bazz... the way he sweetly blackmailed to kripa for doing math homework and then getting punishment from principal.... now at that time i had to think twice before sympathizing with this boy... but to keep kripa safe from punishment, he had to tell a lie... this act was a little surprising. matlab, is bachche mein achchey burey...sabhi gunn hein!😃

as gayatri can understand kids psychology in a right manner.... and at the other side she ignores the naughty behavior of angad as well as to sympathize with him, one reason behind this is that she had no son.... usually this happens when mothers don't have any boy, they usually like all the acts of boys and vice versa...

it is now getting very difficult to believe ke kaise angad ko apne every second childhood incident ki full details yaad hein... his memory is beyond belief, seriously!

but one thing that made me a little confused...in the 1^st part, angad called himself that he is still a drama king, mischief, badmaash etc etc, so basically a non serious, happy go lucky kind of a person, rite?!.... now don't know why but in this particular part... this narration did not seem to be according to his character..it seems that writer bheegi is in foreground... and her narrator gets lost in background.. lekin aisa mujhe laga bhai....

on a lighter note, U r writing too good which isn't required for the character.😉

Kripa

Angad Josh..

Naina..

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Sheetal

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Posted: 15 years ago

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grt part dii....angad is realliii sweett😛....i cant believe he remberz these eventz vividly😳....he got punishd........josh is a lozer🤢..........influenicnig angad to do bad😡😡.....hes going to anotha sch00l😕.....will we see less of ak then caz there in diff skools

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sameira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#233

hey bheegi awsome part.. conrtinue soon

thanks for the pm...

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How cure diiiii\!!! I seriously loved it. Poor Angad-he's such a sweetheart and Kripa-GOD! She should have said something in the office. A transfer just for cheating? WOah. But thats a good twist. Angad's 28? He's recalling all this? Wow. LOL I have a feeling Suryaban is going to be a huge obstacle between AK.
Update soon and please PM me.

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Kanu K

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Posted: 15 years ago

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i love the emoticons at the very beginning 😃

and I can see our very mature angad in making, the sensitive angad.

so much care and concern for kripa when he banged his fist against the wall and the warmth he felt from the hurt as a compensation for him hurting kripa .

to save her, he made her hate him more and more

Awesome Big D .....

Kanu K

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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thanks...

@mittal.....AK are still kids, it will take time for them to realize their true feelings

@angullgrl...thanks dear. I try my best to write something new each time

@monu....yeah angad is realizing that each time he hurts kripa, he hurts himself even more

@susan....well u will have to read the whole story to find out :)

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A&K_4Evr-S

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Posted: 15 years ago

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cuteee story .. i like it cauz its different..something i could expect from u :D
ur an awsome writeerrr .. nxt time i have essays..ur going to have to "help" me lol
o no im acting ilke angad :|
but he is cute and nice..but being a boy that's not right lol nice is wrong and bad/"tough" is right.
kripa is cute .. but why didnt she say anything wen angad told a lie abt his blackmailing her??
aww poor angad hurt his hand .. i wanted to kissie it lol
cont reall soon i just love this ff plzzzzzzzz :( liek u use to every other day or every day :d hehe .. with a cherry on top.. for ur readers lol

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Kiran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#238

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awesommmme part diii
angad is soo shweet
he protected kripaa nd got in more troiublee
dont send him to anothr skool away from krpaa

contineu sooooon

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bheegi

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Originally posted by: bhavana2692
wow sangeeta di!gr8 update!🤗
Angad is truly sensitive, & being a exteriorly-tough boy & having parents who don't realize the reason 4 his behaviour doesn't help either....glad that he found a bit of solace in Gayathri!
poor lad, he's kinda messed up his life now...but his covering up 4 Kripa was so sweet!that does show how much he cares 4 his close ones[OMG!it took him 28 yrs 2 realize the fact!😲]
this Josh is very much annoying, & Angad's anger on him is totally rightful!😡i feel sad seeing Angad's inability 2 give him a piece of his mind due 2 an already bad reputation😒, hope he does someday!
Continue soon....

Bhavana

thanks Bhavana- yes, every kid needs one person like Gayatri in their lives who can recognize their true potential😊 but now he has lost gayatri's confidence because of this incident- let's see if he will ever regain her trust again😕 Josh is clever- it will take angad time to really get out of josh's influence

[quote=spvd]oh i feel sorry for angad....................though hes very naughty and a bully but still the transfer to the other school is big for a punishment................and once again in this part too i hate angad from kripa..........josh is smart..............hes a real threat to angad in the future days................cont soon dear..................

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thanks Deepa! Yeah, angad is def getting the rough end of the punishment here....let's see if it turns out to be a blessing in disguise😊 Josh is def very clever here but not sure if he is really that bad

[quote=sabzz]cuteeee angad !!

when r they going to grow upppp ???

continue soonnn[/quote]

gradually they will😊

[quote=bhuvana3]awwwwwwwwwww felt very sad after reading this update.. I feel so bad for Angad.. Hes such a darling.. n poor Kripa.. nasty little Josh !!

I like it how Gayatri understands Angad so well.

I enjoyed the update n thanks for the pm.[/quote]

thanks bhuvana. Yes, gayatri is def his guardian angel😊

[quote=love_kyph]awesum update di thnx 4 d pm
gayatri was so sweet 2 angad 😊
felt bad 4 angad 😭 bt den again it was his fault
waitin 4 AK 2 grow up
cont soon..[/quote]

thanks dear! Yes, angad is learning the lessons of life the hard way😭 They will grow up as the story progresses

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bheegi

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#240

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

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My parents had not only grounded me from fun, they had also rationed their display of affection towards their mischievous son. The moment Gayatri aunty kissed me; I knew that when I grew up, I would never stop kissing my kids even if they were the worst kids in the world. [/Quote]

too true! So many parents make that mistake

😔'.Love Gayatri's character, and adore Angad, just wanted to scoop him up and give him a looooong tight hug.

thanks sea nyx...yes a lot of parents make that mistake. What a hug and kiss can do for them, noamout of material gratification can do for kids...a reality parents sometimes forget is this fast paced world😕

[quote=annu127]

here angad is a self confessed nautanki'bazz... the way he sweetly blackmailed to kripa for doing math homework and then getting punishment from principal.... now at that time i had to think twice before sympathizing with this boy... but to keep kripa safe from punishment, he had to tell a lie... this act was a little surprising. matlab, is bachche mein achchey burey...sabhi gunn hein!😃

as gayatri can understand kids psychology in a right manner.... and at the other side she ignores the naughty behavior of angad as well as to sympathize with him, one reason behind this is that she had no son.... usually this happens when mothers don't have any boy, they usually like all the acts of boys and vice versa...

it is now getting very difficult to believe ke kaise angad ko apne every second childhood incident ki full details yaad hein... his memory is beyond belief, seriously!

but one thing that made me a little confused...in the 1^st part, angad called himself that he is still a drama king, mischief, badmaash etc etc, so basically a non serious, happy go lucky kind of a person, rite?!.... now don't know why but in this particular part... this narration did not seem to be according to his character..it seems that writer bheegi is in foreground... and her narrator gets lost in background.. lekin aisa mujhe laga bhai....

on a lighter note, U r writing too good which isn't required for the character.😉

Kripa

Angad Josh..

Naina..

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Thanks Annu! UR cartoons are def a big hit everywhere👏👏

well, yes, angad is a happy go lucky kid on the outside but as gayatri said- he is a sensitive kid on the inside. That's what this part highlighted. Kids are more complex than they look.
Angad recalls the more important events of his life- events that changed things for him drastically. Of course, if u read books about kids narrating their childhood events, u have to give the writer that freedom to narrate things in more detail. How do we know that Angad did not maintain a diary of all these life changing events😉

[quote=angad-kripa#1]How cure diiiii\!!! I seriously loved it. Poor Angad-he's such a sweetheart and Kripa-GOD! She should have said something in the office. A transfer just for cheating? WOah. But thats a good twist. Angad's 28? He's recalling all this? Wow. LOL I have a feeling Suryaban is going to be a huge obstacle between AK.
Update soon and please PM me.

Love,

~Jot~

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thanks Jot! Kripa was too young and too scared to have opened her mouth in defense of angad....wait and see if later she realizes her mistake😭 Yes, this story is angad's POV...u will know later how and why he is recalling all this. surya is always a pain in my ffs😆

[quote=kehanT]i love the emoticons at the very beginning 😃

and I can see our very mature angad in making, the sensitive angad.

so much care and concern for kripa when he banged his fist against the wall and the warmth he felt from the hurt as a compensation for him hurting kripa .

to save her, he made her hate him more and more

Awesome Big D .....

Kanu K[/quote]

Thanks kanu! Angad will def face more hurdles in his life and that's what is going to make him the man one day he will become😃
yeah...kaisa yeh pyar hai angad??😃

[quote=ak-forevers]cuteee story .. i like it cauz its different..something i could expect from u :D
ur an awsome writeerrr .. nxt time i have essays..ur going to have to "help" me lol
o no im acting ilke angad :|
but he is cute and nice..but being a boy that's not right lol nice is wrong and bad/"tough" is right.
kripa is cute .. but why didnt she say anything wen angad told a lie abt his blackmailing her??
aww poor angad hurt his hand .. i wanted to kissie it lol
cont reall soon i just love this ff plzzzzzzzz :( liek u use to every other day or every day :d hehe .. with a cherry on top.. for ur readers lol

[/quote]

thanks sahr! Yeah, try my best to write something new. If it doesn't interest me, then i know even the readers will get bored of the same old stuff😃 Oh, i am sure u are good at essays as u are growing up in the US-most kids from here have great writing skills. My 6th grade daughter makes fun of my grammer😆 Kripa was too young and too scared to defend angad at that time...but wait and seeif she realizes her folly😕
I can't update every other day now...sorry😭 just too busy with life now

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