It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10

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Kiran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#251

updated my comment on pg 33

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NadiaZ

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Posted: 15 years ago

#252

poor angad i feel so sorry for him😭
please cont soon i can't wait for their college days lol
btw thanks for the pm

Edited by angadkripa_fan - 15 years ago

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: Smilesx3
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awesommmme part diii
angad is soo shweet
he protected kripaa nd got in more troiublee
dont send him to anothr skool away from krpaa

contineu sooooon

thanks Kiran. maybe going to the other school will help angad in some way😉

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: angadkripa_fan
poor angad i feel so sorry for him😭
please cont soon i can't wait for their college days lol
btw thanks for the pm

thanks dear...wo bhi aayenge😃

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Jannat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: bheegi

I agree 100%. Annu always adds the flavor to my ffs😊

oh yeaa. I remember those poetry. i remember thinking that they were great and soo touching, but I never thought that was you. See, you always do great whether poetry or cartoons👏👏. Adding flavor to Bheegi's already spicy FF's😆😳
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BingoLoser

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Posted: 15 years ago

#256

uni is going well....im on holidays and ive finished all my work...so just chilling now lol...thanks for asking...hows ur life?:D
btw i hate it when parents talk abt who their children shud marry whether its serious or just a joke...coz it really influences the childs thoughts :/
angad is too smart for his age:P i feel sorry for him tho:(
awww angad had a sleepless night the first sign of love:P
awww angad is hurting himself :(
haha u are weird that was cute :P
aww i bet it hurt kripa to see angads bleeding hand i ebt she told her mum :P
aww thats so cutee hes so little and alredy thinking abt his kids lmaooo
yay he can trust kripa now:)
i dnt like josh :@
lol angad will be a great dad :D usually when ur parents treat u bad it makes u realize how u wanna treat ur own kids!
haha anita is cuteee:P
yay kripa agreed:D
aww i wanted them to do huggie kissie :(
ill be a psychology major soon :P:P
aww angad is getting better at controlling anger :P
josh is such a twat :@
hope kripa hates him :@
haha usually when a guy likes a girl his response is usually the opposite lol
why is josh advising angad???
whats poha :O
angads mum doesnt know him at all :| his aunty knows him betterrr
aww angad trying to be a hero hahaha :P
kripa is too innocent :P
hahaha angad deserved to get caught :D
aww i like optimists :P
poor kripa thooo :(:(:(
but i guess all this is good coz the more kripa gets hurt the more angad starts caring for her
so its all good :P
aww angad lied to kripa thats so sweet :D:D
awww now angad will be away frm kripa:(
cont soooon

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Pearlz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#257

will comment wen i come b@ck from school

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Pearlz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#258

@annu127: gre@@t c@rtoonz...the @ng@d 1 iz cute

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bheegi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12
uni is going well....im on holidays and ive finished all my work...so just chilling now lol...thanks for asking...hows ur life?:D
btw i hate it when parents talk abt who their children shud marry whether its serious or just a joke...coz it really influences the childs thoughts :/
angad is too smart for his age:P i feel sorry for him tho:(
awww angad had a sleepless night the first sign of love:P
awww angad is hurting himself :(
haha u are weird that was cute :P
aww i bet it hurt kripa to see angads bleeding hand i ebt she told her mum :P
aww thats so cutee hes so little and alredy thinking abt his kids lmaooo
yay he can trust kripa now:)
i dnt like josh :@
lol angad will be a great dad :D usually when ur parents treat u bad it makes u realize how u wanna treat ur own kids!
haha anita is cuteee:P
yay kripa agreed:D
aww i wanted them to do huggie kissie :(
ill be a psychology major soon :P:P
aww angad is getting better at controlling anger :P
josh is such a twat :@
hope kripa hates him :@
haha usually when a guy likes a girl his response is usually the opposite lol
why is josh advising angad???
whats poha :O
angads mum doesnt know him at all :| his aunty knows him betterrr
aww angad trying to be a hero hahaha :P
kripa is too innocent :P
hahaha angad deserved to get caught :D
aww i like optimists :P
poor kripa thooo :(:(:(
but i guess all this is good coz the more kripa gets hurt the more angad starts caring for her
so its all good :P
aww angad lied to kripa thats so sweet :D:D
awww now angad will be away frm kripa:(
cont soooon

thanks hinna. Yes,u will be a psychology major soon too👏 I am fine...same old same old😆
Yeah,parents do a lot of things that kids don't like. Unless, parents talk to kids, kids sometimes never tell tell them about it. So, yeah it's important to talk to kids and also understand who ur kid really is- not expect them to be someone they are not😕. yeah, kripa is very innocent and right now doesn't understand what angad had done for her😭 Hope she will one day...wait and see

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Jannat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#260

Hey Api

How? How do you do it every single time? Again, your portrayed Angad's soo well. His thoughts, feelings, anger, and actions was so superbly done by you. I can actually visualize what's going on in that ten year old mind. Maybe because you have your own kids, you know how a child will think at various stages. My comments won't do justice to your writing.

The part was simply amazing.

Aww..I feel so bad for Angad..even his dad did not stand up for him. LOL, he punched wallls..my brother still does that out of anger and he's 20.

This line was soo awesome. Because of Kripa he was mad and she comes and stops him. I can't explain it correctly but this line is great.
"ANGAD!" Your voice at my door interrupted my madness.

I can totally relate to this:
Every kid goes through a moment like this in their life when they think the whole world hates them, that everyone is against them, that they are the worst kid in the world.

Gayatri is such a sweet lady. She knows how to raise a angry child's feelings.I think every mother should be more like her. Loving their child no matter what they do and raise their spirit.

Ths is sooo touching:
I knew that when I grew up, I would never stop kissing my kids even if they were the worst kids in the world.

Atleast Kripa feels something for Angad which I did not think after reading the previous parts except I hate Angad..lol
I don't know what you were thinking with those big brown eyes of yours, but now when I think back, why do I think that you were genuinely worried about me?

This is the one thing no one should ever do. I remember once when my mom insulted me in front of my friends, I was so embarrassed that I wish there was a hole in the ground and swallow me whole.
Another thing I promised to remember for my kids when I was a grownup- never insult them in front of their friends! It hurts'.really hurts, more than any wound on your body.

The way you are building up Josh's character and him provoking Angad to recompensate for the basketball lessons, I am thinking he might be another rival for Kripa's affectations. I think it's Josh here instead of Prithvi.

LMAOO..this line was funny
Me- a sensitive boy? A sissy? Naa! Gayatri aunty did not know me that well after all.

This line was great showing how Kripa felt..more hurt from the accusation of cheating rather than the physical pain of the bloody nose
I had let you down once again, hurt your feelings rather than your body this time.

Aww..Angad took all the blame on himself to reinstate Kripa's self respect. He is soo sweet. He does have a soft side to him.

After all the punishment from his parents, Angad hopes were raised by Gayatri Aunty. I hope she doesnt hate him now.
Gayatri aunty was visibly hurt. I am sure she had not expected that from the boy she had so compassionately helped just a few days ago.

It was an superb part. With this part, you have passed on a mother and son lesson. What each parent should never forget to do to their own child.

And everyone can relate to this FF as I am sure everyone has maybe once been through this as a child.

Continue Soon
Jannat