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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: sana866
awesome update
excellent

thanks for liking my post and i will update the next part soon

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#142

Originally posted by: sanju_veni
hey really nice ff
plz add me to ur pm list as i dnt want to miss any of ur updates

thanks a lot dear for liking it and i will try to pm u if i can as i am not an active member so it becomes difficult for me to pm anyone...but i will try

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

heyy tht was cool plzz contuied soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

hey
nice update
cont soon
loved mayur part

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Shafoo
heyy tht was cool plzz contuied soon

hi! thanks.....i will continue soon.

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#146

Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j
hey
nice update
cont soon
loved mayur part

hi! thanks a lot for liking the mayur part....i will continue soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

awesome man but pls update a big part next time arushi
plsssssssss
plsssssssss

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Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: ekts
awesome man but pls update a big part next time arushi
plsssssssss
plsssssssss

thanks.....and ya sure i will try to post the next part longer

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#149

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya
yup plz cont. soon..........

i will continue soon dear

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#150

part 16

it was 6;30 p.m in the evening and the party was going to start at 8 o'clock.

nupur was sweating badly as she was locked at the trial room for many hours.so mayank bought a glass of water for her.

mayank-'tum thik toh hona nupur'

nupur-'hmm...main...main thik hoon.'she continued-'voh darwaza...use kisine bahar seh band kiya tha'

the whole gang together-'kya???'

nupur-'haan....mujhe kisine bahar seh band kiya tha'

mayank-'par jab main vaha aaya tha tab toh voh phas gaya tha bahar seh band toh nahi tha'

nupur-'asa kaise ho sakta hain...mujhe yaad hain ki darwaze ka lock toh sahi tha par beech mein mujhe darwaze ki kundi band hone ki aawaz aayi aur tabhi main chilaye aur voh darwaza lock tha'

gunjan-'yeh toh bohut ajeeb baat hain?'

suhaani-'tum abhi thoda rest karlo phir thodi der baad party keh liye ready ho jana thike'

nupur-'thike'

mayank-'main nupur keh paas rukta hoon tab tak tum log apne kamro mein rest karlo'

samrat-'thike bhai'

and they all went from there only mayank and nupur were left in the room.

nupur was still sweating then mayank holds her hand from his one hand and cares her hair with his other hand and caressing her cheeks he said-'tum pareshan mat ho....main hamesha tumahre saat hoon'

nupur-'thanks mayank'

they both smiled at each other.

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gunjan went inside the washroom for changing her dress and screamed loudly.

nobody was in her room as suhaani was in downstaires and just that time samrat heard her shout as he was walking in front of her room so he runs hurriedly and found gunjan sitting against a dead body and this time it was not a murder as she was dead.it was priya gunjan and suhaani's room-mate.

samrat-'gunjan utho...sambhalo apne aap ko'

gunjan was shivering-'yeh...yeh toh mar chuki hai samrat....ab kya hoga'

samrat holds gunjan and supports her to stand.

samrat-'main mam aur sir ko bula lata hoon'

just then dia and benji and the whole acadamy gathered over the washroom.

dia-'oh my god...she is dead...uske moo seh fog nikal raha hai'

benji-'asa lagta hain ki iska gala dabaker isko mara gaya hai kyoki iski gale par ungliyon ke nishaan hai....ab hume police ko batana he hoga'

benji hurriedly called police and the police force was gathered over there.

police-'aapne hume in sabke baare mein pehle kyon nahi bataya?'

benji told him the whole incident that have started from the first day.

police-'ab yeh sab aap humpeh chod dijiye....hum us khooni ko pakad keh rahenge.....aap sab is kamre seh jaa sakte sivaye is kamre mein is ladki ke saath rehne wale.

gunjan and suhaani stands over there while the rest leaves the room.

police-'aap dono ka naam?'

gunjan-'ji mera naam gunjan hai'

suhaani-'mera naam suhaani hai'

police-'toh miss gunjan mujhe yeh bataye ki kya aapne sabse pehle miss priya ki laash dekhi?'

gunjan-'jee'

police-'hmm....aur aap miss suhaani aap us samay kaha thi?'

suhaani-'jee main toh niche dance room mein benji sir aur dia mam keh paas gayi thi'

police-'acha...toh miss gunjan kya aap hume bata sakti hain ki aap neh kisi koh dekha is laash keh sivaye'

gunjan-'jee nahi'

police-'hmm....thike aap sab sawdhani seh rahe aur ab seh hamare police har taraf is dance acadamy mein rahenge...hum chalte hain.'

gunjan and suhaani came out of the room and samrat asked-'kya hua?tum dono ko kyo bulaya gaya tha'

gunjan-'voh police humse pooch tach karna chahte the'

suhaani-'mayank nupur kaha hain?'

mayank-'voh apne kamre mein soh rahe hain bohut mushkil seh sohe hain agar use ab is sabke baare mein pata chalta toh voh aur pareshan ho jaati'

samrat-'bhai...kuch thik nahi lag raha hai....ek baar nupur ke kamre mein dekh kar aaye'

mayank-'thike chalo'

they all went to nupur's room and found that nupur was not there in her bed and her room's window was open.

they all were left shocked...

to be continued..................................................

hi guys!from day after tomorrow my school is re-opening so that is why i could not be able to post everyday but still i will try to post at least 2 parts in ever week.i hope u understand.comments/critisize r requied.i shall be waiting....😊

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