FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END

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Ultrachic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ekts

awesome udate loved it n also loved the confession pls post the next part soon will b waiting for next part

thanks a lot for liking it and i am happy that u liked the confession and i will update the next part very soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was cool i really like it

thanks for liking it and i will update the next update soon.

Edited by happylite - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

happy new year 2010 to all of u......

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

part 15

the next morning everyone were practicing with great enthusiasm and suhaani was also practicing as she was alright now.

just then dia came and announces-'hi guys and gals! aaj bohut dino baad humare acadamy mein khushiyan aayi hai isliye maine aur aapke benji sir yeh decide kiya hai ki aaj shaam ek party hogi.the theme is black and red.have a great fun today aur aaj keh liye no more practice'

all of them started screaming with joy and nupur decided to go for shopping with gunjan and suhaani.

gunjan-'nupur mujhe nahi jana mera mood nahi ho raha!'

nupur started acting like she is sad-'kyo gunjan chal na mere paas koi latest red colour dress nahi hai isliye mujhe jana hai aur agar tu nahi jayege toh mein bhi nahi jaongi'

suhaani-'chal na gunjan aaj practice nahi ho rahi hai isliye we can go for shopping'

samrat and mayank together-'haan chalo na gunjan'

nupur-'tum dono ko kaun le jaa raha hai??'

mayank-'kyo hum nahi chal sakte?humare paas bhi black colour ki branded shirt nahi hai isliye hum bhi jayenge'

nupur-'bilkul nahi aaj hum girls akele hang out karenge samjhe'

samrat-'soch lo nupur agar mai nahi gaya toh gunjan bhi nahi jayegi aur agar gunjan nahi gaye toh tum bhi nahi jaogi aur agar tum nahi gaye toh.....'

just then nupur interruped-'bas bas sun li tumahri history ab chale'

mayank-'matlab hum bhi'

nupur acted like she is angry and said-'haan tum dono bhi'

all of them started laughing.

then they all went for shopping.nupur was choosing each and every dress for buying whereas suhaani was buying purses and jwellries and on the other side gunjan was confused which dress to buy.just then samrat came from behind and gunjan shows him one by one dress by holding a different type of red suit below the mirror and samrat was rejecting all the dresses then finally he chooses one and told her to buy that one.

on the other side mayank was looking at nupur's innocent attitude as she was choosing every dress so he comes close to her and asks-'nupur...aaj party mein saare dresses pehnne ka irada hai kya?'

nupur-'ohho! mayank tum nahi jaante ho ki ladkiyon ko kitni shopping karni hote hai ab hato aur mujhe trial room mein jane do'

mayank with a naughty smile-'main bhi chalo'

nupur lookes at him by moving her one eyebrow up.

mayank-'relax! mazak kar raha tha'

nupur gives a cute smile and says-'vaise ana chaho toh aa sakte ho'

mayank-'kyaaaaaaa???'

nupur-'mazak tha'and she went from there laughing.

mayank raises his hand is his hair.

on the other side suhaani has completed her shopping.

it was the closing time of the mall and everyone were out of the mall except nupur.mayank looks here and there then he asks to gunjan-'suno! tumne nupur ko dekha?'

gunjan-'voh toh tumahre saat he thi! kaha hai?'

the whole gang becomes very tensionised and started searching for nupur then suddenly mayank realises and said-'oh no maine nupur ko aakhri time trial room jate dekha tha kahi voh vaha phas toh nahi gaye'

suhaani-'ho sakta hai....ab kya kare?'

mayank founds a small enterance inside the mall and he went inside

samrat-'bhai kaha jaa rahe ho?'

mayank-'nupur ko leh aa raha hoon'

mayank starts searching for the trial room and suddenly he heards a scream it was nupur.

mayank went there and heards nupur saying-'yeh....yeh darwaze ka lock kharab ho gaya hai ise kholna hoga'

mayank-'china mat karo nupur main abhi ise kholta hoon

mayank break opens the door and nupur hugged him tightly.

mayank-'chalo nupur'

just then mayank founds nupur legs is bleeding from side'

mayank-'arae tumahre paer mein soh toh khoon nikal raha hai'

although mayank has a phobia from blood but this time he was strong as his love has got hurt so he tooks a hankerchief from her pocket and ties it in her leg and lifts her up in his arms.nupur was looking at mayank and was thinking-'mayank mujhse kitna pyaar karta hai...voh kitna achha hai'

mayank was looking at her every now and then.after sometime they both were out from the mall and gunjan asks-'mayank tum nupur koh is tarah! kya hua nupur tum thik toh ho?'

mayank keeps her down and says to gunjan-'haan gunjan nupur keh paer mein chot lag gaye thi magar ab voh thike hai hena nupur'

nupur-'hmmm'

suhaani-'thank god tum thik ho mujhe tumahri bohut chinta ho rahe thi'

samrat-'chalo ab acadamy chalte hai'

and they all went back to acadamy.

to be continued......................................................

i hope u all liked it especially the mayur part......😉

comments /critisize r required.......😆

i shall be eagerly waiting for it..........😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

#135

awesomee update... it ws fab..
luved it...
n pllzzz continue soon...!!!

love
jyotika

Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago

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Ultrachic

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20
awesomee update... it ws fab..
luved it...
n pllzzz continue soon...!!!

love
jyotika

thanks for liking it and i will update the next part very soon.

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Ultrachic

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: lucario
Really nice part....continue soon

thanks for appreciating it and i will update the next part very soon.

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Awwsome update Sweety

Loved it

Mayur were soo cute loved them

do continue soon....................

Happy New Year

Luv

Nidzy

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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Ultrachic

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: mayurarti
Awwsome update Sweety

Loved it

Mayur were soo cute loved them

do continue soon....................

Happy New Year

Luv

Nidzy