FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
part 14
it was 6:30 in the evening and samrat was constantly looking at the clock strucked at the wall of his room and just then mayank entered so he asks samrat-'is tarah ghadi koh kya dekh rahe ho?kahi jana hai?'
samrat-'mujhe haan main sath baje gunjan ke sath pani puri khane jaonga'
mayank-'pani puri! mazak kar rahe ho tum toh pani puri khana hate karte ho'
samrat-'shhhhhh......dhera bolo bhai agar gunjan ne sun liye toh.....vaise tum kaha gaye the?'
mayank-'main......main voh nupur keh sath film dekhne gaya tha'
samrat-'bhai tum aur film....yeh toh mere pani puri seh bhi bada nikla'
mayank-'arae yaar pyaar mein sab karna padtha hai'
samrat-'haan bhai pyaar chiz he ase hoti hai'
mayank-'toh tu aaj gunjan ko apni dil ki baat batane ke bahane pani puri khane jaa raha hai?'
samrat-'haan bhai tumne sahi kaha'
mayank-'all the best ab jaa kyoki saath baj rahe hai'
samrat-'kya saath baj gaye....oh no bye bhai'and he runs towards gunjan's room and knocked at the door.just then gunjan opened the door and samrat was lost in her beauty.she was wearing white embroidary work suit with white heals and was wearing a braclet and has left her hair tied with an hair clip and was wearing white round shaped earing.she was looking very beautiful.
samrat was falling at gunjan and she gets surprised and holds her and asks-'kya hua samrat?tum thik toh ho'
samrat-'nahi....aaj main bilkul thik nahi hoon kyoki aaj maine ase beauty dekh le hai jo aaj chand seh bhi sundar lag raha....asa lag raha jaise koi angel aaj is dharti peh aa chuki hai'
gunjan started blushing and says her-'thankyou samrat ab chale'
samrat-'chalo'
they both went to pani puri chaat corner and gunjan starts eating and was continously talking to samrat but he was only looking at her and was not eating a single pani puri.
gunjan-'yeh lo tum bhi khao'and she fills samrat's mouth with a pani puri and samrat's face becomes paled as he hates pani puri and gunjan notices that so she asks-'kya hua...pani puri pasand nahi hai'
samrat-'nahi gunjan....mera pani puri favourite hai'
gunjan-'acha toh khao'
samrat-'haan'and samrat starts eating one after the other without feeling the taste and looking at gunjan
then then went to a garden and samrat sits at his kneels and gunjan starts looking at him surprised
samrat-'main aaj tumse voh kehne wala hoon jo main dance acadamy keh first din he kehna chahta tha magar kehne ki himmat nahi hue par aaj main tumse voh kehna chahta hoon i like u gunjan.i like u very much.main tumahre bina nahi jee sakta...kya tum mujhe apne life ka hissa banana chahogi?'
gunjan was left shocked but after sometime she smiled and nodes her head and said-i like u too samrat.main bhi tumhe bohut pasand karti hoon halaki pehle din mujhe tumpeh bohut gussa aya tha par dhera dhera main tumhe chahne lage.haan main tumahri life ka hissa banna chahongi'
and then samrat gets up and and hugged gunjan tightly in his arms and it started raining.
they both started running towards the acadamy but were completely wet and samrat holds her hand and comes too close to her and kissed her.gunjan felt a new experience and kissed him back.they continued it until gunjan's realises and she gently pushes samrat aside and started blushing and samrat started smiling......😳
to be continued.....................................................
i hope u all liked.comments/critisize r required.i shall be waiting😊
Edited by happylite - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
beautiful update...
soo finally sajan confessed... i'm soo happyyy..!!
it ws awesome.. fabulous... mindblowing.. outstanding..!!
luved it....
keep it up...
n plzzzzzz continue soon..

luv
jyotika
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it gal.......u rock......
sajan confession was beautifully written........
cud imagine der kiss.........
do cont soon........
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Posted: 15 years ago
sajanroxx20 -thanks a lot for liking sajan's part.i will continue soon.
sana866 -thankyou for your awesome compliments..i will continue soon.
lucario -thankyou very much..i will continue soon.
AttractiveAdya -thankyou for liking sajan's confession..i will continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice romantic update.Please write next part soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
cont soon
mayur parts plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome udate loved it n also loved the confession pls post the next part soon will b waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was cool i really like it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kris97

Nice romantic update.Please write next part soon.

thanks a lot for liking it and i will update very soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: t-mayur-sajan-j

nice update
cont soon
mayur parts plz

thanks a lot for liking it and u will be happy to know that a romantic part is coming for mayur too and i will update very soon.

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