Hi
I have read your first fic SIRF TUM ... HUMESHA.
Its fabulous. You write a wonderful fic.
You have involved each character so beautifully that I cant describe.
Mujhe ton laga tha ki Yudi, Ali is fic mei honge hi nahin but though just for a short span of time you have involved them. Its really nice.
Mujhe ton laga tha ki Huda ka role shru mei hi jab break up hua tab end ho jaega.
But the way you showed his back up is really superb.
Raj Naina Alekh Naveen Abhi sabka character bilkul different and outstanding specially Rajveer ( Nodoubts)
8 years se 24 years tak you have involved each and every vital phase of life.
I guess aaj se pehle kisi ne aisa nahin likha hoga.
Ye bilkul different tha aur no doubt acha bhi.
8 yrs ka Rajveer is so cuute...
Rajveer is so bad in starting.
Vo Naina ko kitna hurt karta hai na.
Naina is so innocent.
Huda kabhi positive ho hi nahin sakta.
I just have started imaging it in real in starting jab 8 years ka Rajveer bechara chill raha hota hai.
Naina is so cute... Rubber Bands, ponny tail... apna bachpan yaad aagaya.
Sach mei yaar kitne bindaas sin hua karte the.
Alekh ki kya set entry dikhayi hai.
Vaise aate hi usne Naina ke dil ka haal samajh lia aur use apni behan bana lia.
Aur vahan Rajveer ke dil ka haal bhi vo ache se samajh gaya aur uski Naina ko uske lie chod dia.
Rajveer ki vo line set thi MERI NAINA SE DUR RAHO.
Rajveer ki ton jaan nikal gayi hogi jab usne Naina ko ceiling ke neeche khada dekha hoga.
Chalo its good ki der se hi sahi Naina ko pata ton laga ki Rajveer ne uske baal intentionally nahin kaate the.
It was just an accident.
Naina change ho gayi.:(
Naina ke itne sundar hairs cut ho gaye .
Its ok hairs uski jaan se thodi na jyada pyare hai.
Naina ko bhi kabhi kabar thoda dress up ho jana chahiye.
Specially jab vo kisi aur ke saath date par jaye .
Isse Rajveer aur ache se jealous hoga.
Vaise ye choti moti ladhaiyan jhagado mei apna hi interest hota hai.
Ye choti moti chedkhani; ek dusre ki leg pulling... in sab ka bachpan mei apna hi maza hota hai.
Aur vaise bhi inki story ton ek dum dreams vali story hai ki bachpan ka pyaar humesha saath.
Dadu bhi kya mast dikhaye hai.
Vaise aise hi Dadu hone chahiye sab ke jo ki khud hi apni poti ko love marriage ki advice dete ho.
Acha hua Huda ne vo hole mei Rajveer ko phenk dia.
Isi bahane Naina aur Rajveer kareeb ton aaye.
Jab tak dono ka confession nahin ho jata dono insecure ton rahenge.
Nakli Boyfriend. Rajveer ke mann mei ton ladoo fut rahe honge.
Upar se ton Naina ko show kar raha hai ki use ye sab karne mei kitni dikkat ho rahi hai but andar hi andar ladoo fut rahe honge.
Ab Rajveer jaisa teacher hai ton studies mei dhyan kiska lagega.
Rajveer hi har saal Naina ko notes deta tha chupke chupate.
Vaise Rajveer itna bura bhi nahi hai.
He is really sweett...
Vo Naina ko kitni help karta hai. Aur Naina hai ki uski aur apni feelings ko samajh hi nahin pa rahi.
Rajveer ne Naina ka naya naam 'NAIN' bahut pyara rakha hai.
Naina ki aankhen hi sabse sundar hai aur use ye naam bahut suit karta hai.
Ye fic thodi jaldi end ho gayi.
Mujhe ton laga tha ki kam se kam 2 threads ton honge fic mei vo bhi 120 pages ke above ahr thread mei but ye ton bahut choti fic nikli. :( :(
Rajveer itna pyar karta hai apni Nain se ki use lagta hai ki usse dur jane de raha hai.
She will come back.
Are usne bina dekhe hi Rajveer ki diary le li.
WOw!!!!! Eventually RN became one.
Naina ko ton vapis aana hi tha.
Airport scene... bilkul different.
Ajtak meine jitni bhi fics padhi hai unmei se kisi mei bhi aisi ending nahin thi.
Really an awesome, outstanding Fic.
😊😊
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