Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4

Heya friends...I'm here with another RN fic!!!

It's non- LRL but...

Aap sabko ye shikayat rehti thi naa ki main Naina ko bahot rulati hoon aur Rajveer ko hamesha gayab rakhti hoon!

Toh lo !! ab issmein Rajveer pehle hi update mein hain...infact....pehli hi line se !!!

Toh here i post my update...

Hope you people enjoy...

Agar tumhe achcha nahi lage toh bhi bata dena...

I'll continue it, if you people like.

INDEX :

 

Pt. 1  - - pg.1

Pt.2 - - pg. 4

Pt.3 - - pg.7

Pt.4 -- pg.15

Pt.5 -- pg.23

Pt.6 -- pg.29

Pt.7 -- pg.38

Pt.8 -- pg.44

Pt.9 --pg.51

Pt.10 -- pg.60

Pt.11 -- pg.66

Pt.12 -- pg.70

Pt.13 -- pg.75

 

 

"Let me out! Please Mujhe bahaar nikalo!!Pleaseeeeee...." screamed a terrified eight year old Rajveer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rajveer jumped with excitement and started running to find a place to hide.

 

He saw a old store room near his house. He wondered whether he should go inside or not ..... but then he didn't care because it would make a great hiding place he thought!!

 

 Rajveer hid for a while and then he heard Huda's and Shantanu's voices. He wondered what was going on and then he heard a noise.

 

"I hope tumhe waha bahot mazaa aaraha hoga Rajveer!", Huda said giving out a evil laugh!

'What?' thought Raj.

 

He tried to push open the door but it wouldn't budge. He felt trap and started to gasp for air.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shantanu began to laugh.

 

 

 

 

Raj stood up and banged his fists against the door.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He heard the noise of wood sliding and the door suddenly opened.

 

 Just as he saw light coming he pushed his way out. He bent over and began breathing fast because he almost ran out of air when he was inside the Store room.

 

 Then a pair of Crocs sandles came into his view.

 

When he looked up he saw a pair of big black eyes staring back at him.

 It was a little girl in pig tails that saved him.

They looked at each other for a while and didn't say anything.

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 13 years ago

Guys...

This was the first update...

Hey hiii Mana,

                  wow new fic....very nice.ek aur RN fic padhne milegi😃
yahan pe toh pehle hi update mein Raj ko lakar to tune record hi bana diya😲😆
       ok toh hamara Raj sirf 8 saal ka hai....accha hai hamein Raj ko bachpan se dekhna ka mauka milega...vo toh bachpan se hi cute hai.
aur dekh aaj pehli baar kisi fic mein mera reply 1st hai vo itni brand new fic mein😆😆 it's nice to comment first.😉
                    plzzzzzzzzzzz continue this soon par apni baki fic ko bhul mat jana, tujhe unhe bhi update karna hai!

😆

Hey Mana

Wah...one more RN fic....itni saari non lrl fics padhne ke baad, I m ok with more fics being non lrl but cannot do without RN...😉

Oh toh Rajveer is a chota bachaa...!!! 😃 And an all rounder...great...!!!👍🏼

Huda is the same bada ho ya chota...!!! 😡😡

The lil girl is Naina...!!!😃  So RN are going to chaddi buddies...!!! 😉 Even now as kids they would make a cute pair...!!! 😉

Great start Mana 👏👏....Update soon...!!! ⭐️
Edited by Dhara_s - 14 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

An eight year old Rajveer is trapped in a storeroom and scared and crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Poor baby!!!!!   Kitna roh raha hai aur cheekh raha hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj is a star and an all rounder!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Huda and Shantanu tricked Raj and locked him in that storeroom!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj school ka hero hai aur woh log zero yeh sacchai unse bardaast nahi huyi!!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Ish Huda ko toh main chhodungi nahi!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Yeh toh bachpan se hi villain nikla!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I am sure Raj ush Huda ko baad mein sambhal hi lega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

A cute little girl came to Raj's rescue and I am sure that is Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

After all Raj ko musibaat se toh Naina hi bacha sakti hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Lekin yeh Raj toh bina kuch bole hi chala gaya!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Thanks bhi nahi kaha Naina se!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

The beginning was very different and interesting!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

 

Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago

Woww...one more RN fic... gr888888... i m soo happy..😛
Lovely concept...
so Raj is only 8 yr old...n that girl must be Naina.. 😳
Huda is 😡 ..koi baat nahi Raj bhi use achhe se samjaayega... 😉
storyline is gud..pls continue.... but dont forget to update ur other fics...!!!!😉
waiting for the next part...

Great....one more RN fic. And the starting is completely different.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....mujhe rona aa raha hai....mera Raj store-room me bandh tha?????????? Wa wa wa wa............................usse kitni takleef hui hogi.....😭😭😭...how cud they do this to him???????😡...Huh....Raj school ka hero hai and wo log zero....sacchayi bardasht nahi hui to usse aise store-room me lock kar diya...huh!!!!😡.....I just so hate them for this. My poor baby....kitna ro raha tha....cheekh raha tha..😭😭😭...me feeling so bad for him.

But at least koi achhi si ladki ayi aur usne usse nikal hi liya....I wonder if thats Naina...ya phir apka dimag kuch aur hi soch raha hai madam??😉😉

Anyways, Mana......firstly thankssssssss for staring a new fic....which is also non-LrL based.....it'll be gud to read...that I knw for sure. Thanks for the PM as well....now pls continue soon....baccho ko zara bade kar do....U c I'd luv to fall for Raj all over again n again n again n............ahh lets stop here.😉😉

Hiiii mana.....