Mayur Sajan ff(Love aaj kal) pt21-pg 67 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 cant w8
very interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sajan and Mayur FF {Love Aaj Kal} part 2

*In Chandigarh*

Nupur- Dia, jaldi chal na. Hamein der ho jaayegi warna.
Dia- Ha di, aa rahi hoo. Bas yeh aakhri bag pack karni hai.
Nupur *looking at Dia's bags*- Diya, itne to mujhe bhi nahi lage. Tu Kya pura ghar utha ke le jaa rahi hai kya?

D- Arey nahi di, woh kya hai na, Mumbai ke logon ko pata chalna chahiye ki Dia bhi kya cheez hai. Sambhal kar rehna Mumbai waalo, Diya aa rahi hai.

Nupur and Diya laugh and hug each other and then leave for the station, bidding a goodbye to their loved ones.

Finally they have reached Mumbai, and Nupur gets down first, and later helps Diya, who is struggling with all her bags.

N- Maine kaha tha na tujhe, ki itne saare bags mat la. Ab in sab ko uthayega kaun?

D- Arey di, yeh koi choti si gaav nahi hai. yeh mumbai hai. Hum coolie ko bol denge.

*they call the coolie and finally reach the taxi stand. They finally reach the apartment in which they will be staying. Nupur rings the bell and waits till someone opens the door. A female, maybe in her mid forties opens the door, having a warm welcoming smile on her face. *

Mrs. Kapoor- Nupur? Dia? Hay, kitni badi ho gayi ho tum dono.
* she then hugs both of them. Both Nupur and Dia look at each other.
N-Arey aunty, yeh to kamaal ho gaya. Aap hamein kaise pehchanti ho?
Mrs. Kapoor- Woh kya hai na, mein tumhari ma ki bohot achi friend hoo. Usne mujhe aaj subah hi call karke bol diya tha ki tum dono yaha par rehne waali ho. Aur tumhare bags ko dekhkar toh mein samajh hi gayi ki tum zaroor Nupur aur Dia hi ho. Arey, ab sirf baate hi karni hai ya tumhe andar bhi aana hai. Aao beta, apna hi ghar samjho.

N & D- thank you aunty.
Mrs. Kapoor- Koi baat nahi bete, tum dono fresh ho jaao, aur agar kal ke liye kuch bhi chahiye ho to, mujhse keh do. Mein tumhareliye sab laa doongi.

N- Are nahi nahi aunty, aap kyon takleef uthayengi. Aap aaram kijiye, apna kaam hum khud kar lenge, hai na Dia?

when she doesn't recieve any reply from Dia, she turns to find her, and sees that Dia is already running upstairs to her room.

N *to herself*- Yeh ladki bhi na, ise Chandigarh mein hi rehna chahiye tha.

*Next day, it is Nupur's and Dia's first day in Excel College. Dia is really excited to see the boys of Excel, whereas Nupur is more interested in the studies curriculum.*

D- Di, kitna achcha college hai, hai na?
N- Tune sahi kaha Dia, bohot hi bada hai.
Dia looks around and without telling a further word to Nupur, goes her own way.
N- Dia, tujhe koi ladka dikha kya?
But when Nupur doesn't get a reply, she again turns around to see DIa is not standing there.

N- Yeh Ladki!
Suddenly, there is a loud crowd cheering and Nupur gets confused and doesn't know where to go. Suddenly a guy comes running towards her in full speed and Nupur is still standing there, too shocked to move. The guy is not able to control his balance and falls on Nupur, making both of the fall on the ground, the guy on top of Nupur. Everyone in the crowd starts whistling and Nupur looks angrily at the guy.

~~END OF PART 2. PLEASE COMMENT AND LET ME KNOW YOUR VIEWS.~~

Precap for Part 3- Mayurs and Sajans first meeting.
guys please let me know what you think

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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
wwooooww awesuumm yaarr..
tune to sabko beat hi kar diya haii..!!
gr8 goingg gudd jobbb..!!
i bet ull win the best ff thingyy.!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

wwooooww awesuumm yaarr..

tune to sabko beat hi kar diya haii..!!
gr8 goingg gudd jobbb..!!
i bet ull win the best ff thingyy.!


hey thank u thank u thank u.
im soooo happy you liked it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh1 God now y did u end it there.........gr8 prt plz cont.soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
 i luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved mayur in your ff
do PM me next time
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: shinella

hey...
 i luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved mayur in your ff
do PM me next time
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


hey sure i will...thanks..infact im free right now...mite think of adding part 3 now itself...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: utfracks


hey sure i will...thanks..infact im free right now...mite think of adding part 3 now itself...


that would b better than the best
how much time
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinella


that would b better than the best
how much time


i guess 10 minutes....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Wow
that'd be cool
plz add it asap
N could u pm me