FF--KHWAISH part 35 &36&epliouge pg 65 july 21 - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

as usual a gr888 update👏👏 but i did'nt even notice tht it ended................ws update short or i ws so much engrosed in it

that ws nyc😊 whn prem kissed her n bid her good nght😆😆
waiting fr ur update................................n plzzz if u hv new story thn do write a new ff, it would be our pleasure to read it😊😛😊
aqsa

thx aqsa for ur lovely comment these comment mean a lot
lol there will be more kisses and hugs 😉 and i will post my other FF asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi frnds how r u ??? well here i m again with next part a very long part hope u guys going to enjoy and i m taking 15 to 20 days break from 23 may so maybe i will not post khwaish during that time but i will try to update 1 or 2 part before i take a break pls pls comment
khwaish

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Recap:-Heer Prem ke London wale farmhouse main rehnay jati hai jana par Prem bhi aata hai and they both decide to give there marriage a chance by spending a week together and there is some sweet moment between them and in Heer room she remember the time of there honeymoon

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Flashback:-

6 days pass after there wedding both Prem Heer r very busy with there work because they married in such a hurry that they don't get time to finish there work so they r trying to finish there work soon so that they can spend more time in each other company .

But Prem has got a lot of work to finish as he got a new contract in which both Prem and Heer work together but Prem has a hectic schedule and got some imp meeting to attend.

Prem is feeling very guilty as he don't gave proper time to Heer .but Heer was an understanding wife woh Prem ko samjhati hai ki they have a whole life to spend together so she don't mind if Prem is devoting more his time to his work she said that they will spend it together when Prem is finish with his work

0n 7 day after there marriage Prem office gaya hua tha aur Heer ghar ko apni taste main decorate kar rahi thi Prem ne usey aisa karney ko insist kiya tha kyunki he feel ki there is need to decorate there house in Heer taste because

First it keeps her busy while Prem is busy with his work and secondly he wants ki uskey ghar ka ek ek kona usey Heer ke uski zindagi main honey ka essahas karaey

Heer apna bedroom ka interior abhi decide hi kar rahi thi ki when she heard a door bell she put all the catalog down and run toward the door because she know ki yeah Prem ke ghar aanay ka waqt tha woh jaldi se ja kar door open karti hai .

But there is no one except a huge red rose bouquet woh flowers pick karti hai and ghar ke andar lati hai us main ek note hota hai

Note:-

Unki ankhen hain aisi

Jin mein hum doob jaye

UN ki palke utho jo

Har kali muskoraye.....

To the most beautiful girl in the world

Heer smile after reading the note

After some time again the door bell rang this time there is no one but there was a huge teddy bear she pick the teddy and aandar lati hai and see ki us key saath bhi ek note attach hota hai woh note pardti hai

Note :- yeah toofa us ke liye

jis ki hansi aaj bhi bachey

ki tarah hai

she hug that teddy when she heard someone footstep outside the house she run to open the door but there is no one she know ki Prem is there but she is unable to find him she see a card lying there with a small gift she picked the card and went outside to see if someone was there or not but there is no one.

She went inside the house and opens the card and finds a hearts shaped card

in which it is written

Note:-

Pyaar se bardkar zindagi main

Aur koi cheez nahi hoti

Phir bhi ek toofa laya hoon

Dil to phelay hi de chuka hoon

Aaj to bas ek nishani dey raha hoon

she open that gift box and see a heart shape platinum pendent with a chain woh pendent observe kar rahi hoti hai jab peechay se koi uski eyes close karta hai woh hands ko touch karti hai jisney uski aankhen baad ki hoti hai and she said Prem

Prem remove his hand from her eyes and said

Prem-Heer kaisey peechana

Heer-Prem tumehey peechaney ke liye tumahra ehsaas hi kafi hai

Prem- I know

And he hugs Heer

Heer- kya baat hai aaj janab bahut romantic ho rahey hai

Prem-hum to aisey hi hai

And woh Heer ke hand se chain leh kar usko pehnata hai

Prem-Heer dil hai mera hamesha apney paas sambhal kar rakhna

Heer-Prem isey main hamesha apney paas rakhungi sambhal kar

And they hug

Prem-ek min Heer tumahrey liye ek aur surprise hai

Heer-ab kya hai Prem

Prem-hmm well Heer ja kar packing karo hum log honeymoon par ja rahey hai

Heer-par Prem yeah ka kaam

Prem-first of all we r newly weds and we deserve a honeymoon and secondly ki tum baki sab ki fikhr na karo main hoon na Preet hai na hum sab sambhal lengey ab tum ja kar jaldi se packing karo humey early morning likalna hai

Heer-par Prem hum kaha ja raha hai

Prem-hmmmm woh to surprise hai but I know tumehe woh jagah bahut pasand aayegi

Heer- Prem pls batao na hum kaha ja rahey hai

Prem-Heer tumse to thora bhi intezar nahi hota kal subah tak wait kar lo na

Heer-nahi hoga intezar Prem batao na pls

Prem-Heer jaan bas thora sa intezar and ab chalo packing kartey hai warna hum kal late ho jayegay aur honeymoon yeahi manana pardega ab chalo

Next morning:-

Woh log early morning hi nikaltey hai Prem car drive kar raha hota hai and Heer window ke bahar dekh rahi hoti hai when suddenly Prem said

Prem-Heer I think u should take a small nap waisey bhi abhi to early morning hai and raat main bhi tum packing ke chakkar main kafi late soyi thi aur abhi humey waha pauchney main bhi kafi time hai thori dair so jayo u will feel fresh

Heer-nahi Prem I am ok aur waisey bhi tum drive kar hi rahe ho

Prem-pls Heer apney ko dekho u r looking so tired thori dair so jaogi to apney ko kafi fresh feel karogi

Heer-ok

And Heer take a small nape

After some time she realize ki someone is calling her name and she open and realize ki Prem is calling out her name

Prem-uth jao Heer hum we have reach our destination

Heer Prem ko dekhti hai with sleepy eyes and Prem uskey face se hairs peechay karta and forehead par kiss karta hai.and then Prem car se bahar likalta hai and Heer bhi bahar aati hai

Heer apni surroundings dekhti hai and realize ke they r standing in a very calm and quite place surrounded with huge mountains and then she saw a huge graceful two story house there she looked at Prem jo ki smile kar raha hota hai

Heer-Prem hum

Prem-well Heer welcome to my country farm house

Heer-Prem it is beautiful

Prem-I know tabhi to tumehe yeaha laya hoon it is my fav place and it is ideal place for our honeymoon

Heer was looking around in she said in a dreamy tone

Heer-hmmm it is the perfect place it is so peaceful so beautiful so quite and no one else except u and me

Heer ko realize nahi hota hai ki uskay har alfaz ke saath Prem uski taraf aa raha hota hai she was in a dreamy state and she realize when Prem hug her

Heer-Prem chordo na pls

Prem-Heer chordney ke liye to nahi pakra hai waisey bhi yeah humara honeymoon hai

and Prem kisses her cheeks and they went into the house and Prem usko poora house dekhta hai after lunch they decide to take the walk in the farm thay go for a long walk for hours watching the winter birds and talking about there childhood and sharing there past life with each other when suddenly Prem speak up

Prem-Heer abhi sham honey main khuch waqt hai and I want to show u something

Heer-kya dekhana hai Prem

Prem-tum chalo to sahi

and Prem Heer ko apney saath lekar jata hai and after sometime Heer heard the sound of water and see that there is a small stream was cascading down a little water swirling around the big smooth rocks in its path

Woh Prem KO dekhti hai and said

Heer-it is so beautiful

Prem-hmm par tum se kam

And then without thinking woh Prem ka haath chord kar aa gey jati hai and start walking on the rocks Prem usey warn karta hai but it was too late to save her because rock slippery honey ke karan woh slip kar jati hai and fell into icy water

Is se phelay ki woh apney ko bachaney ki koshish karti Prem was bending to save her Heer was completely shocked and jab Prem usko Stream Se bahar nikalta hai she was shivering

Prem apna jacket utarta hai and Heer ko pehnata hai and woh usko uthata hai when Heer protest

Heer-Prem pls mujhe neechay utara tum bhi bheeg jao gey meri wazah se

Prem-Heer ab chup raho tum shiver rahi ho and main tumehe jaldi se ghar paoocha dunga tum to chal bhi nahi paogi itni thand main

Heer ko thand lag rahi thi and woh janti thi ki woh ek kadam nahi chal payegi itni thand main bheeg kar

Prem and Heer ghar pauchtey hai and Prem Heer ko room main le kar jata hai and usko bed par bethta hai and room heaters on kar ta and then woh bathroom main ja kar ek towel lata hai and Heer ka sir and face pauchta hai

Prem-Heer clothe change kar lo bheegay huay hai thand lag jayegi

Heer nods and woh change karney bathroom main chali jati hai and jab woh bahar aati hai to dekhti hai ki Prem coffee mug ke saath us ka wait kar raha hai

Woh Prem ke paas aa kar bethti hai and Prem usko coffee mug hand karta hai

Prem-Heer theek to ho na

Heer-hmmm I am sorry Prem I behave like a stupid person

Prem-hey don't be sorry and ainda se meri Heer ko stupid nahi kehna samjhi

Heer nods and they start chatting after sometime Heer feel sleepy Prem usko dekhta hai and Heer se kehta hai ki

Prem- I think Heer tumhe ja kar aaram karna chahiye waise bhi pata nahi kyun aaj kal tum khuch thaki thaki si lagti ho Heer tumahri tabiyat to theek hai na

Heer-Prem main theek hoon tum yuhi pareshan ho rahey ho main bilkul theek hoon

Prem-mujhe nahi lagta hai hum log laut kar tumahra ek baar checkup jaroor karayegay

Heer-Prem iski koi jaroorat nahi hai main bilkul theek hoon tumehe bas meri jaada fikhr hai isliye tum pareshan ho rahe ho aur waisey bhi yeah humara honeymoon hai so no serious talk

Prem-janta hoon yeah humara honeymoon hai

And yeah kahe kar woh Heer ki taraf barhta hai when suddenly Heer sneeze

Prem-dekha na sardi lag gayi chalo ab tum aaram karo warna beemar par jaogi

and woh Heer ko lekar jata hai and usko blanket se cover karta hai and uskey cheeks par kiss karta hai and phir woh dusri side par soney jata hai they both r happy and yeah unko dekh kar koi bhi kahe sakta tha kyunki unkay chehray par muskhurahat thi need main bhi

Song in the background:-

Tujhey dekh dekh sona tujhe dekh kar hain jagna

Maine yeh zindagani sang tere bitaani

Tujh mein basi hain meri jaan hayeee

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye ...

Kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe

Inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa

Kehna kabhi to mera maan hayeeee

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye ....

Lagta hain yeh kyun mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhey

Mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake

Mujhpe tu kar ehsaan hayeee

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye ...

Tujhey dekh dekh sona tujhe dekh kar hain jagna

Maine yeh zindagani sang tere bitaani

Tujh mein basi hain meri jaan hayeee

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaaye ...

Unka honeymoon Kisi sapney se kam nahi tha woh din unki zindagi ke sabsey khoobsurat palo main se thay jo unki zindagi ko hamesha ek meethi yaad degay

tabhi ek hawa ke jhoke se Heer apney sapno se baahar aati hai and she realize ki woh apna beeta hua waqt yaad kar rahi thi woh dekhti hai ki bahar halki halki snowfall ho rahi hai and thand bhi kafi barh gayi hai woh apney room ki window close karti hai but she feel so happy after a long time uskey chehray ki muskhurahat kam hi nahi ho rahi thi and woh isi khushi ke saath hi soney chali jati hai and after a long time woh ek bahut hi aachi need so rahi hoti hai

Song in background:-

O re piya haiyee O re piya

O re piya haiyee O re piya

O re piya haiyee O re piya

Urdney laga kyun maan bawla re

Aaya kaha se yeah hosla reeeee

O re piya O re piya haiyeee

Tana bana tana bana bunti hawa

Haiyee bunti hawa

Boondey bhi to aaye nahi

Baaz yeahaa haiyee

Saazish main shamil Sara jahan hai

Har zarey zarey ki yeah iltaza hai

O re piya O re piya haiyee

O re piya haiyee O re piya

Nazarey boley duniya toley

Dil ki zubaaan haiyee

Dil ki zubaaan

Ishq mangey ishq chaiye koi toofan

Chalna ahistey ishq naya hai

Phela yeah waada hamney kiya hai

O re piya haiyee O re piya haiyee

O re piya piyaaaa eh piyaaaaa

Nagey pero pe angaro chalti rahi chalti rahi

Lagta hai ki gairo mein main palti rahii

Haiyeeeeeee

Le chal waha Jo mulq teraa hai

Jahil zamana dushman mera hai

O re piya haiyee O re piyaaa haiyee

O re piyaaa haiyee O re piya haiyee

O re piyaaa haiyee O re piya haiyee

O re piyaaaaa O re piya

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Edited by Shruti11 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hay sruti another amazing update...ohhh thr honeymoon was soo cute...loved it....
now hoping to see more romance in thr present situation....and hoping to see ke prem heer ko manale....:)
love the way the story is moving....waiting for ur next update.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome & v cute update.really loved it eagerly waiting 4 the next.thanks 4 the pm.
Luv
Fatima
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
thnks fr the pm.as usual an amazing update, luv the scenes whn prem sends gift to heer.................heer falld off frm clip n prem rescued her n woh update is full of kisses n hugs
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
thnks fr pm
once again a gr888 update...............luv the scene when prem sends heer so many gifts...............prem fell off frm rock n prem rescues,very sweet...............episode ws full off with hugs n kisses
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Shruti...once again great update...i loved it...like the way the story is developing.....waiting for the next update...

Thanks for writing


Sarah
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Posted: 16 years ago
once again a nyc update😊😊....................
heer fell off from a rock n prem rescued her.2day's update full of kisses n hugs😳😳
waiting fr nxt 1
aqsa⭐️
Edited by eternal.beauty - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
that was super
awesum
thankz for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: iditri

hay sruti another amazing update...ohhh thr honeymoon was soo cute...loved it....

now hoping to see more romance in thr present situation....and hoping to see ke prem heer ko manale....:)
love the way the story is moving....waiting for ur next update.....

thx ishita and ya more romance is on the way 😉😉😉and lets see wat going to happen next but ya more twist to come

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