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WOW!
LUV this FF!
Please continue!! LOL I'll pay you to continue..LOOOOL
Please carry on. I'm loving this FF!
Your FF is just way too good!!!!! Beyond words man!!!!!!!!! How do you do it?!?! I'm not exaggarating either!!!!!
Of course I love your descriptions! Like the others said, it makes it easier to imagine! Even me to, I always just explain too much when ever I am explaining things! LOL! But when I explain, its always unecassary, whereas your are!
I wish I could pay you to write full time, and I'll be glad to pay you! But the problem is, I'm always broke!!!😆 But jokes apart, if you ask me when you should update with the options you gave, I would rather you update everyday with short parts (which is approx a page on Word) because then we always have something to read everyday rather than having all the suspense in those couple of days which you really like to do!!! LMAO!
Neetu: Me glads my descriptions are liked.....sometimes I tend to go of on a tangent which is why my storylines are always changing.😆
Chapter V
A loud wail startled both of them and Vrinda hastily skirted round him to rush to the bedroom opposite. Puzzled, Yug followed but stopped short at the sight of Vrinda lifting a small girl out of a crib. The toddler quietened immediately, her cries subsiding to sniffles as she snuggled in to Vrinda's shoulder.
Wiry russet curls and honey coloured eyes.
Yug cursed.
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Yug slouched in his seat, regarding Vrinda with a grim look as she determinedly kept her gaze averted, her attention solely on the child as she stroked those soft curls and gently rocked her in her sleep.
Ria.
That was all he had been told before she had bustled past him and walked the perimeter of her apartment in an attempt to soothe the child, singing a soft lullaby and holding Ria as if it was the most natural position. And all the time Yug had watched her silently, but with a growing sense of dread until he finally leapt up and took a firm hold on Vrinda's arm. Not to hurt her but enough to force her attention to him.
"Vrinda…"
She shot him a quelling look, silently indicating that Ria had just fallen asleep before replying in a whisper,
"I'll tell you tomorrow."
She attempted to skirt around him again but he kept a firm grip on her arm, glaring at her, daring her to back down. She looked away first and licked her dry lips, eyes tightening ever so slightly and Yug had to wonder if she was hesitating.
"Ria…she's Sharad bhaiyya's and Githika Di's daughter."
Yug loosened his grip as his eyes darted back to the child. He had a niece. He acknowledged the information with a silent nod of his head, ignoring the part of him that had dreaded, but at the same time had wanted to hear something else.
"She looks a lot like you."
Vrinda gave him a wry smile,
"She is my niece as well as Yug. I guess she took after my side of the family."
Yug nodded distractedly, eyes still on Ria.
"I should put her to bed. Will you be okay on the couch?"
Another nod and Vrinda turned away, clutching Ria as she moved towards the bedroom.
Reserved!
Neetu: Me glads my descriptions are liked.....sometimes I tend to go of on a tangent which is why my storylines are always changing.😆
Samu: [Yes that's you Samiya😃] Whoop, Whoop, I'm getting paid lols!😆 Wait, I changed my mind....I don't need money, just bas the Kreatives head together so we can get a decent storyline in the show.
Ravu: Thankoo-Ji....Mmm, maybe I should explain the storyline? Thing is, it's all there in my head so half the time I don't know whether what I'm writing will make sense to someone who hasn't got everything planned out in their heads.😕
Does that even make any sense?😆
Palwasha: Omg, cooli-o name....never heard of it before!😃 Me going to call you Wasu!😎
And all will be revealed in the next part....I think.🤔
Presadhi: Gods, another pretty name. Nibbly hereby christens you Presu....sort of like hey Presto.🤔😕😆
See comment above ^^😃
k_luv: Lols; your reply is almost as long as my updates.😆
And STOP with the ideas.....seriously, I'm in danger of starting this KANK Fic now which can NOT happen because I can barely keep a track of two!!
Gahhhh, toooooooo many ideas in my head!
Lols; the writing comes from years of fiending of every book I can find and a very unhealthy addiction to soaps.😃
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So many lubbly comments😳.....that make me happy and motivate me to write faster: *Hint* *Hint*😉
Yeah I know, I'm shameless!😆
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