Maslow's hierarchy of needs #2 part 35 pg 147 - Page 88

Originally posted by: krati.mehra

Hey Sam
Finally read all the parts and gotta say...you are one awesome writer.
The entire journey from friendship to confession was a delight to read with the twists and turns you threw in....it was all perfect. I had planned on leaving one comment on every part but that would take a longgg time. Anyways, i loved the part where tthey all go to watch that play and than AR end up fiting...that was good...i enjoyed the whole jealousy thing but glad that they did patch up later...and the confession scene was wonderful...now am looking forward to how they break this news to their friends...it would be hell lot of fun to read that.
And i think the entire part was flawless...you did a fantasic job. Will be waiting for the next part but do it whenever it's convenient to you. Glad you are enjoying the new job and place.

krati

p.s. Thanks a lot for the PM but i know it takes up a lot of time so dn't PM me coz i anyways keep checking every now and than.

Originally posted by: Aishwarya..

Hi!!

The feeling is amazing, whenever I finish reading each part. From the bottom of my heart, I never want this "fantastic" ff to end.

It is educative (w.r.t. the lines u use i.e literature ones), fun(definitely), and so real.

This was one of the most mature confessions I have ever read, ya with correct pinch of fun too!! The post-confession talk was required. Unfortunately it didn't get complete.

Rahul-muskaan's story is also moving at correct pace.

Feeling slightly sad for ankit, as he was the bait for AR's reconciliation.

I hope u create a new character esp. for him, so that he does not return back to his previous soul mate "wall street journal".

Padma, being a smart lady must have understood the situation that took place in the hospital, but must have let it go dur to the stress.

I wish to see mom-daughter convo in the future reg. this topic!!

Finally the much expected kiss happened!! It was definitely like a cherry on the top of the freshly baked cake from Cairo!!

Thanks for the pm!!

Take care!

p.s. I am unable to add u coz I am not an active member!!

Originally posted by: krazyboutkaran

wz wondering wen u wer gonna update...nd um glad u finally hv!!!!!

dis part wz lovely...luvd it....update wenever possible....nd thnx for d pm again...:))

luv urvi

Originally posted by: -Rukz-

Aww Sam,
That was a wonderful update ..
In the end i thought they'd remain on fight for a couple of days,but i guess i was wrong .. It was a beautiful scene .. I hope everything with Anjali goes well and she understands .. Thanks for the pm, i have added you in my buddy list .. Do update soon ..
Take Care
Rukz

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Awww, what a beautiful part Sam! Just loved the sweet moments between Armaan and Ridhima. I'm so thrilled that they're finally together. It scared me for a moment though when they started arguing. I can understand Armaan's anger...She did kind of ruin the moment, didn't she? But then again, she was only being honest. Glad they worked that out in the end.

I hope Ridhima's mother didn't figure anything out. Perhaps in her stress over her husband's condition, she wasn't quite as perceptive as she usually is...at least that's my hope. It will be better if Armaan and Ridhima can make the decision when to tell each person...instead of having to make an awkward confession to someone who has already figured it out.

Continue soon!

Originally posted by: aravi

SAM it was one adorable long AR full update which i was longing for so many days love you loads *hugs*!!!! its feels great to know that u finally found a home for urself and the place is so beautiful the way to describe it that is!!!!

coming to the update it was brilliant , the entire flow was beautiful there was no missing link and armaan is the ultimate for me in here! do guys like him exist ??? awww every piece of their conversation was wonderfully penned down u know what am missing??? the regular flow of updates when u had just started writing hehe me wanting to read more u know as i used to scroll down i wud just pray that this one musnt be the last para u know so many times i thot this is the cliff :D lolzzz thats the insane me newyas i say it again i enjoyed it thoroughly!!!!!

srsly i loved riddhima in here, n yea the girlie instincts are true most of the time esp if something spells trouble :D armaan has been ignoring angie for quite some time now i mean its high time he made amends :))) but angie ouch the girl is so head strong i cant for the life of me imagine wat u plan to do with her sam ? looking forward to more from you but that is provided u have the time !!!!!!

lotsa love

Rv

Hey Sam,

Arati 😊

Originally posted by: kkanthan

Hi Sam,

Fabulous part! I loved Armaan's dialogues to the core! He has a good sense of humour at the right moments!!

Riddhima's feelings were conveyed beautifully. Her fears, anxieties, insecurties on account of Anjali were portrayed very well. Hope to see more of Armaan & Riddhima's interactions as a 'just confessed their love for each other' couple.

Anjali should accept A-R relationship gracefully. Armaan will hopefully never make Riddhima insecure in front of Anjali. (Armaan can be very hurtful when he wants to, right!)

Waiting eagerly for the next part..

Take care.

Indu.👏

Originally posted by: Enigma_Swati

Hey Sam...!!

I don't know where to start from...really. Your Fan Fic leaves me in a tizzy as to how to tell you how fabulous this story is. What a fabulous and a marvelous writer you are...

Okay. let's start. I am not new to your story but commenting for the first time. I just love the way you write. You are an inspiration for me, really. And I am not joking about that. You convey all the emotions of the characters in a way that leaves me dumbfounded.

I like adored the confession. Its simplicity charmed me. It couldn't have been better. Armaan is an adorable guy with a good sense of humour. Initially when I was reading their conversation about Anjali and her reaction, I thought they will have a fight over this. But I was glad it didn't turn out that way. Kudos to you for writing such a wonderful story.

The fears and anxities of Ridhima were beautifully put up. I hope to read more of AR's private moments. And I am really excited to see how they disclose their relationship to every one if they do so.

And I have to thank for one thing. When you mentioned Scarlet Pimpernel in the story, I was so excited to read the book that I searched the school library like anything every time I went there. I finally found that a week back. I just finished reading it yesterday night and completely loved that book. I can see how you got the character into this story. Kudos to you again for that..!!!

Please update as soon as you can...!!

Love you TONS..!!
Swati...