~RM FF~ ~ Mujhse Dosti Karoge?~Upd-Page 73! 05/10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy there! This is for all RM fans! Im a hugeeee Rm fan so I thought of writing a FF about them. This is my very first FF so I know that this wont be a gr8 one but please doo read it and comment!

Index:

Part 1: Page 1

Part 2: Page 1

Part 3: Page 1

Part 4: Page 3

Part 5: Page 7
 
Part 6: Page 7 
 
Part 7:Page 9
 
Part 8: Page 11
 
Part 9: Page 14
 
Part 10: Page 17
 
Part 11: Page 20
 
Part 12: Page 22
 
Part 13: Page 23
 
Part 14: Page 24
 
Part 15: Page 27
 
Part 16: Page 27
 
Part 17: Page 30
 
Part 18: Page 32
 
Part 19: Page 35
 
Part 20: Page 37
 
Part 21: Page 40
 
Page 22: Page 43
 
Part 23: Page 46
 
Part 24: Page 48
 
Part 25: Page 51
 
Part 26: Page 54
 
Part 27: Page 57
 
Part 28: Page 59
 
Part 29: Page 61
 
Part 30: Page 64
 
Part 31: Page 67
 
Part 32: Page 71
 
Part 33: Page 73
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 

Part 1:

Rahul: Mommmm!!!! Kya hai? AC kyun off kar diya?

 
Rahul's mom: Rahul utho na, college ke liye der ho jayegi.
 

Rahul: Ma please, stop it, AC on karo.

 
Rahul's mom: Nahin, jao tayar ho jao.
 

Rahul: ughhhhh!!!!

 
He gets up and goes to get ready, wearing blue jeans, and a blue t-shirt. He leaves for his college with his bike. When he reaches, his friends are already waiting for him. Armaan and Atul.
 

Armaan: Dude! Kahan tha tu? Pata hai hum tumhara kapse wait kar rahe the?

 
Atul: Haan yaar! Tu humesha late aatha hai.
 

Rahul: Arrey yaar, chup karo na tum dono. Ab bata tum log kyun wait kar rahe the?

 
Armaan: Haan who suna hai ki aaj college mein nayi ladki aane wali hai, aur wo bhi humare hi class mein.
 

Atul: Yes, aur uska naam Muskaan hai.

 
Rahul: Muskaan? It sounds very boring you know.
 

Armaan: Nahin re, suna hai ki who bahut hot hai.

Atul: Haan, lekin agar who hot hogi, toh who meri girlfriend hogi theek hai?
 

Armaan: Nahin, meri.

 
Atul: Noo armaan, meri.
 

Armaan: Atul!!!!!

 
Rahul: Arrey, usse anne to doh!
 

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Muskaan enters the college; all lost, and doesn't know where to go just then Ridhima comes.
 

Ridhima: Hi, im Ridhima, tum yahan pe nayi ho na?

 
Muskaan: Haan, im Muskaan by the way.
 

R: So first day huh?

 
Muskaan: Yeah, pehla din, bahut nervous hoon.
 

Ridhima: Kyun? Daro mat, yahan pe sab ache log hain.

 
Muskaan: Haan woh to hai, lekin itna bara college, main to paka ghum ho jayungi.
 

Ridhima: Nahin, main hoon na, hum waisi bhi same class mein hain.

 
Muskaan: Great! Koi toh hai jisse mein janti hoon.
 

Ridhima: Soo let me show you around.

 
They go together to the canteen, library, classes, and they go to the garden, and there they see Armaan, Atul, and Rahul talking.
 

Muskaan: Woh log kaun hai?

 
Ridhima: Oh woh, woh green shirt wala Atul hai, red shirt wala Armaan, aur woh joh blue shirt mein hai, woh hai rahul.
 

Muskaan: hmmm Rahul...

 
Ridhima: Kya?
 

Muskaan: Uhh nahin, kuch nahin. Chale?

 
Ridhima: Haan chal.
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2:

 
In class, Rahul, Atul, and Armaan are already there, waiting for the new girl to come. They can't wait to see how she looks. Soon they get fed up of looking at the door, so they turn around and start talking. Suddenly Muskaan enters with Ridhima smiling, and talking.
 

Atul: Hey guys, who dekho, Muskaan agayi.

 
Armaan is the first one to turn around, and Rahul is the least bothered.
 

Armaan: Woh hai muskaan?

 
Atul: Haan usse maine pehle kabhie nahin dekha.
 

Armaan: Are you sure?

 
Atul: Haan yaar kyun?
 

Armaan: Abhey tujhe woh kis angle se hot lagti hai?

 
Atul: She's not that bad huh.
 

Rahul: Arrey yaar, tum dono kitna baat karte ho. Main bhi toh dekhu ki who kaise lagti hai.

 
He turns around and sees Muskaan. His first thought: Beautiful!
 

Atul: Rahul....

 

Rahul didn't seem to listen to what he was saying. He was simply lost in looking at Muskaan.

 
Atul: Oyee Rahul! Kya hua? Kahan koh gaya?
 

Rahul still didn't hear anything Atul was saying.

 
Atul: Armaan yaar, lagta hai ki iska dimaag kharab ho gaya hai.
 

Armaan: Haan aisa ki lagta hai.

 
Atul: RAHULLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

Rahul jumped awake, back into his senses, and turned around to face atul.

 
Rahul: Abhey kya hai?
 

Atul: kya hai? Tu kahan ko gaya tha huh? Please tu yeh mat bata ki tujhe woh  muskaan khubsoorat lagti hai.

 
Armaan: Yea dude, shes like the bhenji type, not our type okay?
 

Rahul: Kya bakwaas ki baatein kar rahe ho tum dono? Mein aur muskaan? That Muskaan? Pfff please give me a break!

 
Atul: good! Hum toh ek minute ke liye dar hi gaye the!
 

Rahul had just said this so that his friends don't think that he's insane or anthing, but in the inside, he found Muskaan absolutely stunning. She was something completely different than everyone else. She was extremely pretty and he just couldn't take his eyes of her. But he wasn't in love was he?

Edited by Namrata_12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 3:

 
In the canteen, Muskaan, Ridhima, and Ridhima's sister Anjali, went to go get something to eat. They got their food and went to go sit down.
 

Ridhima: Oh shit!

 
Anjali: Kya hua Ridzy?
 

Ridhima: Di woh actually, mujhe library mein kuch kaam kai, main who karna bhul gayi. Mujhe abhi jaana hoga.

 
Anjali: Uhmm alrite.
 

Ridhima goes, and soon a guy comes.

 
Guy: Anjali ji, Mr. Shashank aapko bula rahe hai.
 

Anjali: Mujhe?

 
Guy: Haan.
 

Anjali: Muskaan, ill be back okay?

 
Muskaan: okay'
 

Like this muskaan is left alone, Rahul saw this and took advantage of the situation. He was alone also, so he went and sat at the same table as muskaan.

 
Rahul: Hi, im rahul.
 

Muskaan: Hi, Im muskaan.

 
Rahul: Toh'. Toh yeh tumhara pehla din hai?
 

Muskaan: Yup

 
Rahul: Uhmm' aur' kaisa tha tumhara pehla din?
 

Muskaan: Acha tha.

 
Rahul: Okay'..
 

Both were really awkward, they don't know what else to say. So Rahul just decides to leave.

 
Rahul: Anyways' mein chalta hoon, nice meeting you.
 

Muskaan: Same here.

 
Rahul: Aur agar tujhe... I mean... agar tujhe kisse bhi you know.. help' ki zaroorat ho' toh tum mujhse pooch sakti ho.

Muskaan: Yea... thanks.

 
He left from there and smacked himself on the head, he was thinking, that why did he feel so awkward? He had the perfect change then how come he wasn't able to say anything!
 

Ridhima and Anjali came back and joined muskaan.

 
Ridhima: Muskaan tum rahul se kyun baat kar rahi thi?
 

Muskaan: Main nahin, woh hi aake idhar beht gaya, main kya karoon?

 
Anjali: Hmmm.... maybe he likes you!
 

Muskaan: Anjali!?

 
Anjali: Kya? Tumhe aisa nahin lagta?
 

Muskaan: No ways.

 
Anjali: Whatever you say.
 

Ridhima: Di, ghar chalne ka time ho gaya hai. Chale?

 
Anjali: Yeah, lets go, muskaan come, hum tumhe drop kar lenge.
 

Muskaan: Sure, thanks.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww nammu!! 😆 dont mind me calling u that ok? jhehe
u started ur own ff!! and a very cute one indeed!! hmm lets see how RM dosti shapes up into a heart 😳
 
oh and u dont have to add me to ur pm list, i regularly check the FF section so i'll read ur updates anywyas 😃
 
cont soon 😃 but dont forget our asli adda (wwrm) muahaha 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: musicdiva

aww nammu!! 😆 dont mind me calling u that ok? jhehe

u started ur own ff!! and a very cute one indeed!! hmm lets see how RM dosti shapes up into a heart 😳
 
oh and u dont have to add me to ur pm list, i regularly check the FF section so i'll read ur updates anywyas 😃
 
cont soon 😃 but dont forget our asli adda (wwrm) muahaha 🤗

 
Heyy!! thankss ur the first one to comment lol. yea i did add u to my pm list. noo i updated my ff and wrote my part in wwrm. dont worry i can never forget that!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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love rm...nyce start...do continue soo00n
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: musicdiva

aww nammu!! 😆 dont mind me calling u that ok? jhehe

u started ur own ff!! and a very cute one indeed!! hmm lets see how RM dosti shapes up into a heart 😳
 
oh and u dont have to add me to ur pm list, i regularly check the FF section so i'll read ur updates anywyas 😃
 
cont soon 😃 but dont forget our asli adda (wwrm) muahaha 🤗

 
heyy! thanksss ur the first one to comment! loll yeaa i added u to my pm list. no no i cant forget wwrm i wrote my part there and also posted my FF. i can never forget that!
thnx for the comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey!....
very interesting ff.....
n very nice intro...
would love to read more!!....pls continue soon if possible!!
n if u dont mind....can u pls add me to the pm list...thank u
 
n good luck for ur first FF!..im sure u will do great!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey namrata, first of all thank u soo much for the pm...and secondly i loved ur ff..quiet different than others..loved all the parts!!!! continue sooon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy Namrata di!!

i just saw ur FF!! awesome start!! i really like it!!! the concept is really nice!! nice job!! i am sure u will do great on ur first FF!!! plzz cont soon and plz PM me if u can the next time u update!!!

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Mahima