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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Great parts.please PM me if you don't mind.

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MysticalRealm

@MysticalRealm

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

ooo look who was awkward nways nice part and can u plz add me to ur pm list!!

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Waleed Ahmed !~~!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey Namrata ~!
Great U Started A FF ~!~!
Add Me To0 Ur PM List !~~!

Loved The First And The Third Part !~~!

Co0o0ntinue So0o0o0o0o00oo0n ~!!~

-Walo

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ankita

@muskaan_ankita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

awww... That was so cute namrata!! glad you told me that you are writing a FF... It is awesome!! Thanks for the pm

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luv_dmg_armaan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

OKay firstly AWESOME!!

Seriously love it,Namrata can u please add me to your PM list..

Aww its so cute!!!

ok do Pm me when u upate next

Radhika

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Mansi bhatia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Wow! Dat was sweet! Luved the Part4 sp.! Awsome Namrata! Continue soon! :)

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Thankss for ur comments everyone! I will be updating soon.

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Part 4:

Later in the night, Armaan and Atul were at Rahul's house.

Armaan: Oyee, Rahul, woh Muskaan toh humari type ki nahin nikli yaar.

Rahul: uhh... haan... Muskaan.

Atul: Armaan, mujhe bhook lagi hai, mein kitchen mein ja rahan hoon. Tujhe kuch chahiye?

Armaan: No champ, thanks.

Atul: Aur rahul tu?

Rahul: Nahin... kuch nahin.

Atul: Okay.

Saying this he goes to the kitchen leaving Armaan and Atul alone in the room.

Armaan: Oye Rahul, ek baat bata, tujhe ho kya gaya hai dude? Tu kiske bare mein soch raha hai huh? Kahin woh muskaan ke bare mein toh nahin?

Rahul: Haan, mein ussi ke bare mein soch raha hoon.

Armaan: Kya!?

Armaan touched Rahul's forehead to see if he has a fever.

Armaan: Tu theek toh hai na?

Rahul: Haan kyun?

Armaan: Are you sure ki tu theek hai? Tu uss... kya naam hai.... Haan Muskaan, tu uss Muskaan ke bare mein kyun soch raha hai?

Rahul: Toh mein kya karoon? Jabse woh aayi hai, tabse mein usse ke bare mein sochta hoon. Lekin jab woh mere saamne hoti hai, tab mein kuch bol nahin pata. Mein bahut awkward feel karta hoon. Ab tu hi bata ki mein kya karoon.

Armaan: Dude, you're in love!

Rahul: love? Are you nuts? Yeh pyaar nahin hai.

Armaan: Agar tu pyaar isse nahin kehta toh kya hai pyaar huh? Yeh hi to pyaar hai.

Rahul: So I'm in love? Muskaan se?

Armaan: yupp, you're in love Muskaan se. I know.. mujhe bhi yakeen nahin ho raha hai.. ki tu sab ladkiyon me se muskaan ko kyun choose kiya?

Rahul: Pata nahin yaar... Toh tu hi bata ki mein kya karoon. Usske saath mein kaise baat karoon,kya bolun? Should i tell her that i love her?

Armaan: Nahin re.. tuh usse abhi kuch nahin batayega. Pehle usse dosti kar, phir usse batana.

Rahul: Lekin tujhe toh pata hai na... ki main uske samne kuch bol nahin pata.

Armaan: That will soon be gone. Dekh mere pass ek plan hai. Mein ek party organize karunga aur mein tum sab ko invite karunga. Muskaan ko bhi. Phir tum dono mere party mein mil sakte ho and then you can be friends. What say?

Rahul: Haan, plan to acha hai.. I just hope it works.

Atul comes in the room now.

Atul: Hey guys, haaa mera peht bhar gaya. Yaar Rahul tere kitchen mein itna sara khana hai, lekin tujhe toh dekhar aisa lagta hai ki tu kabhi khana khata hi nahin.

Rahul: hmm' yea... whatever... anyways... Atul, Armaan ek party organize karne wala hai,aur humme uski madat karni paregi theek hai? Toh kal shaam ko party Armaan ke ghar pe... right Armaan?

Armaan: That's right.. okay so guys, mein sabko phone karke invite kar dunga.. Rahul you arrange the food, aur atul tu, bring some good music okay.

Atul: Waahhh Party!! I love parties... anything for you mere bhai!

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago

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Mahima

@cutie_mahima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Heyy Namrata di!!!

yayy i'm first to comment!! lolzz......awesome part!!!! so he realized hes in love!!! yay!! haha.....really a sweet part!! can't wait till the party!! plzz cont soon and thanx fr the PM!!

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Mahima