FF: Maahi -Premeer's Journey [Ch. 1 -Pg 4] Jan 25 - Page 3

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Thanks Pooji and Iqra for your comments...keep commenting like this...love you...

~Shifu

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@lovearshi01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

very interesting

please continue

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Sunayna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Hey!

You started another FF!

And the prologue was awesome!

Prem seems very different in ur ff!

Can't wait till the first part!

xXx

Sunayna

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Aradhna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Di! You are such a compelling writer.. I absolutely love the start.. I want to know what Prem did to hurt Heer, and how he's going to get her to forgive him. I cannot wait for the next part.. I don't mind if there is no end, because I love your stories!

Love,

Radz

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Svetalana Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

wow shiff good start.FF started with fight.OMG.

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#26

wow shifali...first of all i love the name and i love the prologue..interesting so there is a rift or something between heer and prem ...lovely prologue continue soon