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Maahi: Premeer's Journey
Hello members,
This FF is called Maahi -Premeer's Journey
I started this FF as a story in my binder. I didn't know that everyone would like it so much that even the people that don't watch Indian shows will get hooked to it😆
So, they even told me to publish this story😆😆 And initially I told them that when I become a big writer, I will...😆
And here is an insider, First this story was supposed to be called Pyaar and Takaar, and then it was changed to The Journey Of Love but now, since I was head over heels in love with the song Maahi, I named it Maahi...so next time, please...don't mind.😳
I don't know if this story has an end or not or if I will even continue it...because this story was my passion...and like you know...Passion has NO end.
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Note: This story is written in both, Prem and Heer's point of view...POV. So there will be changes in thier POV's...but I will inform you of such changes, if they do occur.
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Prologue
I shivered. Standing outside at 2am with heavy pouring rain was not easy. No wonder people use warm water to showcase rain in movies. If it were real then all our actors would have been suffering from Phenomia.
"Please Heer, please open the window. Just once, please!"
I wispered to myself, worried that if Heer heard, she would rather close the window on my face then dare open it. I was the one to hurt Heer but she was the one being harsh. Come to think of it, I was the one to hurt Heer, in the first place so why shall she take the first step to forgive me? I had to ask for forgiveness.
"You know what Prem? You should write a book for all the other lovers tagged " 101 ways to have a perfect relationship without getting kicked out of your own house, especially with a girl named...Prem's Heer -er - Heer Mann who would soon be Mrs. Prem Juneja" which was only one girl and that was MY Heer."
I looked up at the window again in the hope of it opening, even a little bit. No luck.
"I am standing here for the past 4 hours only wearing a cotton navy blue shirt and black pants and she doesn't even care about me?"
I shivered.
"She doesn't even care to open the window and even peak to look if I am alive or dead! What kind of girl is she? Samajhti kya hai? If she doesn't want to talk to me, fine, I will not talk to her either."
A breeze ran through my body making it shiver more. I clenched my teeth. I was practically shouting now and was loud enough for the whole colony to hear.
"Listen Ms. Heer Mann, I won't talk to you either. Don't think you are the only girl that I can find...there are millions more...waiting for me to give them a nod. They will DIE for my one smile...aur phir, you'll see how unlucky you were"
It started to rain heavier. My brain started to freeze. I had goosebumps on my arms.
"I will break into my own house...and she will see what this Prem Juneja can do!"
Just then I heard a loud thud and noise of window flaps opening. I looked up in time to see Heer standing at the window, glaring down at me...
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Chapters
Ch 1 - Pg 4
Keep smiling...
Do comment...
~Shifu
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