Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
that was greatttttttt 😆 😆
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: vallanki

u want to give the name 'prithvi'to the guy? No prob.
Somebody asked abt who is good in vivek and john for kripa. My answer is none. John I don like him as before also. Vivek is not like angad.
Kripa's chemistry matches wid angad da iqbal

 

hey i know 😆 but as a friend.. nope u r wrong da guy is not prithiv..

i gave u a hint 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
Part 9




Guy: let's do it equally
Kripa: wht do u mean by dat
We both wanna say sumthing and I'll count to 3 dan we'll both say it!
Kripa: O.K

Both were nervous and afraid dat how might they wud react

Guy 1….2….3
Both at same time
I love u!
They both were shocked and stunned at the same time and were smiling and looking into each other eyes
Guy: can't believe wht he just heard
Phir se kaho
K: kyun r u def
Guy: I m not sure dat I have heard u correctly.. plzz phir se kaho
Kripa comes near him and shouts out loudly
I LOVE YOU
Loud enough that everyone hea


Heard it. They looked at them and were smiling..
With saying that she ran away and the guy chases her and cought her and swings her around!
Both were laughing..and were so happy as they got everything
Kripa's face became serious, guy notices it
Guy: what's the matter
Kripa :u can lie very easily.. u don't love me.. go with your tina and I hope she wud be waiting for u.. saying this she makes an angry face!
Guy laughs at her: I was only kidding and was doing to make u jeolous but u seriously did..
Kripa: acha stop laughing.. since when did u start loving me
Guy: I don't know but all I know is that u r mine
He hugs her and she hugs him back tightly!!


Next preview: K leaves for India !!!

I know it's a short part but I'll continue tomarrow.. I will be busy..
Has any 1 of u seen koi aap sa and if yes tell is it good? I might go and c it!

Luv ya all
sanya
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
continue plez it was a awesome part 😛 😛 but kripa belongs only 2 angad
dosti1 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#65
gr8 part but too short.
plz continue soon..........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: angadkripafan

continue plez it was a awesome part 😛 😛 but kripa belongs only 2 angad

 

yup😳 pritika iz soooooooo  rit. kripa belongz only to angad😳

lob😳

maryam😳

 

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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
I want to know the guy.
who is he?
please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
👏 👏 👏
bravo well done 😛
kripa will look good with john abraham
plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
sorry for late response but what should i do, i feel like reading other fanfics rather than continuing my own 😆   😳

anyway here we go!
Part 10
They both make their way to the home. As they reach the home, the atmosphere was fine and much better than before. It was peaceful and calm:
S:so Kripa what have u decided
Kripa: dad I think u were right, and I think I should not miss this chance.i'll go for it
S: that's like my daughter..
He smiles and hugs her
S: hmmm waisay manna pare ga jab bhi tum (looking at the guy) uskay saath hote to Kripa apna brain use karti hai
Josh who was also there and was happy at her decision
J: papa u made a good.. afterall she is dumbo
Kripa makes a puppy face and goes and hugs her mom from back
K: Mama dekho yeh sab mujhey tang karahy hain
Gayatri in a joke mood: khud hi dekhlo Kripa and u r acting like a child!!
Kripa is now mad
Mama ap bhi
Goes to the guy
Thank God koi to mere paas hai
Guy: Kripa, when did I say I was with u , afterall I help u made the decision.. u cudn't even done It by urself afterall u r baby!!
Kripa: ha ha very funny make fun of me as much u want!!
Saying this she runs to her room
Everyone is like : ah oo
Gayatry: Dekh liya aap ne kya kiya
Guy: aunti. It's not only the mens even u took our side
S; clever point!!
Gayatri: uff u mens!!!!
Guy: I m gonna check on Kripa
Josh: take me advice don't go man. She'll kill u!
Guy:but she'smy girlfriend yaar
He bites his toungue and is like Ooops and hurrily rushes to K room

Kripa who is standing near the window and is crying silently.. Guy comes from back and hugs her.
He observes this and makes her face towards him
G: I m sorry
K is bit mad and pretends not to care.
Kripa who is still in the same position and stays quiet
G: areey baba kaha na I m sorry
K: no response
G gets bit irritated by her behaviour and thinks Josh was right
Uff how stupid me and josh was right I should not hav apologized to u!
Kripa gets even more angry at josh and is like: iss josh to main nahin chorun gi
Guy decides to give one more try:
He holds his both ears and makes a puppy face : Kripa I don't like to c u crying and it makes me more sad.. I m sorry… aaj tak mainay kissi bhi girls say sorry nahin and look I m saying to u.. yes u Kripa!!
Kripa:only one condition
G: thanks god u spoke..i ithought I had to beg infront of u for ages
Kripa giggles a bit
G:o.k. madam as u say
K: And the condition is I don't know! (lol I hav not thought abt it) but don't worry I will tell u soon and if u don't accept it, it means I hav not forgave u. got it
G:alrite baba,
He kisses her both cheeks and makes her face towards him, moves his face closer
Both lost in each other, his lips brushes against her and kisses her. Kripa automatically put her arms arounds him. The kiss last for few seconds because they are interrupted by the sound of
Ahem ahem.



Guys i know u r still confused abt don't worry, Angad and kripa will face each other in next or coming up parts and no mystery guy! But he will come in later and will be revealed 😃 😉