FF:Hatred or love- update p.110 12/30/09

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Suhana

@Suha_18

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Wow....great start Radhika....please continue soon!!

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

i m soooooooo mad, i just wrote an update and it deleted,

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Suhana

@Suha_18

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bmtdluver
thanks suha_18

Hey Radhika,

No need to say thanks...it was truly a great update!!

You can just call me Suha or Suhana...which ever one you prefer.

Aaaaww...the next update got deleted...nevermind I'm sure that when you re-write it...it will be brilliant!!

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Part 2- this is dedicated to all my good friends and sisters, shobby, rina, mushtari, payal, priya, navi, moomoo, meeara, *xoxo* kalee, iluTD*, ariba, arooj, vidyaa, jaanlover, salmalovesrk, and others. srry if i forgot you. i probably had you the first time, but it all got deleted, and so did my update!!😭 srry! nothing personal.

(We hear the shower running) About 5 minutes later, a guy comes out wearing

He then goes over to his younger brother to wake him up. "Chinu, wake up. It is time for college, and you still have to get ready!"

Chinu- " Let me sleep yaar, its ok if we're 1 second late!"

The guy sighs, and then a naughty smile comes on his face. He takes a cup of cold water and poors it all on poor Chinu.

Chinu(shivers)- "What did you do that for????? It was freezing cold!" With that, he jumps out of bed and chases his brother around. The boy turns around to respond to Chinu's question, and we see it is the one and only, ....................................................... Sagar.

Sagar- "Hey, I told you to wake up but you didnt listen. Plus, you know that i like to get to school early and shoot som hoops and hang out with the guys!"

Chinu grumbles and goes to get ready. Ten minutes later, he comes out wearing

Sagar- "It's about time you're done! What took you so long getting ready!?! Now hurry and come down with me for breakfast, mom is waiting for us."

Chinu- "What did she make?"

Sagar- "Aloo paratha, but you cant have any. Have some cereal."

Chinu- 'Why not? i love aloo paratha?!?"

Sagar- " Because they make you fat, and I don't want a chubby brother. Anyway, she left for work and left only six paratha, and I was hungry, so i ate them."

Chinu(shocked)- "You ate all six!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You ate a whole pie of pizza yeaterday and you were still hungry for six parathas!"

(shakes his head in disgust)

Sagar- "Hey, I need my energy, since I play so many sports. Now stop complaining my golmatole(round but kinda not really) brother!"

Chinu grumbles, " Look who's talking."

They have 10 minutes to go to college, so Chinu grabs an apple and they both rush to Sagar's car. On the way to college.....................

(to be continued. Srry for the bad update! Next up, SV meet.)

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Manusha

@Manusha_Divz

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Wonderful job,cant wait for the next part,continue soon.

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Cute Update Radhika! 😊

Funny how Sagar is cautioning Chinu of eating too much so he doesn't get fat; and then Sagar eats enough for a entire football team. 😆

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shobbybee

@shobbybee

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

erm where is the update??😲

sweetie r u ok.. pls PM me..

xoxo

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shobbybee

@shobbybee

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

ok i found the awesome update of urz...

thanks for dedicating.. n found my name on ur update.....

love loved n lovin it...

u r so good in writing...

i like that word my golmatole(round but kinda not really) brother!"

continue soon hunz... xoxo..

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Hey Radhika !!

As you already know that I am a late lateef , so this time also I am late with my reply.

So sorry for that.

Now coming to the FF,

Now what can I say , everyone has already said so much that it will hardly matter if I say something.

But of course I can't stop myself from saying that the update was great.

I loved it. Shobby di has laddoo with her and you have golmatol(golu) with you.

Sounds great. Keep it up.

Vidya

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Vidyaa
Hey Radhika !!

As you already know that I am a late lateef , so this time also I am late with my reply.

So sorry for that.

Now coming to the FF,

Now what can I say , everyone has already said so much that it will hardly matter if I say something.

But of course I can't stop myself from saying that the update was great.

I loved it. Shobby di has laddoo with her and you have golmatol(golu) with you.

Sounds great. Keep it up.

Vidya

thats ok, atleast you read my update! glad you like it! yeah, i kinda tole the ladoo type thing from shobby di(srry, i forgot to ask, di). ill try to update soon

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