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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 3 ::: 
They have a ball at the party and it was time to leave……anamika knew what to do…suddenly,she spill her drink on ridhima's clothes….
Annamika: oops….m so sorry ridhima…..i didn't realize that you were standing behind me……why don't you go to the washroom and clean yourself…till that time we will wait for you…..right here….
Ridhima nods and leaves….
(after 20 mins)
Muskaan: arey yaar yeh ridhima kahan reh gayi?
Rahul: mujhe kya pata?
Muskaan: tujhse poocha maine?waise bhi tujhe pata kya hota hai?
Rahul: dekh haan….mujhse pange mat liya kar…..warna…
Muskaan: warna kya kar lega….
And they start quarrelling…..
Anamika: guys…..tum log bhi naa…..
Anjali: main toh ghar jaa rahi hoon……ridz andar so gayi hai shayad…..bye guys…plz usse koi drop kar dena…
Anamika: ya sure…
Anjali: bye guys…
Atul: anjali….suno…tum mujhe drop kardogi kya….
Anjali: mujhe laga tum mujhe offer karoge lift….
Atul: socha toh tha par fir socha kit um itni sundar ho toh uss cycle par baithi hui achi nahi lagogi….maine sahi soch naa.?
Anjali: ya right….chalo….
Atul: tum sach mein mujhe drop karogi?
Anjali:….atul…..
And atul and anjali leave…
Anamika: (in her mind)……do gaye do baaki…
Armaan: kya???
Anamika: kuch nahi….
Muskaan: oyehoe……band…
Rahul: ab kya hua?
Muskaan: who mammiji ne kaha tha ki 11 baje tak ghar pahunchke ghar ke number se call karma…..taki unhe yakeen ho jaye ki main ghar pahunchgayi hoon…..11 bajne mein15 minute hain………..rrraaahhhuuuulll…….tu mera bahut acha dost hain na….tu mujhe abhi aur issi waqt ghar chodhe ga naa……..haan bol…
Rahul: haan…..haan..
Muaskaan: tune sach me haan keh diya……{and she hugs him}….
For two seconds their background score comes into play……until…..they were interrupted by anamika's coughing…
Anamika: toh tum log jaa rahe ho?
Muskaan: kahan?
Anamika: muskaan….MUSKAAN(she shouts)……tumhari mummiji….???
Muskaan: haan…..HAAN HAAN…..mummiji……bye anamika….bye armaan……
Armaan n Anamika: bye….
(muskaan and rahul left)
15 mins past….
Anamika: arey yaar yeh ridhima ne andar kissi se shadi wadi toh nahi kar li…..wahi settle ho gayi hai…
Armaan gave anamika a weird sort of look…..thats it…
Anamika: bas…..ab aur nahi…..main toh jaa rahi hoon……..ridz ko ghar pahunchane ki zimedari tumhari….bye
Armaan: lekin…
Anamika: no….never….bye…..c ya…..aur ridz ko ghar paka choh dena…..
Saying this,she left….intentionally….so that armaan and ridz would be alone….and as soon as anamika left,ridz came out…
Ridz: baaki sab kahan gaye…????
Armaan: tum itna time lagaogi to tumhe lagta hai ki puri duniya tumhare liye ruki rahegi???
Ridz just lowers her head….and starts moving….
Armaan: kahan jaa rahi ho ab??
Ridz: ghar…
Armaan: akeli??
Ridz: hmm…
Armaan: chalo….main tumhe chodh deta hoon…
Ridz: nahi….its ok…
Armaan: maine kaha naa main chodh deta hoon…
Ridz: main chali jaungi….thanks…
Armaan: zidd karma band karo aur chalo……he holds her hand and takes her….
(both are sitting in the car…..both of them looking at each other from time to time……romantic background music is into play……)
Suddenly armaan applies breaks and ridhima's head strikes the dash board…
Armaan: riddhimaa…..(and starts checking her if there was any blood)………………………..(after chaecking)…. ..you o.k.?
Ridz nods….
Armaan: m sorry…
While ridz is totally lost into her past and the lovely moments they spent together……….by that time they reach home but ridz does not realize it…
Armaan: riddhima………ridhima…….tumahara ghar aa gaya….
Ridz all shocked……
Ridz: haan……
And she gets down……both of them remembered the scene when armaan had told ridz to kiss him and then due to some reasons armaan got upset and when he drops her home…..she comes to the car's window and kisses on the glass…….
Suddenly they wake up and off they go on their corresponding routes…..

Next scene: (at armaan's home)
Armaan is thinking about ridhima ….the scenes of the past are calling upon him……the scenes of their basketball matches……..he remembers them all….
Armaan: kyun ridhima…..tumne mere saath aisa kyun kiya??

Next scene: ridz place
Ridz is missing armaan …… his smile…..his personality and every single thing…..
{ishq leta hai kaise imtehaan………………………………………………………….background music}

Next scene: (at sanjeevani)
Anamika: hey guysss…..wassup??
Anjali: nothing yaar……..neways….last night was like awesome…food was amazing and the place was rocking..
Atul: tumhe pasand aaya anjali?.....shaadi ke baad main tumhe wahan aur bhi frequently leke jaunga….
Anjali: what???
Atul: kuch nahi….kuch bhi toh nahi…
Announcement: sabhi interns nurse station par report Karen…..
Anamika: chaliye aapki briefing ka time ho gaya hai…..
All: yes boss….
At the nurse station:
Anamika: toh interns your duties would be as follows……..dr. anjali….and dr.atul….aap dono general ward mein rahenge…..yes ma'am……dr. rahul….aap icu….dr. muskaan path lab…..dr. armaan aur dr. ridhima….aap dono lunch se pehle general ward mein rahenge….aur uske baad mr. deshpande ka case handle karenge…
Armaan: aur bi…..
Anamika: unka case main khud handle karoongi…..
Armaan: any complications?
Anamika: no o not at all….aise hi ….unki progress report dekhne ke liye…toh.doctors…..off you go to your respective duties….
[drs. Go to their duties n anamika to bi to discuss their next step]

In bi's ward:
Bi: jaldi bata na kal raat party mein kya hua???
Anamika: kya bataun bi…..kya scene tha….hero-heroine dono dance floor pe….haath mein haath….ankhon me anhken….awesome tha bi….
Bi:kya baat kar rahi hai?
Anamika: sach keh rahi hoon main bi….
Bi: yeh toh mera "d" se dil khush kar diya….
Anamika: toh bi ab mera "p" se plan no.2 suno….
(Anamika whispers something in bi's ear…..both smile at each other….n then give each other a hi5…..seem to be pretty much satisfied with their plan)

What is their next step…….would it actually prove essential in bringing armaan n ridhima together…..to know all this….hold your hearts n wait for the next update……

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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
interstin! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

THXXXX

Edited by karan05 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 4 ::::

In bi's ward:

Bi: jaldi bata na kal raat party mein kya hua???

Anamika: kya bataun bi…..kya scene tha….hero-heroine dono dance floor pe….haath mein haath….ankhon me anhken….awesome tha bi….

Bi:kya baat kar rahi hai?

Anamika: sach keh rahi hoon main bi….

Bi: yeh toh mera "d" se dil khush kar diya….

Anamika: toh bi ab mera "p" se plan no.2 suno….

(Anamika whispers something in bi's ear…..both smile at each other….n then give each other a hi5…..seem to be pretty much satisfied with their plan)

 

What is their next step…….would it actually prove essential in bringing armaan n ridhima together…..to know all this….hold your hearts n wait for the next update……

 

 

 

 

 

 

In the general ward everything is going on smoothly….everyone has finished their duties smoothly n successfully….

At the end of the day….

In the locker room:

Anjali:aaj ka din itna tiring tha naa..?

Atul: tum bahut thak gyi ho naa anjali?

Anali: nahi main toh wonder woman hoon naa..main kahan thak ti hoon?

Atul starts imagining anjali as wonder woman flying in the air…n suddenly some superhero comes n starts flying with her……it was atul @ superman….

Atul: superman superman….wonder woman aur superman…(he sings)

Anjali: atul….ATUL…..WAKE UP….

 (suddenly there is an announcement…..)

Announcement: dr.atul aur dr. anjali…dr shashank ke cabin mein aein….

Atul: arey anjali tumne sasurji se shaadi ki baat bhi kar li aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi?

Anjali: kya?

Atul: haan….warna sasurji hamein saath saath kyun bulate?

Anjali: shut up atul……(n she walks off)

Atul: sharma gayi bechari….anjali…..anjali…..(he goes after her)

Rahul: chalo yaar main bhi chalta hoon….tujhe chodh doon (to muskaan)

Muskaan: oye tu kahin pagal toh nahi ho gaya hai….ya bhainga ho gaya hai????meri taraf dekh kar kisi aur se toh baat nahi kar raha….

Rahul: zyada bhao mat kha…..chalna ahi toh chal….nahi toh bhadh mein jaa…

Muskaan: arey nahi nahi yaar tu toh bura maan gaya…..chal naa….chal chal…..

N they leave

Left in the locker room are armaan n ridhima……

Ridhima opens her locker n checks her cell phone for any calls……

Suddenly her cell phone rings…….it was anjali…..she conversed n then ridhima disconnected…

Ridhima to herself:51 missed calls!!!yeh kaun ho sakta hai?.....(checks it out n finds out that it was some unknown no…….suddenly her cell rings again…the same unknown no..)

Ridhima:.hello……hello….hello…

Voice: hi doc….

Ridhima loses her voice,…..her courage…..her senses…..

Voice: tumhe pata hai  na tum dari hui bohot khubsurat lagti ho…..

Ridhima : (with her voice trembling) kkk..a…u…nn…kaun bol raha hai…

Voice: kyun doc mujhe pehchana nahi….

Ridhima drops the phone n feels terribly weak….as she recognizes the voice……she falls down on her knees…..with her hand on her mouth….n then her head….

By this time armaan had realized that something was wrong somewhere….

Armaan: yo basket….tumhare barah kyun baj gaye?

Ridhima is too upset to reply…..n armaan realizes that this time it was something really serious…

Armaan: ridhima….tum theek ho….ridhima….RIDHIMA(he shouts)….kiska phone tha?

Ridhima:……..

 

Who was actually there on the cell phone that terrorized ridz badly……keep guessing as u wait for the next update….

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i think it was vevik! nce prt so far! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
ur ff is great👏,it is very interesting cant wait to read the next part....i think it is vivek only.i waiting for armaan and ridhima u get together
continue soon.........
Edited by sasya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
heyyyyyyyy wowwwwwwwwww i jst read ur all prts nd it ws amazng yaar ye anamika to waki mein she is toooooooooooo gud jst lvd it nd i thnk it ws vivek nd ar wss soo tensd nd ridz to badly............god cnt wait 2 read mre wht gonna happn nxt
cont soooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
woooooooow amazing part sweetie and wow its sooo vivek on the phone
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon
and PM me the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 5 :::::
Who was actually there on the cell phone that terrorized ridz badly……keep guessing as u wait for the next update….

 Armaan: bolo ridhima kiska phone tha….?

Ridhima: (shivering like hell)…armaan…..woh….

Armaan: kya ridhima?...kya……

He holds ridhima tight by her shoulders…

Armaan: kiska phone that ridhima?

ridhima : who wapis aa gaya armaan……woh…..v…v……vv..ii.vek….

armaan's completely shocked……after so much of time…..this vivek came again out of nowhere….he goes into flashbacks when vivek acted forcefully n violently with ridhima n all…….

Armaan: ridhima….ridhima…..r u sure ki woh vivek hi tha?

Ridhima just nods…

Armaan: yeh koi mazaak toh nahi hai?

Ridhima doesn't answer but her expressions force armaan to take this as the truth..

Armaan: ridhima…meri baat suno….suno…..kuch nahi hoga…..suna tumne….vivek kuch nahi kar sakta….

Ridhima (looking into armaan's eyes): armaan mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai….

Armaan: ridhima maine kaha na kuch nahi hoga….mujh par bharosa karo…

Ridhima (all frightened) : armaan    di,PAPA AUR NANI BHI GHAR PAR NAHI HAIN…!!

Armaan: what?

Ridhima: haan…abhi-abhi vivek se pehle di ka call aaya tha…..woh sab log lonavala gayen hain….parson lautengey…armaan mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai….kahin vivek ko yeh baat pata ho aur woh mere ghar pahunch gaya toh?

Armaan: ridhima….aisa kuch nahi hoga…..

Suddenly anamika enters the room….

Anamika: kya hua…..i mean kaisa kuch nahi hua…ya hoga…whatever…

Ridhima kuch bolne waali hoti hai when armaan stops her….

Armaan: kuch nahi….woh actually….anjali…dr shashank aur ridhima ki nani ma ghar par nahi hain aur ridhima ko darr lag raha hai toh main use samajha raha tha ki darne ki koi baat nahi hai…

Anamika:really…..well isme darne ki koi baat actual main nahi hai……tum chaho toh aaj raat main tumhare saath rehjati hoon….

Armaan:ya ofcourse……isse dono ki problem solve ho jayegi…

Anamika: dono?

Armaan: I mean….tumhe bhi akele rehna nahi padhega…n all…..

Anamika: anyways……chalo ridhima…..waise bhi bohot der ho gayi hai…..ab hum saath reh hi rahen hain toh ghar bhi saath hi chalte hain……waise kiske ghar par rukenge….?

Ridhima; mere ghar par ruk jaate hain…..waise bhi mera ghar zyada paas hai….

Anamika:ya u r right……chalo let's go then…..bye armaan….see ya…

Armaan simply nods and while crossing ridhima whispers in her ear…. "ridhima ghabrana mat…..kuch nahi hoga tumhe.." and he goes off….

Anamika: chalen?

Ridhima: haan….

 

Ridhima and anamika are sitting in a car….On their way to ridz place…….

Anamika: waise tum aur armaan kya baat kar rahe the…..

Ridhima: kya?(ridz is still thinking about the phone call and all…)

Anamika: tum aur armaan….locker room  main….kya batein kar rahe the?

Ridhima: kuch khaas nahi…..

Anamika:tum aur armaan kitne time se saath ho?

Ridhima:huh?

Anamika:I mean kitne time se colleagues ho?

Ridhima: more than10 months….kyun?

Anamika: phir toh tum dono….kafi ache dost ban gaaye hoge naa….i mean close friends sorts…?

Ridhima (feeling a little uncomfortable): matlab?

Anamika: don't get me wrong yaar….mera kehne ka matlab sirf good friends se tha…..

Ridhima just nods….

Suddenly anamika applies break abruptly…..someone was standing in the way…..anamika blows horn…..no reaction….

Anamika: is he nuta or something……………arey bhaisaheb marne ke liye meri hi gadi mili hai kya….road se hatto aur koi aur gadi dhundo…..

The man starts walking towards the car…….ridhima is sweating….with chills going down her spine every moment…..with the face of the man getting clearer and clearer  every moment…..ridhima turns pale….

Ridhima takes out her cell phone and searchefor armaan's no….dials it……but the man suddenly open the door….and pulls ridhima out…her cell phone falls on her seat….armaan has picked up the phone

Armaan: hello……hello….ridhima…..hello

He hears "BACHAO….BACHAO……PLEASE HELP….RIDHIMAAAA…….RIDHIIIMMMAAAA……MAIN ABHI HELP KE LIYE KISI KO BULATI HOON….."

 

Kaun tha woh..????ab kya hoga…????....ridhima kisi bohot badi problem me hai????kaun baachayega use????koi bachayega bhi ya nahi???haan…..toh kaise???/naa….toh phir kya hua ridz ke saath…..to know all this….stay alert for the latest…..anamika mitaegi armaan aur ridhima ke beech ki iss deewaar ko…..updates…

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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG 😲
 
such an amazing part👏
loved it soooooooooooooooooo much
its just toooooooooooo goood⭐️
 
hope armaan comes to help 😳
and thanks a ton for the PM 😊
and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooon  😃
 
i really can't wait to read what happens next
 
luv ya
swanz