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Posted: 17 years ago

#61

very sweet and emotional part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luved the ending w/all of them bringing their hands forward to her so she could ties rakhis.......

masi is right.............bani does have a problem in her hands.........i wonder who she'll tie the rakhi to first.........

cant wait for the next one............pls cont soooon

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 17 years ago

#62

Guys,

Guli-o just informed me to tell you guys that her internet for her lappy isn't working, so she doesn't know when she will update!

Regards,
Guli's messanger

Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago

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Vanita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#63

Part 7

All three of them had their hand out!! And it was tough for Bani to choose who she would tie it on 1st…. they were just smiling her…. And how could she choose!! It was a tough choice for her!!!!

Anu: But Masi… how could she tie it on their wrists??

Masi: Why not?

Anu: Becuz they are going to be her devars!!!!

Pushy: So??? Devars will come later!! As of now we are her brothers!!!…. And we will protect her no matter wat!!

Natu: Yup! I So agree so with that!…. WE are brothers!! Brothers are better!!… And if Jai bhaiyya does anything to her… then we will protect her!!!!!

Jai: Excuse me!!

Natu: What?? We aren't scared of you!!!..

Bani wished she could laugh at this comment… or even giggle… but with her circumstances… she couldn't!!! If only they knew what the real story was!!!!…

But then… Bani had just gotten up from there… and she decided to do all of them at the same time!!… She had gotten the thali and she had done the aarti for all three of them… and put tika's on their forehead!!… And then she had tied the rakhri's around their wrists!!! Bani was trying not to get all emotional!!!…

Ranveer: Bhabhi… no crying!!!!

Anu: Well how could she not!! She's gaining 3 brothers!!!

Natu: Yup! Very special ones too!!!

Anu: Hey does that mean I am replaced!!!!

Ranveer: Of course!!!…; I mean come on…. We got a new and better sister!!

Pushy: Better looking at well!!

Anu: What????

She had threw a pillow at Pushkar… and everyone was laughing!

Pia: Its okay Anu… He's just jealous cuz he wished he was good looking!!!..

Anu: Ha! See… serves you right!

Pushy: excuse me.. are you saying I am not good looking??

Pia: Yup!! I mean ur just jealous… becuz God didn't give you good looks like everyone else!!!!

Bani: Pia?….

Pushy: See Bhabhi…. Look at her! She's sooo mean!!

Bani: Don't listen to her!!

Pushkar: See.. she has my back!!

Pia: Di… so not fair!!!….. Who do u love more?? Ur sisters or ur brothers????

Bani was stuck in the middle of these two!!… They were all fighting for her!! Jai was just looking at this… but he didn't dare to say one word!!…. He just let everyone else talk!!… He didn't want to be in the crowd anyways!!…. He had nothing to do with Bani anyways!!…

Everyone was all laughing and joking around…. And it was such a nice atsomsphere!! Masi was watching this and she was loving every moment of it!!…

Masi: See Bani.. u are very lucky for this family!!…. I got you as my bahu… and I also gained 3 more!!! Now I can say that this family is complete!! And I fulfilled Krishna's wish!!!!!!! (Masi is older than Krishna)

Anu: Yup!!…. Mom would've been so happy if she was here today!!>.

Masi: Oh yeah!! She would be the most happiest person right now!!!>..

No one wanted to talk about it much only becuz they would get all emotional about it!!!……So they were all talking…. And having a good time!… and then they had heard a voice… from the front door… and when they had looked…. They had all seen Karuna standing there… (Masi's daughter)… and they all yelled Di!!!!…. And they ran to her….

They were soo happy that she was there!!! She was the only Daughter of Masi!!!… But she was also the eldest!!!!….. She is 4 years older to Jai!!! So she was in her early 30s!!!

Anu: Hey where's Jij????

Karuna: He's coming!! He's getting Ria out of the car!!!…

She had their 2nd child… Rohan… in her arms… He was 2 years old…. And he was sleeping on her shoulders!!!…..

The gals were looking at her…. And wondering who she was! Masi had introduced Karuna to them!!

Masi: This is my daughter…. And these are ur soon to be sister in laws!!!

Karuna: Wow!! How did good looking gals decide on marrying my ugly looking brothers!!!

Guys: WHAT??????

Karuna was laughing!!

Karuna: Hey the truth hurts sometimes!!!!….. Suck it up!!!!!

Karuna's husband Nakul… (Gonna use the same name from Pyaar Ki Manzil) Had come inside… with Ria!!!… Ria was their 6 year old daughter… who went into a coma about 2 years ago because of a car accident that occurred!!… Karuna had lost control of the car.. and after that… she never drove again!!!….. She either lets someone else drive.. or Nakul always drives!!!…

They had all seen her…. And the guys along with Anu… all came to her…. They were talking to her… but she doesn't respond to anyone…. They had always tried to get her out of it… but they couldn't!!! She could hear everything!!!… But no response was coming from her end!!!

They had always tried to tell her that they will get her toys and etc…. but nothing would work!!… they were all sad by it….. but there was nothing anyone could do!! Karuna had just held it in all the time… she was trying to be brave… but she could never fool Nakul!!!…. Cuz he felt the same way!! She just hoped one day….. that she would come running to her and yell Momma!!! If only that day would come soon!!….

Nakul: See Ria.. ur so popular!!! I come in with u and no one says hi to me!!>… I thought I was part of the family!!!! That's just sad!!!

Anu: SO Sorry my lovely Jiju!!…… Hi!! How are you?? How are you doing??

Nakul: Oh now she says hi!!!……..

Anu: Don't be jealous of Ria!!

nakul: I will be too!!… She gets more attention! What about me???

Natu: What about u??? Jij…. Don't keep taking the center stage all the time!! Share it okay!!

They would always joke around like that!!!… Nakul had seen the 4 gals standing in a line…

Nakul: Wow!! Who do we have here?? Is there a competition I don't know about???…. 4 pretty gals!!!… Hmm…….

Ranveer: Back off they are taken!!

nakul: What? No!!…. Who took them???

Ranveer: We all did!!

Nakul: Gals.. were u not thinking or something? I mean u pretty ladies… with them??

Karuna: I said that too!!!!!

Nakul: Well I so thought… She (Bani) was Ms. Universe!!!… Then.. (Pia) Ms. India!!! (Purva) Ms. World! (Rano) Ms. America!!!….. I was like wow!!! All together!!!… But then…. My hopes were all ruined… wen I got to know now that u belong to them!!!! How sad!!!!

Masi: Arre Nakul…. How much will u torment my sons!!!….

Nakul: Forever!! Its fun!!…!

Masi: You guys.. he's the best son in law anyone could have… Nakul!!!..

They all said hi!!!

Masi: And their real names are … Bani, Pia, Purva and Rano!!!

They had all come inside… and they had sat down!!.. Since the wedding was next week she had come a week early and to also tie the rakhri's around her brothers!!!…

When she had tied them… they had asked her what she wanted… because she really didn't really want anything!! Even last year she didn't take anything from them only becuz she just wanted Ria to get better! That was her only wish!! After that… her life would be complete!!…..

Jai had come to her…. And told her…. That everything will be alright!!!

Jai: She's with you! That's all that matters right???….

Karuna: Yeah but still….. I tried everything!!! I put on her favorite songs… her shows everything!! But no reaction!!!….

They didn't want her to get all sad again so they had cheered her up and not let her think about too much!!!….

The gals were getting to know Karuna… and Karuna was getting to know them and what not!! It was just a nice happy atsomsphere!!!..

Karuna: So since I am here… we are going to shop and shop….. and buy everything!! And use up the guys' credit cards right???

Anu: I soo agree with u Di!! Using bhaiyya's CC!!

Jai: Umm.. excuse me… ur married!! U can use ur husbands!!… Ahem!! But… for my raksha bandhan gift… I want my brothers CC!!!…. Me and Anu are taking our bhabhis shopping!!!…

Bani had said no to the idea!!!… Becuz she didn't want to spend money like that!!!!!…. And gals had all agreed to that!!

Karuna: Oh come now they wont care!!!….

Anu and Karuna had persuaded the gals! They didn't like that idea!!!… But the girls made them go with them! Masi had even told them that whatever they wanted… they could get it!! It was no big deal!!!

Bani was thinking that wat could she get!!… Why would she spend her soon to be husband's money if he didn't even care about her!!…

They had all gone shopping and spent almost the whole day shopping!!!… The gals were forcing Bani to buy something but she had refused!! She didn't want to buy anything!!! Infact she wasn't in the mood to shop!!

Pia: Oh come on Bani don't be just a spoilt sport!! Spend Jij's money!!!!! Its fun!!…..

Bani nodded and she walked from there… and she just window shopping!!!!!!!

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Jazmin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#64

love u babe!!! 😃😃

ok i have to do this ...i beat pachu...not once but twice in a row......yeh hui naa baath 😉

the guys are awesome...my pushy is just 😍 *sigh*...i love him...and jason... 😆😆...😳😳😳...but poor bani...i really feel for her 😕😕...i say pick the brothers...they are cuter 😉😉...🤣...karuna told the guys to suck it iup...that is hilarious...too cute...vaise...ahem...leave my pushy alone...😡😡...ussne kissi ka kya bigada hai 😉😉...umm babe...about ria...i think u wanted her in a catatonic state...not coma....😊😊...haye...i like the idea of taking someone else's cc to spend...ahem ahem...DJ's 😉😉😉...with the saali squad just growing...you will be broke 🤣🤣🤣

ok now...i loved you little email comment...and you are right...im am your psycho...although you put i am your psucho 😆

and oye...pachu...what is wrong with avocado's...nothing...they are healthy and delicious...and omg the dude at subway 😳...as guli what happened yesterday...at school...as certain name...haye...😳😳

JAZ

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 17 years ago

#65

Jazuu..tu to baat hi mat kar! First this, then the laughing of u2 for the ahm ahm!! U know what im talking about!!😭

Hayeeee...NRP are soo sweet yaar!!😳 and Jai is just plain..RUDE and BRAINDEAD!!😡

Continue Soon!👏

Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago

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Person23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#66

hey guli! finally I catch up!😆 anyways, all the parts are awesome!👏 but this jai is so seriously....😡😡😡

and bani doesn't deserve all this 😭

the guys are funny😆

and can't mausi see that her son is not happy with the marriage?😡, not that I mind though 😆

pls cont soon

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cheeze

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Posted: 17 years ago

#67

Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaani, I am here and like after agessssss..........*sigh*

But nevertheless, all caught up and haila, Jai is so rude.............

Poor Bani but the good thing is that she has caring sisters and cutie cutie brothers-in-law..................lol

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Vanita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#68

Part 8

Bani was just window shopping…. She was just looking at things…. And wasn't interested in buying things!!!… She's never been exposed to these kinds of things before!!!… Being cooped up inside the house all day…… there was a lot of things to see if only she knew!!!….. There were soo many great things to buy…… but after looking at it… she just went on!!!!…..

Masi had gone over to Chachi's house….. and she talked about the rishtaa for her daughters with the guys!!!…. Chachi had no problem with it at all!!!… She knew that her daughters would be in safe hands…. And they were also going to go into a rich family!!.. what more could she ask for!!!!!….

Now since there were going to be 4 weddings happening things were more crazier!!!!….. And chachi wanted to make sure that this wedding was the talk of the town so she could brag about to everyone!!!……

The gals were going store to store…. And since they were there….. the gals wanted to buy something for the guys!!!… So they went to a mens store…. And told Bani to pick out something for Jai!!….. They were all going to get them something!!….. how could Bani get him something….. but she couldn't really say anything…. So she had picked out a shirt for him!!… all the girls had!!!…..

Karuna: Wow! this is a good choice Bani!!…. I know Jai will like this!! He likes things like this!!

Anu: Yes he does!!! Wow! Someone already knows wat he likes and dislikes!!!!…

Bani: I just….

Karuna: Its okay!….. U will get to know plenty more!!!!!

They were all teasing her….. But wat could she say!!…. She couldn't really tell them that their brother doesn't want to marry her… and he doesn't like her!!! or else it wont be good!!!….

The gals had told her to get something for herself… but she had kindly refused!!…. She said she didn't want anything!!!!

She had gone into one store… where they were selling Murtis…. And she went inside….. And there was a small little Ganesh Murti……. She had asked how much it was…. And wen the guy told her the price….. She had taken out the cash that she had…. And bought it……..

The guy had wrapped it for her…… and gave it to her in a small bag!!!…..But he was looking at Bani!!… Bani was just looking at other things…..And he had decided to give her another small one… just like the one she had bought…… And he had told her!!

Bani: But I only want one!!

Guy: I know! But just give the other one to anyone you want!! Its my gift!!

Bani: Are you sure??

guy: Yes!!… you take it……

Bani said thank u and she walked out from there! she was looking for the other gals…… They had lots of bags in their hands and they had done a lot of shopping…….. seemed like the bags doubled!!!!

Bani: What did u guys buy?

Anu: Bhabhi don't u worry!! This is all for the wedding!!!

Bani: What??

Anu: yup!!!!!

After spending like 4 hours there…. they had headed home…. to WM!!!… The guys saw all the shopping they had done!!!!…. and their jaws had dropped!! So many shopping bags!!!!!! The girls thought that this was nothing!!!

Natu: What did u guys buy??

Karuna: few things for the wedding!

nakul: This is few!! I wonder what a lot is?…

Anu: What jij?… this is things that we need!!

Nakul: And u don't have any of this?

Anu: No its all new!!!…. just for us!!!

Nakul: Who did the least shopping??? Let me guess.. no one!!

Anu: No!!….There was one person!!

Pushy: Pia???

Anu: Nope!!

Ranveer: Rano then!!

Anu: Nope!!!

Natu: Purva!!!!

Karuna: Wrong again!!!….

Pushy: well it cant be either of u!! so that only leaves us with…. Bani Bhabhi!!

anu: Yes!!! She didn't spend one thing today!!!!

Pushy: So she's the smart one!!!

Anu: Hey!!!

Pushy was laughing!!!..

Pushy: Man Jai bhaiyya ur lucky!! Ur wife wont spend all of ur money!!!!

Nakul: Yes very lucky!!!…… Man we need people like Bani!!!!……

Jai didn't say anything! He just sat there!!! He didn't say much!!… He had gotten up and he went upstairs…. He had said I will be back…….

Bani just looked at him….. but she didn't say anything!! She knew how he was feeling……

He was busy making plans for the big party that was on the day of his wedding!!… He so was going to be there!!!! They were talking about just everyone going together and what not….. and just have a blast!!!……..

He couldn't really talk about it much!!…….. So he hung up!!!..

The gals showed the guys the shirts that they had bought them…. and the guys liked it very much!!!…. Anu had told Bani to go give Jai his!!!… Bani didn't want to go!!…… But she had no choice!!!!… She wanted to avoid going to his room very much!!…… but she couldn't tell anyone the present situation so she went upstairs!!!….. Jai had stepped inside the bathroom…. And Bani had knocked….. Since she didn't hear anything she had opened it… She heard the sink in the bathroom…. So she had put the shirt on the bed…. And she had ran out from there and came back down!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai had come out and he saw the shirt!!!…. He looked at it… and he thought that Anu or someone had bought it for him!!…. So he had put it away!!….. He had come back down again…. and they all made a plan to go out….. like with all the couples… to go out for dinner….

Anu: Perfect!! And u guys can all wear ur new shirts!!!!…

The guys had agreed on that!!!…. Since the gals stayed there… Anu had taken them into her room…. and they just freshened up in her room!!….. They were just giggling and talking and what not…..

Karuna fed Rohan….. so that way…. Masi would just put him to sleep!!!……There was a caretaker for Ria… Karuna had kissed her… before they were going to lie her down on the bed!!…..

Bani had come out of Anu's room…. She was ready!! She saw Ria being put in the room… and she had come inside to see her…..Bani was just looking at her… She was a cute little thing…. She had come to her…. and sat next to her….

Bani: Hi Ria!!…. U don't know me… but I am Bani!! Well soon to be ur Mami!!…..

Bani was talking to her…. and she just rubbing her hand……She had told her goodnight… and she had stepped out of the room!!….Everyone was ready to go!!!… the guys looked good in their shirts…. It was perfect fitting and everything!!!….. Rohit had ended up coming a little late… and Anu made him change his shirt!!!

Rohit: But why?

Anu: Becuz I bought this for u!!! so u have to wear it!!! We bought all of u guys shirts… so now wear it!

Rohit: Geez! Women!!!

Anu: Excuse me?!

Rohit: Nothing!!

Rohit had gone to change…. Anu saw the shirt that Bani picked out for Jai!!!!… Jai had thanked her for the shirt…. Anu was going to tell him that it was Bani!!…. But then Bani had stopped her from telling him!!… So she had just said no problem!!…. Everyone was wondering why……. Masi was calling Jai…. So Jai had gone to her inside her room……

Anu: Bhabhi why didn't u let me tell him… I mean.. everyone….

Bani: No its just that…. I don't want him to know that I got it for him!

Everyone was shocked!!! Why did she say that for???

Anu: Oh I got it…. U want to tell him on ur own don't u??? that u got it for him! Aww… how cute!!

Everyone was ready to go….. they had taken 3 cars….. and they settled on 1 place that they were going to go at!!! But before they had left.. Pushkar had come to Jai…..

Jai: What happened???

Pushkar: We are all going for dinner okay?!

Jai: Yeah I know and???

Pushkar: And… we are all going as a family!!!… SO that means… u are going to be with us!!!

Jai: Uhh… okay?!… I know that!!

Pushkar had reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out his phone!!!

Pushkar: No phone!!! Its like ur phone is more important!!! Let go for a little bit

Jai: But..

Pushkar: No buts!! Ur focus will be here!! with us!! not ur phone!

Karuna: I agree!!! Man u and ur phone…… get away from it for a little while it wont hurt!!!… I mean with Bani around I don't know why u need ur phone anyways!!!!!!!!

They had all gone to a nice little restaurant and they were all having a nice time!!!… it was a blast!! They hadn't had that much fun in ages!!! And getting to know everyone and talking about their childhood and wat not…. Bani was just quiet and listening to everyone talk!!!… She was sitting next to Jai…. But not once did she look at him!!…. She was always looking at others…. Or elsewhere!!

Jai's napkin had dropped on the floor and Bani went go and pick it up…..but then he had gone to reach for it too…. But he had whispered to her…

Jai: I don't need ur help!!

Bani had straightened back up again on her chair..…. And she regretted even trying that!!!….. She couldn't even help the man without him saying anything!!!!!!…….

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Jazmin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#69

me again! 😃

first off...so sorry babe...but got home and crashed...then was up at 6 again this morning cuz had to go pickup my site eval 😕😕😕...anyway...did some shopping...courtesy of my dad 😉😉😉...ok now to your story

chachi ki toh baath hi maat karo 🤬...yeh budhi meri hatoon pitega 😡😡😡...man bani...what is your prob...you dont want to shop...tik hai...let me shop naa...i have no problem spending other peoples money...right jaani...just let jiju come...😆...jai ki wallet ki toh band baj gayi 👍🏼...good job girls 😉😉...🤣🤣🤣...least shopping...woh bhi pia...🤣🤣🤣...who are you kidding...🤣🤣🤣...jai is like a rock...just sitting there......what is his problem...he he...did he have problems in childhood...maybe attachment issurs...yaar...dont get me started on my child dev stuff 😳😳😳... rothi: geez women! 😆😆...i love that expression...😆😆...pushy meri jaan...the only one with a brain...taking jai's phone away from him...mera sher! 😳...LOVE HIM!!! ok now im paaka sure...jai has a stick up his a*s...it was only a napkin...chill out 😡...

loved it yaar...cant wait for the one tonight 😃😃😃

@ shireen: i know yaar it has been ages...haila...woh adhuri kahani...😆😆😆...has it been that long...omg...too funny...😉😉 as for number...yaar...nehki aur pooch pooch...jaa jaldi jaa...i want that #...😳

JAZ

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Shireen

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Posted: 17 years ago

#70

Hey Guli! 😃 I'mm caught up now 😃😆

This is shaping out pretty good yaar 👏 Jai is being an idiot as usual and i don't like him! 😡😡 Bani got good bros! what more could she ask for besides a better behaved Jai!

Karuna's daughter's state is really sad! hope she gets better soon! 😳

Loving this FF yaar and keep it up! 😃

Originally posted by: jnawaz

and shireen...yaar...if only you knew why i want to go to subway 😳😳😳...i was there...on sunday and let me tell you...someone gave me extra avocado 😉😉😉...mujhe free sandwich nahin chahiyeh...but but but...kuch phone numbers chahiyeh...can you do that 😛😛
JAZ

Well i have 1 bandha at work who is good looking so if you want...😉😉 saath saath mein free sub! 😆😆 but he's quiting in about 1.5 weeks, so if you want him, better start running missy! 😉😆

btw, i haven't talked to you in ages! 😲 where on earth did you dissapear too?! 😕 you have to finish telling me your story whitch is left adhoora! 😆😉