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nishi

@nishiraju

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Posted: 17 years ago

#151

wonderful update .........loved it...................pls cont soon..........👏👏👏

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#152

Rano taking the place of an elder family member here - both parts very nicely written, with everything falling into place. Thanks K!!

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

@sweet_gurl61

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Posted: 17 years ago

#153

Wow, you updated afer long. I thought you had forgotten about this beautiful FF. Loved how you brought out Jai's side of the story and I really like Rano's concern for her sister's happiness. What is Jai going to say? Please continue soon. I miss this FF.

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Khatija Hoosen

@lenmed

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Posted: 17 years ago

#154

Rano spies the packed bags in adjacent bedroom and looks at Jai confused.

Following her gaze he smiled.

"Seems like your timing was perfect Rano, I was er…. Actually coming to Mt Abu today, Massi and I had a talk too you see, and I promised that I will go back to reclaim my wife". But looks like you beat me too it, he teased.