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Fanfic by Usachick821

hey guys, here is the first part of my fan fic kalyug. For those of you who dont know what the story is i posted my summary as well.. I will post a new part every other day so the next part will be posted on Friday. 😃

Hope u guys like it.

KALYUG

A mysterious girl washes up on the shores of Goa, where she is rescued by a big shot doctor named Druv. When she wakes up in the hospital, she doesn't remember anything about whom she is or where she came from. Both of them later decide to name her Radhika. Druv's loneliness after his wife saloni leaves him disappears as he starts to develop a special bond with Radhika, and she is able to trust him more than anyone else. Four years pass by and Radhika and Druv fall in love and become engaged to each other. Before their marriage, Druv decides to surprise Radhika by taking her to Mumbai for a special concert with her favorite singers. While in Mumbai, Druv and Radhika's world all of a sudden crashes down as Radhika meets Rajeev who claims he is her husband. Rajeev tells Radhika that she had fallen off of a boat that Rajeev had rented for their anniversary, and had been missing since. Radhika's real name was Mohini, and she had two kids with Rajeev. Mohini tries to restart her relationship with Rajeev, and both Mohini and Druv try to forget each other. But somehow Mohini realizes that something isn't right with Rajeev, and starts finding out the truth behind what really happened between her and Rajeev as her memory slowly returns...

What was the real reason she ended up nearly half dead on the shores of Goa? And what will happen to her relationship with Druv?

Find out only on the fan fiction "Kalyug"

Kalyug- PART ONE

CAST-

Amit Jain- Druv Sharma

Deepa Parab- Radhika/Mohini

Sachin Sharma- Rajeev Mathur

Aroona Irani- Druv's mom

Part One-

DRUV'S HOUSE

Lying in his bed, Druv finds himself unable to sleep. He glances at the clock that reads 3 am.

Druv (thinking to himself) - aaj mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ke kuch hone wale hai…..

His thoughts are interrupted as his cell phone rings…

Druv- Hello?

Nurse- Doctor Druv?

Druv- yes

Nurse- Doctor Hospital me ek bohat badi emergency hogayi hai, ek aurat payi gayi thi samundar ke kinare, aur kuch maachi wale unko hospital le aye. Wo bahut buri halat me hai doctor, unke shaarir (body) mein bahut ghaav hai aur unka kaafi khoon ja chukka hai. Aap Jaldi ajaye!

Druv jumps out of his bed and heads for his bedroom door…..

HOSPITAL

The nurses take the woman into the E.R, while Druv rushes in through the hospital doors in his white coat. He impatiently looks around for the nurse and finds her running through the hallway towards him. She drops the files as she nears him, and an angry look comes across Druv's face. He walks over to the nurse who out of embarrassment is picking up the files. He bends down to help her.

Druv- aap ko itna bhi kyal nahi ke aapke ye bewakoofi ke waje se kise ki jaan ja sakti hai

Nurse- Sorry doctor…

The files are organized, and both of them stand up.

Druv- lao, file mujhe de do..

The nurse hands over the file while Druv checks over it.

Druv- kya patient ko blood hook up kar diya hai?

Nurse- yes doctor, par…

Druv- par kya?

Nurse- Kaafi khoon ja chukka hai, aur baachne ki chances sirf dus percent hai, sab doctors ne maana kar diya hai wo aurat ka operation karne se...

Druv- aapne swaarth ke liye kisi ki jaan thodi gawa sakte hai, aise logo ko to doctor ka certificate hi khabhi nahin milna chaiye.

Druv and the Nurse rush over to the E.R, he puts on his gloves and prepares for the operation. Other doctors crowd around him unsure of whether he will be able to save her. A green cloth covers the woman, as Druv glances at her face, and something inside him tells him that he can save her.

After five hours of intense operation, Druv closes the last few stitches on the woman's body.

Doctor #1- congratulations Druv, tumne to wo kar dikhaya jo hum sab bhi nahin kar paye.

Doctor #2, #3, #4- yes, congratulations……

Druv- thanks….

The other doctors leave and Druv is left alone in the room. He looks over at the heart monitor, and does a few blood tests just to make sure everything was ok so far. The operation room clock starts ringing, its 9 o'clock.

He walks over to the woman's head, and watches her sleeping.

Druv (thinking to himself) - sab tumhare jaise lucky nahin hote, sab yahin sochthe hai ke sirf meri mehnat se tum baachi, par sirf me aur tum jaante hai ke tumhe kitni fight baaki thi, tum me jeene ki bohat icha hai.

Druv smiles and brushes her hair softly…

He whispers in her ear- sleep tight

Druv leaves.

A WEEK LATER….

Druv is walking into the hospital…

Druv- nurse!

Nurse- yes doctor!

Druv- uh, wo… uh, ahem, wo aurat ka file wapas dena mujhe...

Nurse- Lekin doctor, ye chauhati (4^th time) bar hai ye week mein, aur bhi patients' hai jinki aapki zaroorat hai…

Druv- mein jitna kehta hoon utna hi karo, un patients ko Doctor Arjun sambhal sakte hai

Nurse- yes doctor

She runs to get the file… Druv comes to the woman's room. He takes the chart off of the end of her bed.

Druv- not bad, not bad. Aap kaafi behtar ho chuki ho yesterday se. Baby steps yaad hai na madam ko? (Druv grabs a stool and sits on it) aur waise bhi aap ko….

He turns around in the stool to see the nurse standing in the doorway, trying to stifle her laughter. He tells her to come in.

Nurse- ye lijiye (snickers)

Nurse- Aab me jao?

Druv- yes, you can go

The nurse turns around to leave, but then stops.

Nurse- waise bhi aapko aur memsaab ko disturb nahin karma chahiye

And she runs out. Druv turns back to the woman.

Druv- aaj kal bohat bolne lagi hai….

6 MONTHS LATER…..

Druv runs across the hallway, he turns the corner when he sees the numbers "312". His heart beating wildly, it was six months ago that the mysterious woman that he operated on had gone into a coma. Druv never expected her to wake up at all, and over these past six months he had talked to her and told her things he would never tell anyone else thinking that she would never wake up. Everyone had made fun of him that he was spending more time in her room than he was at his own house, but even though he resented it he knew that they were right. He had developed a special bond with her, a bond that he had never shared with anyone after his wife Saloni had left him four years ago…

So many questions ran through his mind as he entered room 312. Who was she? Where did she come from? And why had she washed onto the shore? He pushed aside the throng of people surrounding her bed, waiting for her to open her eyes. He finally got himself a spot around her head.

Druv whispers- kholo aapni aanke, please… kholo….

Suddenly her eyes start fluttering, as Druv's mind starts racing and his heart thumps loudly. The room is pin drop silent, and a bead of sweat drops from Druv's forehead onto her cheeks… She opens her eyes, slowly at first, but then completely. She looks completely bewildered as she tries to move her head. She opens her mouth slightly, and screams…….

TWO HOURS LATER…

Druv waits outside as the woman finally calms down. He re-enters the room as the other doctors leave. Druv knows that she had a case of shock, and who wouldn't if you were in a situation like hers? He sees that she's sitting in her bed crying… Druv walks over to the side of her bed and sits down. He lets out a deep sigh.

Druv- tumne to hum he daara hi diya tha, you gave us quite a scare.

The woman sits there quietly, as tears stream down her face.

Druv- aacha, abhi pehli baat ye hai ke tumhara naam kya hai? Tum rehti kaha ho? Aur kaun tumhare rishtedaar hai?

She still says nothing...

Druv gets sterner- tum kaha rehti ko?

Nothing…

Druv finally gets mad and says- kuch to bolo, tumhare rishtedaar kaha hai??!!

Woman- pata nahin

Druv is taken aback at the sound of her voice, she sounded extremely scared.

Druv- tum rehti kahan ho?

Woman- pata nahin

Druv dares to ask the last question- tumhara naam kya hai?

Woman- PATA NAHIN!!! MUJHE PATA NAHIN!!! MUJHE AKELA CHOD DO!!!

She starts screaming sobbing uncontrollably as the other doctors rush in and Druv leaves the room. He comes into the hallway, and wipes a tear off of his cheek.

THE NEXT DAY….

Druv goes back into room 312 to do the woman's check up, when he enters, he sees her sitting up drinking some chai. He walks over to her and sits down on his chair.

Druv- aacha abhi aapka haat dikhaye please…

W- kyun...

Druv- thode blood tests aur run karne hai, haat dikhaye.

W is hesitates; Druv sighs and points towards the window

Druv- aacha waha kya hai?

W looks away when Druv gets her finger and pricks it.

W- ooowww!!!

Druv (smiling)- sorry!

W pulls back her finger immediately. Druv scribbles something down on her chart. He gets up and walks around the room looking for something.

W- Wo nurse bata rahi thi ke aapne meri jaan bachayi?

Druv (still looking around) - ye to har doctor ka farz hota hai ke uske patient ko jitne chances hai utni milne chahiye.

W- ha, magar jab sab dusre doctors operation karne se mana kar diya tha tho sirf aapne hi kyun ha kardi?

Druv- kyun, aapko thab marna pasand hota?

W- nahin, aisi baat nahi….

Druv (finds what he's looking for) - aacha to milted hai... uh... uh... oh i'm sorry....

W- don't worry, mein bhi aapna naam nahi jaanti, to aap sorry bolne se kya hoga?

Druv blushes and smiles, he walks over to her and sits down on the side of her bed…

Druv- waise, uh, meine ek.. uh... naam...

W- bolo, mein kaat thi nahi

Druv- ha, well if you don't mind mein ne aapke liye ek naam socha hai

W- kya naam hai?

Druv- Radhika… magar apko ye naam nahin pasand to..

W puts her hand on Druv's, and Druv looks down

W- mujhe ye naam bohat pasand hai, aaj se mera naam hai Radhika.

Fanfic By Tani91:

Here's my concept hope u guys like it 😳

Concept

In Mumbai 3 sisters are from a middle class family.Aarti,Sweta and Niharika Mehta.They are respectful,caring and happy in their lives.One day they go out of town for a few days.But when they come back ,depressing news awaits them....their parents had died in a terrible fire that left their house and parents perished.The girls are devastated.Since they have no where to go and have no relatives living in Mumbai ,they have to live with a family friend-Mr Harshvardhan Shah and his wife Gayatri and their 2 sons Aryan,and Ranvir and one nephew Ronit.Now this family is torn apart.The 3 brothers have fights everyday and hate each other's guts.Gayatri tries to patch them up and tries to support them every time but they dont care about anything.And Mr Walia is always wrapped in his business.Pretty soon the girls arrive and try to adjust into their new lives,but can't since all 3 brothers are rude to them all the time.But Gayatri treats them as her own daughters.They also love her to death and would do anything for her.Gayatri tells the girls that this house is a mansion but not real home and I want you 3 girls to make it into one.The girls are shocked as Gayatri asks them to marry the brothers!!!Aarti with Ronit ,Sweta with Aryan and Ranvir with Niharika.The girls want Gayatri happy so they promise to try their best.The brothers are shocked too but their dad(in ronit's case uncle)Forces them to marry the girls.BUt the brothers have their own plans and decide to make life hell for the girls .and they share a secret that will change the girl's lives forver..One day Niharika goes missing and Sweta and Aarti are determined to find her as they unravel the mystery they find who is responsible for their sister's disapperance.they also find out that the secret the brothers share could endanger their lives.

hope u guys like it😳

Aarti(Deepa Parab)

Sweta(Saumya Tandon)

Niharika(Kachi Kaul)

Aryan(Sachin Sharma)

Ranvir(Iqbal Khan)

Ronit(Amit Jain)

Gayatri(Zankhana Sheth)

Harshvardhan(Arvind Rathod)

PART 2 by Usachick

After countless months searching for Radhika's relatives and posting numerous ads in the newspaper, Radhika finally decides to move on with her life. She starts her own music store, and Druv and Radhika become the best of friends….

2 years later…

Using his key Druv enters Radhika's apartment with a huge grin on his face; He couldn't wait to give her the good news that he found out late last night. Druv carefully makes his way around the mess in the living room –

Druv (thinking to himself)- Radhika bhi na, kabhi bhi ek bhi saman ko sahi jaga par nahi raksakti.

Finally he reaches Radhika's bedroom door and knocks on the door. Five minutes pass and Radhika still doesn't open the door.

Druv- aacha, to memsaab abhi tak so rahi hogi, abhi maaza chaka tha hu

He opens the door and sticks his head inside just to make sure she's sleeping. He tiptoes in to the side of her bed and kneels down so that he faces Radhika. He gazes at her beautiful face as she slumbers..

Druv- neend me bhi tum bohat khoobsoorat ho…

Druv reaches for her face, but then stops his hand. He gets a naughty idea. He runs over to Radhika's bathroom and opens the cabinet. He searches around for some shaving cream but instead finds shaving gel. Druv grabs it and reads the bottle.

Druv- ladies bhi na, sada shaving cream nahi use karsakti. Par ye bhi chalta hai.

He runs back over to Radhika's bed. Carefully he takes her hand and puts tons of shaving gel on it. Then he puts her hand back. He looks around for a feather or something he could use to tickle her nose, but then instead uses a piece of string. He comes close to her face and dangles the string across her nose. Radhika groans and frowns. Druv again brings the piece of string across her nose. Radhika raises her hand and goes to scratch her nose but before her hand reaches her nose she slaps Druv by accident. Druv falls back in shock and Radhika all of a sudden wakes up and sits up in surprise. She sees that Druv has his hand on his cheek which is covered in shaving gel.

Radhika- Druv, ye kya hua tumhe?

She reaches her hand out to help him when she sees the shaving gel on her hand.

Radhika- aacha, aab samji. Tum kab ye shararat karna chod doge? Dekha, mein hamesha nahin kehti thi? Ise kehte hai karma!

Druv- aacha, tho ise kya kehte hai?

Radhika- kya?

Druv grabs the shaving gel bottle and sprays Radhika with it. Radhika is shocked and screams Druv's name. She gets up in anger.

Radhika- aaj me tumhe nahin chodoongi!!!

Radhika chases Druv out into the living room, Druv dashes behind the sofa as Radhika tries to catch him. Radhika jumps on the sofa as Druv dodges her, but she manages to get his sleeve and Druv falls back on top of Radhika.

They both start laughing uncontrollably, with tears streaming down both of their faces. Finally Radhika stops laughing while Druv still can't stop laughing. She looks at Druv in an embarrassed way, and finally Druv notices how uncomfortable and stops laughing.

Druv- (chuckles) kyun kya hua?

Radhika (angry)- mere upar se abhi utho ge?

Druv blushes. He tries getting up off of Radhika but sees that his shirt button is caught on her pajama top. He stops.

Radhika- aab kya hua?

Druv- kuch nahin, mein comfortable hogaya hu na isi liye utne ki icha nahi horahi.

Radhika hits him on the arm in annoyance.

Druv- aacha baba mein to mazak kar raha tha, darsal meri shirt ki button tumhari pajama top par atki hui hai.

Radhika looks at her shirt.

Radhika- arre ha, ab kya kare?

Druv- kya kar sakte hai, tumhe tumari short utarni hogi

Radhika- par mein ek ladki hu!

Druv- to meine kab na kaha?

Radhika- Druv!! (slaps his arm again) mein kaise shirt utar sakti hu, meri izzat ka kya hoga? Tum shirt utaro!

Druv- arre, to meri izzat ka koi kyal nahin, parayi ladki ke samne mein nahin shirt utarta!

Druv pretends to be upset. They both carefully sit up. Radhika hits him again.

Radhika- Druv! Shirt Utaro!!

Druv- teek hai, tumhari izzat bachane ke liye mujhe aapni khoni pad rahi hai. Chalo ye bhi manzoor.

Druv takes his shirt off. Radhika hits him again and Druv winces in pain and grabs his arm.

Druv- aab ye kisliye??!!!

Radhika (unhooking Druv's shirt from hers)- ye sab shuru karne ke liye. Dheka, abhi sab jaga shaving gel ho chuka hai.

Druv- kya farak padtha hai? Waise bhi ye apartment aur ganda to nahin hosakta.

Radhika hits him again.

Druv- ooowww, dekho tum aaj kal mujhe bohat marne lagi ho.

Radhika grins and goes toward her bedroom as Druv follows her. She turns around and looks at him.

Radhika- tum kaha aarahe ho?

Druv- jaha tum ja rahi ho

Radhika (annoyed)- mujhe kapde badal ne hai!

Druv- to meine kab na kaha?

Radhika- Druv!!!!

Druv- aacha to mein us taraf face karta hu, tum kapde badalo.

Radhika hits him again.

Druv- (laughing), aacha baba mein living room mein wait karta hu!

Druv walks towards the living room when he stops and turns around.

Radhika- aab kya!

Druv- meri shirt?

Radhika throws his shirt at him playfully and pushes him out of her bedroom and shuts the door. Druv walks over to the couch and sits down.

2 hours later…

Druv is watching T.V. when Radhika comes out in a beautiful sky blue salwar. She walks towards Druv smiling who is purposely ignoring her. She stands beside him impatiently for a couple of minutes for Druv to say something about how she looks. Druv stares at the cricket match on the T.V. Radhika walks in front of the T.V when Druv finally looks at her. He gets up in awe, and Radhika smiles and blushes. He walks towards her and smiles at her.

Radhika- (all bubbly) kya hua Druv?

Druv- Radhika, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Radhika (blushes) – kya??

Druv's expression all of a sudden changes to anger.

Druv- tum mere match ke samne khadi ho!!

Radhika gets mad and hits him again. Druv starts laughing.

Radhika- aab ye to batao ke hum kaha ja rahe hai?

Druv- humara final destination to surprise hai, par abhi ke liye humhe mere ghar jaana hai thaki mein shirt badal sakta hu.

Radhika- teek hai, chalo

Radhika heads for the door when Druv grabs her hand. Radhika turns around.

Druv- waise aaj tum bohat aachi lag rahi ho…

Radhika- really?

Druv- sach

Radhika- aacha, aab mujhe ghoorna band karo warna tumhe mujse pyar ho jayega.

Druv- ho chuka hai

Radhika looks at him in surprise and then hits him again.

Radhika- tum bhi na!

They both laugh and head out the door.

Some time Later…

Druv pulls up at his house. He turns and looks at Radhika.

Druv- tum andar nahi arahi?

Radhika- uh, nahin, par tum ma ko zaroor kehna ke meine unko yaad kiya.

Druv- teek hai, tumhari marzi.

Druv gets out of his car and enters his house. Meanwhile Radhika gazes out of the passenger side window when she sees a fight between a man and a woman. The woman tries to protect her child in her arms as the man tries to snag her purse. Radhika gets out of the car and runs to their aid.

Radhika- kya kar rahe ho tum! Use chod do!!! Chodo!

She pushes the man away from the woman. The man pulls out a knife and threatens to kill her.

Thief- mein is aurat ko chod doonga, par tum tumara purse nikalo.

He points the knife at her. Druv walks out of his house and sees Radhika in trouble. He runs at full force towards Radhika and suddenly stops. The thief sees Druv and grabs Radhika's hand pulls her towards him and holds the knife to her throat.

Thief- eh, aage mat badna, warna ye ladki marjaye gi!

Part 3 will be posted on Tuesday, thnx!