Andankaaka Colony - Chap23/24 pg. 23!! Final

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hopper_ocean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

beautifuly and cutely written girls. Enjoyed truly 😆 and looking forward for more 😊

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Shammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Shemmo is not playboy.. Paiyan ivlo naala ivlo ponnungala ore colony la parthathilla thats why he is staring at them 😆

@Shobi Mom: Shemmo oda amma avanuku coll admission innum vangala, its mother mistake 😆 Hahaha he is new la in the colony, so he will join late ah in college 😆😛

Thanksss for the lovely commentsss 🤗

Next chapter vara koncham late aagum, pls bear with us 😳

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Shammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 3

Shubba receives the phone call, she says "I will be there with in 30min" and disconnects the phone. She grabs her purse and locks her house. She knocks Jaya's house, Jaya opens the door. Sri who is watching football clippings in YouTube is shocked "Who is knocking this time". He starts to panic and slowly walks down from upstairs. Jaya tells Shubba that Sri got late classes today and is free to help her. Jaya sees Sri who is slowly walking down, asks him to go with Shubba and help her. Sri who is puzzled with confusion agrees and both leaves. 😕

Shemmo is temp to look outside and decides to look outside anyway. He sees a twin sisters, Haritha and Sneha who is waiting for someone outside of their house. Shemmo in mind voice "Chaaa innum evlo ponnunga intha colony la? Oru boy ya kooda i havent seen yet. Wrong ah vanduthomo? Onnume puriyala. Sari enna nadakuthu nu thaan parpome". 😆 Suddenly he sees 2 more people who is walking towards Mini's house. Ratna is going to there hand over her daughter Kritika to Haritha and Sneha as all three girls goes to same school. Mini comes out and wishes Kritika "Happy Birthday Kritika, God bless u". Haritha and Sneha sings in chorus "Happy Birthday Kritu". Kritika thanks to them for the birthday wishes. 😃 As usual Ratna looks left, right, front, back and looks up . She circles her eyes everywhere and spots Shemmo.

Ratna screams "Oh my god peiii". Shemmo runs away from there. Kritika asks "Amma enna aachu engala paatha pei maathiri iruka". Ratna says "Loose aa nee anga mela paaru oru uruvam is there". Kritika sees and says she see nothing. Haritha says "Aunty i see nothing too". Sneha says "I see nothing, Aunty are you ok?". Mini checks and sees nothing. Shobi hears some noise from her room and looks through window. Ratna who is confused looks up towards Shobi's house again and spots Shobi. She yet again screams "Oh my god another peiii". 🤣 All three girls look up and says "Its our new neighbor" and laughs. Kritika, Sneha and Haritha leaves to school. Mini asks Ratna not to get scared.

Ratna walks back to her house seeing Shobi and Shobi too keep on glaring at her. Shobi yet again gets annoyed at Ratna and sadly murmurs "Enna poi pei nu sollitaale, one day vachukiren antha girl a". Shobi checks what her son Shemmo is doing and is surprised to see Shemmo arranging his room. Shobi feels "En paiyan is better as he never called me pei". 😆 Shobi asks Shemmo whether he is not studying for the French exam which is going to come soon in his new college. Shemmo replies "Illa ma, nethu thaane admission kedaichuthu so next week join panna sonnagale, apdina koncham time iruku". Shobi suddenly has some doubts and asks Shemmo "Thambi, Subjects ellam enna language la they teach, English la thaane?" Shemmo replies "Amma see english lesson english la irukum, Hindi lesson la Hindi irukum and french lesson french la irukum". Shobi muttufies on the wall and ask him to continue with his room cleaning. She feels "Naan enna kethen, ivan enna pathil solran. Enaku theriyatha french lesson french la irukumu nu". 😆

Shubba and Sri reaches hospital. Sri takes a deep breath and feels, "Happy that Shubba Aunty didnt take me to police station" and feels guilty for cutting break. Sri and Shubba both enters hospital, and Sri gets shock. 😲

Freeze...

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Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Ena nadakuthu inga? Thalaiyum puriyala valum puriyala...

Shamu, Shobi...Peiya? Appovei sonen intha familya thorathukanganu, yaravuthu ein pecha ketengala?

Happy Birthday Krithika!

Feeling guilty a? Ada pavi! Ena hospital la anupuna pero guiltya? Una summa vida kudathu! Amma! Police Station kuti ponga.

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TTfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Hahaha 🤣 Ratna akka scared again.. 🤣 and Shobi akka asking language doubt..🤣🤣 Superb chapter 3.. hmm enna aachi in hospital??? waiting for next chapter..😊

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JAYASHREE

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

another good chapter shamz, but that suspense factor still there? why is sri shocked at the hospital? and ratna still scared of shobi and her paiyan! shobi's ,mind voice appreciating her paiyan-too good!

eagerly waiting for the next part!

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Pearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Very good chapter Shammy!. Rofl... Athey bayaam for Ratna!😛 That too when she saw up again it was Shobi🤣🤣🤣... Aiyoo Pavam Shobi!😆😆

Haritha, Sneha and Kritu remba chamathu kutties aa?😃

Haha conversation between Shammy and Shobi is so good. Appadiyay I could feel so real🤣

Sri why shocked. I think maybe Gisel is fine.

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viswai123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Ratna...

-Shobi (Pavapatta Amma) & Shemmo (Romba romba nalla payen)

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Esther John

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

full of suspense!!!!👏 So who is in the hospital????😕 Lovely episode ... Ratna was just 😆😆😆🤣 ... So Shemmo is a good boy who just wants another friend ... why not Sri???😉