Andankaaka Colony - Chap23/24 pg. 23!! Final

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Smiles-20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Wow nice chapters, thanks so much, feels like a movie here!

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Pallanguzhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Super Shemmo! 👏⭐️

Be sure to inform everyone to be here for the last 2 episodes..

When is the iruthi paagam releasing? So sad 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pallanguzhi
Super Shemmo!👏⭐️
Be sure to inform everyone to be here for the last 2 episodes..

When is the iruthi paagam releasing? So sad😭

I will post it today. 😃
Thanks for the wonderful comments all 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 23

Jaya starts talking "Shobi neenga ennai nethu kethiye why naan thideernu hospital la irunthu ponen nu? Ippo solluren. I heard what Shemmo said to you. When i heard it I was shocked but later realized that everything is for good nu. Yaarukume ethuvume theriyathu, I asked them to come and they came. So whats the matter na, I want Shemmo to marry Tanu. I think we dont need Shemmos permission, as he told this in hospital to Shobi. Enna solreenga Shobi, are you fine with this?" Shemmo is shocked, also Gisel. 😲 Shobi says "Naan solrathuku enna iruku? All Shemmos decision". Tanu and Bhagi are entering. Jaya sees Tanu and tells her everything, Tanu is shocked and speechless. Shemmo comes and says "Jaya Aunty im sorry to say this, but pls ithu vendame." Jaya asks why. He replies "Naan Tanu va love pannathu unmai thaan. But few days before I came to know that someone loved her aswell nu, antha person vera yaarum illa my best friend Gisel. Avanuku drogam pannithu ennala sandhosama iruka mudiyathu". Jaya, Smiles and Gisel are shocked. Shubba comes and asks Gisel whether its true. Shemmo stops her and says "Aama Aunty. Avan Tanu va 4 years ah love panran, apdi partha my love is nothing. He is my best friend and I will do anything for him". Gisel goes to Shemmo and hugs him. Tanu who is still shocked asks her mother permission to talk with Shemmo and Gisel in private. They goes to mottaimaadi. 😲

Tanu says "Whats this? You both love me ah? Why yaarume enkitta sollala? Enaku onnume puriyala. Ippo naan enna seirathu? Enaku unga rendu per mela eppavume love vanthathilla. Gisel enaku unna romba pudikkum. Your very nice and friendly. Also Shemmo I like you a lot, athuvum yen annan love matter la you helped me a lot. I thought naama eppavume friends ah irukalam nu. Oru ponnu sirichu pesina odane love nu arthama? Enaku enna solrathune theriyala". Shemmo is happy and says "Tanu, lets forget everything. My friend Gisel is a nice boy, nejama he will suit you a lot". Gisel interupts Shemmo and says "Illa Tanu, Shemmo thaan unaku poruthamana jodi. Neenga rendu perum thaan onnu seranum". Shemmo says "No", Gisel says "No" aswell. Tanu stops them and says "See you both are my friends. If I marry Shemmo now then Gisel you will get hurt, and if i marry Gisel Shemmo you will get hurt". Both S&G nods "No". Tanu adds "Why cant we be friends? Plss understand me. I dont want to hurt anyone. Im also an human being with a heart. I want you both as my friends, with whom i can share everything. Love is something different, and friendship is not nothing like that. Shemmo you know what, before your accident happend I had one weird feeling that something bad is gonna happen. Its maybe your accident which I could sense. I dont think its love, its friendship with whole heart. I know its difficult to understand, but its better to have this pain for few days than for whole life. 👍🏼 Let be friends?". Shemmo and Gisel are thinking. Tanu asks them for promise. They promise Tanu. Tanu remembers something suddenly and says "Gisel, I dont know whether its true. But I noticed that Smiles is very nice to you. I think she loves you, but im not sure. Its better to marry someone who loves us than whom we love. Pls clarify with her". Gisel is shocked. He looks at Shemmo and Shemmo looks back with "We will take care" look.

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Chapter 24

They go downstairs. All are waiting for them. Esther asks them what happend. Tanu says "Aunty we have decided to be friends". Jaya is shocked and asks "Ennathu friends ah? Ennama solra?". Shemmo says "Aama Aunty. Even if one of us marry Tanu, another one will get hurt. Ethuku intha sad situation, its better to forget everything and continue our happiness". Gisel adds "Yess, we will try to forget everything and be normal. It will take time but Im out of that love phase. Shemmo ku thaan koncham kachtam ah irukum", he laughs. Shemmo beats Gisel. Gisel notices Smiles face, who is smiling. Maha says "Intha kalathu pasanga romba nalla think pannuranga. Love nu oruthara oruthar hurt pannama they took good decision. Good Job Guys". All are smiling. 😃 After everyone leaves the place, Shemmo calls Bhagi and says "Thankss Bhagi for the letter. Without you I wouldnt have known about Gisel love and life full ah avana hurt panni irupen. Enaku love ah vida en friendship thaan mukkiyam". Bhagi smiles and leaves the place. Bhagi slowly gets softcorner on Shemmo.

After 6 months everything is fine in the colony. On a sunday all the kids wake up late. Tanu calls Shemmo and Gisel and ask them to come fast. She tells them that a boy in her college proposed to her nu. Shemmo laughs and Gisel says "Aiyoo paavam antha paiyan, avanukkum lecture eduthiya?". Gisel and Shemmo are shaking hands. Tanu beats them and says "Ennala lecture eduka mudiyala, yenna enaku avan proposal pudichu irinthichu". Our boys are laughing again. Shemmo says "Mattinan oruthan. Sari enna sonna avankitta". Tanu says "Therila da. Yes nu sollatha?". Smiles comes inbetween and says "Pudichu iruntha yes nu sollu. Aana be careful first avan epdi nu paaru". Gisel and Shemmo agrees with Smiles.

Today is a very special day nu ellarum mattiyanam thoonguranga, so they can be awaken in the midnight. At 11:30 Pm all gets ready with things. Shemmo and Gisel are together and chatting. They are seeying Bhagi and Smiles together. Shemmo says "Machan unaku ethachum thonutha? Un thangachi and Smiles parvaiye sariyillaiye". Gisel says "Yes da i have the same feeling". They are still starting at them. Suddenly both the girls are winking at them. Shemmo and Gisel shouts "PAAAHHH". Caryn puts a rocket on the sky which blinks as "HAPPY NEW YEAR".

Subam! 😃

(Maybe freeze?!?) 🤔

Thankss Thankss Thankss for your support. It meant a lot to me. I just started this FF for fun, but later even I and my partner we enjoyed doing this. For a while I had to stop this. Sorry for the big delay 😔 Before few weeks I thought of stopping it, but after reading your comments I was happy and decided to continue a bit. Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments. I was so happy that you enjoyed it a lot. Im sad that I had to end for now, but maybe I will continue after few months, maybe thats why also "Maybe freeze"?. I also gave an open end to this. Once again romba nandri. Big thanks to those who commented to each and every chapter 🤗❤️

Edited by Shemmo - 12 years ago

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suhasini

@Suha95

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

shemmo samma FF...loved it...

thank u sooo much for including me also in your FF...

loved the ending...

waiting for your next FF...😉
we are here to support you ...!!!

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Pallanguzhi

@Pallanguzhi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Thank you so much for this FF Shemmo! 👏👏👏 I thoroughly enjoyed the whole show! ⭐️

It was superb and exciting and not draaggginggg like TV serials 😆

Very sad to see it end but it was a good ending, indeed subam...👍🏼

Let's hope for Andankaaka Colony II - any chance of that Shemmo? 😊

All the best for your future FFs!

Ravi

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Thanks Shamz for the lovely FF, I enjoyed it a lot! You did a great job with all the characters as well, it was fun to read and felt like a movie!

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viswai123

@viswai123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Shammu ennada Kadhal Desam ending mathiri ippidi oru twist vechita. Appo Bhagi than ennoda DIL a?

Intha dubakur bike ottra amma ku nejamave 150CC bike ottura DIL a? SUPER

Nalavelaiku Kumaran mathiri padikira pasangaluku kalyanam panni vekame irunthiye. Good Job. Kumarana unta tution ku anupuvom..