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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: aashup

O no for se late ho gai... Acha this both the chapters are amazing, superb and fantastic basically jitni tareef kru kam h sbse achi baat if you describes a moment than you just describe without leaving a single movement which can be possible for that moment, I mean everything you just makes it perfect, or is vale chap ne to jaan leli... Gudgudi ho rhi thi pet m😳hehehe okay listen I am going to take few of your dialogues from your chap maybe because your lines will make my stories better :p so plzzz kisi trha ka aarop na lagna :p

Luv you babes specially for this chap last vala this is my fav :*



Oho ! Late hone wali babes kahin ki ;) Bas bhi karde yaar meri smile hi nahi rukti yeh comments padhne ke baad and when I smile walking around mom gives me suspicious looks 😆 Nah, its fine babes aapki apni property hai le lena jitni lines chahiye after all friends hotey hi share karne keliye ;) Your stories are always always good doesnt matter if you have used any such lines or not :)

Love you more babes. Happy that you like this chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

This is definitely my favorite chapter..that wink..and the constant stares...ant main the close moment aur jab Kapil confess karta hai..all were so nicely put! Cant wait for 13!



First time ever they were so close matlab romance mein progress toh ho raha hai but it might take few more chapters before a passionate first kiss 😉 Thank you so much Urja :) Yeah updating 13 NOW !

Lots of pyaar :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Chit15

This update was Romantic update with simplicity. The scenes was so cute and romantic.😳

Beautiful update👏
And you were missing my comments so I came back early😆



Thank you so much yaara 😛 am glad that you could notice the romance in that eye lock. . Chalo mehnat was worth it :) Hehe. . Woh toh hai aati saal mein ek baar ho lekin kamaal kar jaati ho aap Miss Lovely ;)

Lots of Pyaar to you :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Chapter 13



Unfortunately, for next 2 days Kapil & Sumona had no talk about it at all. They were themselves. Kapil was nervous to ask about it & just didn't want to make her feel uncomfortable & She was in her own dilemma and was waiting for the right time to talk to him.

"Hey Sameer !" Sameer who was in the grocery shop heard a feminine voice and turned around to find Sumona.

"Hey Sumona. . How are you ?"

"Am good. . .bas aadhi grocery list li cheezein hai yahan abhi adhi aur cheezein leni baki hai. . " She said sighing.

"Oh. . Mein yahan bas cereals lene aaya tha" He kept the cereal box in the trolley.

" Come I will help you finish the rest" Sameer said because in the back of his mind he wanted to talk to her about Kapil. Obviously, He knows everything thats going on between both of them and really wanted to help Kapil.

After insisting more Sumona allowed him to help her.
"How is Kapil ?" She questioned all of a sudden. He thought only Kapil cares way too much about her but Sumona too cares. This made his jib easier.

"He is fine. . Actually Sumona. . Mein tumse uss hi ke baremein baat karna chahta hoon. . "She halted and her very first question was.

"Is he really okay ? I mean uski tabiyat toh theek hai na ? Any problem ?"

"Nahi nahi relax he is fit & fine. " Sameer immediately cleared before she shot more questions at him.

"Phir baat kya hai Sameer saaf saaf batao na "

"Kapil really likes you. . No he actually loves you. . Pehle din se hi woh tumhari baatein karta tha. . Bas tum aur tumhari pari. . Pehli baar use kisi keliye deeply care kartey hue dekha. . Woh tumhari bohot izzat karta hai. . Usne life mein pehli baar teen din hospital mein bitaye. . The only place he hates the most. . And Pari toh uske liye uski khushi bangayi hai. . Woh tumse aur tumhari pari se behad pyaar karta hai Sumona. . Please uska dil mat todna. .I understand you have your own problems but Kapil loves you to the extent where all your problems & pain becomes his. . . Just dont break his heart. . Tum door jaogi toh woh toot jayega aur mein apne dost ko toota nahi dekh sakta. ." Sameer concluded and tears were shining in her eyes. She smiled at her fate. She was so overwhelmed that no words left her mouth. She wiped the corner of her eye and managed to say.

"Thank you Sameer. . Tum mujhe yeh sab nahi batate toh mujhe yeh sab kabhi pata nahi chalta. . Thanks again " Sameer smiled & they parted ways after saying their goodbyes.

As she walked out of the grocery store there was that indescribable joy in her heart. She wanted to dance. She wanted to jump around. She wanted to sing. She was over the moon to know he loves her too.

More than anything she was highly impressed. Kapil could have said all this but no he was not someone who showed their love only through words but his actions spoke. All his actions. His stares. His smiles at her. His compliments. His attachment to Pari now made proper sense to her.

A/N

Jeeta rahe humara sameer ! Kaam aasan kargaya. Dost ho toh Sameer jaisa warna na ho kyun ?

Lots of Pyaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
😊👏Hey I am the first one to comment so my wish your command 😃
Ab dosti ki hai nibhani to padegi 😃 I want next chappyyy friend as soon as possible. Thank you so much for making me your friend. It's my biggest pleasure. Aur jis din Kapil sumona finally mr and Mrs ban jayege tabh party to bante hai👏 😳😆😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Im very thankful to sameer right nkw! Yayyy proper confession toh ho gaya par kisi aur ke muh se. Ab kapil aur sumona ek dusre ko directly keh de toh maza aa jaega. How lovely. Thanks for the quick updates darling. I love this FF so so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
is sameer ko meri taraf se chocolate k dukaan do 😛 ...kitna sona dost h , how very helpful of him ...bhgwaan aise dost sbko de ...sumona happy happy ho gyi ...hm bhi happy happy
again awsum update
lots of pyaar 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Wow chapter 13 itni jaldi!!
this is something i like about you that you give updates faster and dont keep us waiting!!
Chapter 13 was cool too!!
update next soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Kya baat h sameer... bdi wali jhappi.. aehae kya kaam kia h... kapil's gonna so proud par will beat u too agar pta chal gya to 🤣 sumo... ab bas pyaar ka ijhaar kar dooo. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww I love this character (sameer) he is too cute... What a friend... What to say now just waiting for the update eagerly ...
Luv boht jyada babes again for this story *kisses*

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