kasum ff -In love with her flaws part 3

In love with her flaws

Hello people, and I am back with my second story, guys it could be little controversial

I've no idea whether I should continue with this or not because it has a different plot so please advise me should I continue it or drop this idea

Waiting for your valuable feedback

Please ignore the grammatical mistakes

Note: guys i love sumona more than anything she is my fav i am her big fan and i'm sorry if i am hurting anybodies sentiments with this post, i do not have any wrong intention its just a character which has its own colors, in my next part you'll get to know how cool and good hearted this character is, the story is not that intense, pehla chapter sayad intense lage but no doubt it's a different plot again i'm saying it after your valuable feedback only i'll continue the story

It was my 24^th audition and again I get a failure, it has become a habit of mine to fail every single audition, will I ever be able to achieve things in my life which I've thought of... these were the thoughts banging in my head ...these feelings were giving me an immense pain... when my thoughts were broken by a car horn...

That piercing light was giving pain in my eyes... I was hardly able to see anything, that intense light was making me vulnerable (yes it wouldn't be wrong to say that these are the small things which makes me vulnerable but I always get afraid to open this secret of mine to others because I am a MAN and I don't have the right to share my fears or should I say to be afraid of anything, because a man is a fearless warrior ...ummm...at least according to my father and obviously this so called society have the same thoughts too) I was stiff, not moving a bit... when I heard a voice "get out of here you "dumb man"

It made me more nervous because till now it was clear that it's a girl and girls always makes me nervous and if she is confident, than my nervousness fever attains its own height... the lights goes dim and there this absolutely beautiful, stunning and gorgeous woman is standing in front of me

Wearing a tight black shimmery short dress showing her toned legs paired it with red pencil heels, my eyes travelled up and noticed the curve of her waist building an urge in me to grab her into my arms and the view of her cleavage which unfortunately her dress failed to hide was adding fire to my urge, I went up and notice her luscious lips her big beautiful inviting eyes... she was holding a cigarette high with her wrist bent back in a wrist display gesture, leaving the front of the body open, taking puff by puff, she wasn't able to stand properly... I'm sure she was drunk but these things about her making me crazier for her. It wouldn't be wrong to say that I've fallen in love with her flaws... she asked me to get aside I didn't remember anything else but I'm sure she would be abusing me, but I was busy noticing those absolutely alluring lips...

She would be thinking I'm mad... maybe after that realization only she sat in her car and drove her way

I only remember a word from her and that is idiot '

By this kapil grins at his situation and close the diary after penning down his thoughts

Hope you like it

Will continue soon 😊maybe😛

After your feedback only I'll continue this story and put some light on kapil's character

This story will only have kapil's point of view

Supeb start... i liked the way it started... and if it is purely in kapil's view then it is an absolutely treat to read it... i liked sumo too... continue soon

can't wait for part 2!!! :))

Part 2

Hello people I know there are few of you who wants me to carry this story further, may be many of you won't like the plot of this but this fictional story actually is very close to my heart, I always wanted to write something like this...I know it is not as beautifully written as it should be but still I am giving my level best to make it good.

Hope you'll like it😊

Kapil's introduction

A man with dreams in his eyes dream to get recognition for his talent, dream to live his passion, dream to live like a legend, dream to wake up excited for his work, dream to prove the world that he exist.

Kapil sharma a 29 year old man struggling to get his dreams turns into reality.

Kapil was born in Punjab but bought up in bhivani district Haryana, his mother died after giving birth to him so he had never felt the love and care of a mother, he has 5 brother's and all of them are national or state level wrestler...strong , masculine, arrogant, courageous these are the traits of them. His father mr. raghuvendra sharma is a trainer, a coach, a guide to them, he himself had been a national level wrestling champion in 70's. Mr. Raghuvender Sharma believes that a man is born as a warrior, he is the strongest creature of this nature, he can do anything, have the power to make or to destroy anyone, but in contrast he believes that women are the most vulnerable creature of god, women are meant to serve men, to please them, to satisfy them , but a woman can also abolish a man's present and future... A woman's love is always unscrupulous for a man it results nothing but to a worst future, and he has poured his these thoughts to his son's too and all of his son has faith in his fathers and follow his belief blindly...

But kapil is not the same, he is different he has never been in contact with ample of women, he actually don't know much about them but one thing he believes is that women are much stronger than any man, they have the power to win this world with their loving nature...the love of power can be replaced by the power of love, he always wonder that god might have taken a lot time to create women that's why they are so beautiful, filled with love and at the same time strong enough to handle any situation with all these belief kapil is a man with many fears too, he has a fear of darkness, fear of living all alone all his life, fear of that he's not good enough, fear of not achieving his dreams, fear of his father and the biggest fear of talking to girls.

With all these fears he is struggling in Mumbai to be an eminent singer, in his childhood he has been always appreciated by his friends for his as melodious voice as Kishore da...that compliment only forced him to land on this city of dream.. he ran away from his home and didn't even dared to inform his father as he knows that his father will never give approval to his dreams.

It has been 4 years he is running after his dreams, working as a salesman in a small electrical shop.

To be continued...

Hope you like it😊

Sumona's character will be described in kapil's pov

Oh my god !!! Wat an ample description... i loved it the way u potrayed kapil and his family here... it will be interesting to see how the story unfolds

Wow what an intro of our hero!!!

Thats the REAL HERO ka introduction ! Now I am EAGERLY waiting to read this story. Wohoo ! Babes idea seems brilliant Thanks for the intro it really showed the path where this story can go :) *Claps*

Go ahead always in need of more such amazing stories !!!!!

Lots of pyaar & power to you :*

Part 3

There I am with part 3 of this ff

I am sorry I haven't read it twice so it could have many mistakes, sorry for that

Thankyou @mansi_as18 @ Kapillian_girl @ Kappumyfav @ UrjaLuvsWahi for your encouragement

Two days have passed and I am still lost in her thoughts, I am trying harder not to think about her but it's getting hell difficult...I can't able to forget her striking and innocent face... In 4 years of my struggling, this is the first time I'm feeling happy, I am so high in love that my smile is meeting my ears, topped with that warm, tingly feeling in the pit of my stomach...LOVE??? I'm actually confused that is it love or attraction or crush...it's not the first time that I've gone crazy for a girl, I'd liked quite a few girls in past...i always get attracted to the way they talk, they behave, the loving and caring nature of them but this is the first time I'm feeling like this, for a girl, some sought of pain is there in my heart...pain of not getting her, I know that she can never be mine, I can never embrace her into my arms forget about embracing I can never even touch her or am I able to see her again???ufff... why I am thinking about her like a mad man...my brain is commanding me not to think about her but my heart could not able to forget her face, her confident voice, her bold behavior, yesss...she is just perfect...I think that I've fallen in love with her...first sight love...and I know it will always be one sided love...this absolutely stunning and confident beauty can only be mine in my dreams...but whenever I think about her I forget all my other worries, so it's a good way to keep me cool and stable...I WISH I COULD SEE HER AGAIN...

Sunil: hey bro... kya kar rha hai???

Kapil: (I should close my diary he is here, sunil my best friend, because of him only I could able to sustain in this city) hii bro kaisa hai??

Sunil: badiya hu, abe kya tu abhi bhi tension m us audition ko leke, chill yaar, koi na, ye audition nhi to agla nikal jaega chinta kyu krta h

Kapil: (he is thinks that I'm still thinking about my audition, but he has no idea that I am lost in thoughts of a girl, actually I do not even want to tell him, I don't know what might he think about me, he'll probably going to laugh at me) ummm... han... nhi yaar aisa kuch nhi hai

Sunil: abe han nhi chor chal taiyaar ho jaa m tujhe khin leke chalta hu

Kapil: khan??

Sunil: tu taiyaar hoja puch mat...samjha

Kapil: abe yaar raat ke 10 baje hain kha jaenge, mood nhi h mera

Sunil: abe pagal h kya, ye Mumbai h mere dost, ye sehar sota nhi h, chal mood bna apna or taiyaar hoja

Kapil: (uff...you can never win with this man)

I am ready wearing my new peach color t-shirt paired it with blue jeans standing in front of the mirror admiring myself...at times I really feel that I don't look that bad...

Sunil: chal be champu taiyaar hogya to nikle

Kapil: (oouch...now that's a bitter pill to me) chal mere bhai

we entered at a dark place I can hardly able to see anything and the music is so loud that it is difficult for me to listen sunil, I can see colorful lights, people dancing, drinking smoking and making love with each other...this view is making me uncomfortable, I want to ask sunil that where have you brought me up...but now I can't find him too... I think... I am lost... I am not feeling well... these lights are making me exhausted...I want to get out of this place as soon as possible... all of the sudden I got a jerk from behind I couldn't able to balance myself and fell over a woman.

Girl: you idiot...can't you see

Kapil: sorry ma'am vo galati se ho gya

Girl: what do you mean galti se ho gya, I know you people very well, you guys always look for a chance to touch a woman...but I am sorry, yes we do late parties but, excuse me we are not here to tolerate your sh**t on us.

Kapil: sorry ma'am...sach m galati se hua, meri tabyat thik nahi hai (the music is so loud that I can hardly hear her words but I can see anger on her eyes for me)

Girl: stop the music... I said the stop the music

Kapil: (I don't know what happened but suddenly music sounded closed... now I am feeling good but not till the time when a man punched me on my face and made me fall on the ground he bent a bit and ready to hit me again, suddenly a girl interrupts in the Fight and grabs his hand)

My eyes are wide open... it's the same girl...yes it's the same girl... I am in a pain...that punch was really hard...but seeing this woman in front of my eyes has cured my every damn pain...ahhaaa...my pain, my embarrassment has vanished in the air now... she stretched out her hands towards me for me to stand, I grabbed her hands and stood with the help of her support...i am still looking at my hands, her skin felt so smooth, so soft and tender against my hard skin...she was so close to me I could able to smell her...ahaa...she smells so beautiful even after she is standing far from me, her scent seems to linger in my nose...I find myself inhaling harder just to keep the scent as long as possible.)

Girl 2: kya bhai...kya baat ho gai hai, kyu itna danga macha rkha hai???

Kapil: (what an attitude this woman have...god she is looking absolutely gorgeous)

Girl1: is admi ne mujhe chera

Kapil: (she looked at me) nahi m vo...mujhe vo... galti...sorry...

Girl2: sorry bol rha h na, ho gai galati...fine now just cut the crab and lets play the music

(I'm sure she is quite famous here because at her one voice music is on)

it's getting hard for me to stand properly...as I'm still feeling sick...suddenly I felt the pairs of hands in my shoulder to support, my eyes are closed and I've only one question in my head, these are her hands ????

hope you like it

will continue it soon...

next part will have kapil and the girl's conversation

vese any guesses kiske hath ho skta h vo :p sunil bhi ho skta h han ;)

Ooohhh... kappu sumo k pyaar m lattu... love at first sight n all huh 😉 aww kappu... that lady i tell u but uski bhi galti nhi h sab pehle yhi sochte h... protective nature u see... but thaat girl (though i know who is she) u go girl 😉 ab dekhte h aage kya hota h

The title itself is too catchy. The story is different and quite interesting. Waiting for the next part. Loved how you described sumona.