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Originally posted by: SweetAndSpice

Wow Shazzy!👏👏👏 Sooo beautifully written! 👏👏👏

Lovely!⭐️ 1st I was speechless and now have lot of words😆

Sooo well described... Ranveer's thoughts and behaviour when Panchi is gonna come back! 👏

Rv's emotions perfectly put up!!

In the airport...Waiting to meet his moti!

Thoughts at 1st when he is waiting for her and his behaviour and the 'rush' in him when she arrives and is standing in front of him!⭐️

Keep writing! Thanks for coming back and writing🤗🤗

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Shazzy I was shocked when I read it was by you
But it was amazing,really the start was awesome and then the way he was acting like a jumping jack was super awesome

I loved the way u showed the changes sometimes it was like nothing changed it was the same and sometimes he felt she was not there but the next day she would melt him again ahhh that was my fav part !!

And then KD saying Teri Moti aagayi and the description of how she walked towards him with that beautiful smile on her face,I can just feel it how much he must have wanted yo hug her and see her smile again !!

But the Question hmmm it was great open endings I do prefer so I loved it!

Your first one and u were fab,thanx a ton for this Shazzy *hugs*

Originally posted by: spicySugar..

ERRR MAAAHHH GAAWWWDDD!!!!

*gasps*
*goes all speechless*
*squees*
*flails arms like a wild person*

EEEHHH <3 *squeals at this reaction* Mera yeh likhna dhanya ho gaya😳

I just returned from the Uni and randomly opened the TBP forum and what do I see? Meri VP writing on MY RaHi! For a moment I thought my eyes were deceiving me. But they weren't! YOU ACTUALLY WROTE ON RAHI!!! I DID!!! I DID I DID I DID!!!! <3 <3

Okay, so comment. Kya comment karun?! I f**king loved it! Random note, I am so happy I annoyed you with all my formatting talk xD This perfect formatting of yours with the signature blue color is just..aaah! Buahahah!!! 🤣🤣 The signature blue was there since the start. But your constant nagging about the presentation and formatting DID rub off...for the better😉 Look how pwetty it looks In fact, I was seeing my old D3 works the other day...and all I could think was...I formatting sucked 🤣🤣

From the start I was gripped! My VP, writer of the phrases, wrote so beautifully. The whole breathing her in thing..their last hug just flashed in my eyes and made me all teary. Then cut to the present and he was being typical bouncy. He won't ever change when it comes to impatient bouncing. And KD telling him to get a grip was just precious! :* And aah! How beautifully you told their four years worth of long distant relationship! One day they were together, the other day all the miles between them seemed longer than usual. I'm in awe VP! Literal awe! Kya likhti hai yaar tu! Matlab..waah waaah!! *squeals* Awwwie :* Ah yes...Ranveer phudking about 🤣🤣 The relationship part was a little tricky to write. I didn't want it to sound far fetched. But hayye...put my fears to rest :*

AWE😲😲 OMG!!!! 😳😳

His nervousness, his anxiety. I swear, for a moment I thought kuch tragic hogaya! But it was all anticipation of seeing his Moti again! KD ki teasing and then she comes in...I have to tell you dude, I can always imagine the picture in my head which you paint with your words. I could see the airport and I could see her coming towards her, all bright and beautiful and I could feel his breath catch. And the glitter of the ring which sat proudly on her finger and how beautiful is it that it was one of the first things that he noticed. Then their eternal soulmate connection ("Telepathic" as he likes to refer to it) kicked in and in a blink he noticed all the changes within her. But all his thoughts were only questions because she always held the answers to his everything. I added in just a little, teensy weensy bit of PanSh for your sake😉 Ah yes...the soul connection. Even though they still stood some distance apart, he could see everything there was too see!

God, the ending! The open ending! If**kINGLOVEDITSOMUCH!!! Muah muah muah muah muah muuuaaah :*

"Which were more?"

Aaah! Just..AAAHHH!! I wrote a pura essay as a comment but GOD! Your words dude, your words! Phrases. I could take each word apart and analyze it in length cuz you don't waste them. I better stop else pura novel yaheen likh dungi! DAMNIT! This is the BEST surprise like EVER!!!! And this is the bestest response❤️ Such a precious comment...thank you EMPEEE <3 <3

Originally posted by: MyLifeMyRulz

Hello I am Ishita
This was beautiful u described my nonu's feelings so well
after whole 4 years his moti was coming back
the way u described Ranveer's feeling when he saw his moti 👏 ⭐️
Loved it dear
Keep writing

Lots of luv
Ishita

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Really a nice OS

Beautiful

Loved it