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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have written this OS loads of love.
I really hope that uh guys like it.

It has been 9 long years since Panchi and Ranveer are not in any contact with each other because of some really big misunderstanding!

Ranveer is a big industrialist. He is really rich and egoistic. He doesn't believe anyone easily.

Panchi is an independent woman. She is happy in her small world. She has many friends. She has a 8 year old small daughter named Pari.

Mumma mumma! Pari shouted.
Wait a sec. sweetheart! Panchi replied.
No, I can't w8 anymore. Uh please leave whatever uh are doing and come here asap. Pari told panchi in an unpleasant voice.
Okay! No worries. I'll do it later on! You are so impatient just like ur dad. Panchi replied.
I know it very well mumsee. Mom please tell me something about dad and you. I mean how uh met ? How uh fell in love with him ? Pari asked with lots of curiosity in her eyes.
Okay !
I Still Love Him, He was my first friend I ever had. The first day I started school he started and we became friends when he gave me a yellow crayon which is my favourite colour and from there we became inseperable. We were in every single class together,group activities and I mean there was no way of getting us apart. I remember the days when we would build treehouses, play on the fences, climb the highest trees, have water fights everything a normal kid would do.It makes me smile just thinking about it.

I also remember a time when we were in his room lying on the floor daring each other to say a swear word, I think I was 10 then and I couldn't do it and neither could he so we just carried on doing our homework.

He held my hand for the first time when we were on a school trip because I was crying about a splinter being in my finger, he just grabbed it and told me it will ok and that he's here now and smiled at me. I never knew how much he cared for me, I thought he was just being weird.

He got really jealous when I held another boys hand.
He was also my first kiss...my little dinosaur. I'll never forget that day.

I couldn't believe he loved me as much as I did .. I loved hanging with him just kissing, holding hand in our tree house.

As we grew older. I noticed that I was felling for him but I did not want to lose him. So i kept my feelings to myself. We both started dating someone else.

Then, one fine day he confessed his love for me. What else? Then we started dating each other.
He was damn romantic! We loved each other like hell and after few years of dating we broke up because of silly and stupid misunderstanding!


He will always have a place in my heart. He still means the world to me and I will forever love him.

Oh! Mom. Don't cry! Please tell me one simple thing. Pari said.
What do uh want to know? Panchi asked.
Does he know about me.? Pari questioned panchi.
No, he doesn't. He is a big man now! I don't want him to know about uh. Panchi told.
Mom, but I want to meet him. I deserve to know him. Pari said.
No, pari! Not this time. I will not fulfil ur wish. panchi replied.
Then, don't talk to me . Pari shouted .

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wanderingsoul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked the OS.😊
Plz continue.
love to know how they reunite.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayy. Second one to comment...
Tina its amazing. Seriously loved it.
Do continue soon. Wow RV and Panchis daughter. Just imaginig when they will unite... 👍🏼
Edited by anjali1805 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww... dis is really a cute 1... 😉
Gr8 yaar...
Bt y did u stop here ??? 😲
Plzz update soon... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tina.. babe.. lots n lots f love girl... that love n carewith which u have written this piece s supremely evident n s making this work such a beautiful piece.. it gave me soo much joy to read this work...
Lovely concept n idea..n written very well too.. loved Panchi as a single mother.. strong brave..so in love yet so aloof n pari s so headstrong.. waiting for ranveer...
Thanks once more dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shammukh

liked the OS.😊

Plz continue.
love to know how they reunite.😊

thakew soo much!
I m so glad that uh liked it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...well written👏
loved it😊
plz continue too..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali1805

Yayy. Second one to comment...
Tina its amazing. Seriously loved it.
Do continue soon. Wow RV and Panchis daughter. Just imaginig when they will unite... 👍🏼

Tha1nkew soo damn much!
I m glad dt uh liked it.
Ur appreciation means a lot to me!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Awww... dis is really a cute 1... 😉

Gr8 yaar...
Bt y did u stop here ??? 😲
Plzz update soon... 😃

Thnkew so much.
I I stopped here because I was not getting what to write!😊
Yay! But, I'll soon continue! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Tina
Just loved it
written beautifully
can't wait to read more
plz continue soon
Take care

Geet

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