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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

wow kamya great start dear 😛

its seems unterasting 😉

that avi 😡 😡 how could he?? 😡

but buy..but our nonu is there 😆

its amazing dear 👏 👏

cant wait plzz update soon 😊

and pm me when u update ⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Part 2 :

She got ready, and came down. Ranveer was lost in her beauty. Panchi was looking dam gorgeous in salwar suit. Ranveer cud'nt belive on his eyesight. He was just continuously staring at her.

P : mujhe stare karna band karo. Aur mujhe breakfast do. Bhaut bhuk lagi hai

R : at your service madam.

Ranveer serve panchi the breakfast her fav dish mong daal ki kachaudi and chatni.

P : wow nonu ye toh meri fav hai. Thank you so much and she hugged her and kissed him on cheek.

They finished their breakfast.

R : ab moti tu jaake bas rest kar. Main office se aata hun.

P : hmmm... office ? tune kaam karna start kar diya.

R : kaam karna means. Nhi nre moti. Main kisi dusre ke yahan kaam nhi kar raha. Mera khud ka business hai.

P : wow yr nonu. I so happy for you. waise kis cheez ka business hai.

R : main dudh ejta hun.

P : hain kyaaa.

R : matlab ki milk products.

P : hahahahha.

R : hahahah. Very funny chal bahut baate hogayi. Ab jaa aur rest kar.

P : par nonu.

R : par war kuch nhi go and takerest

Suddenly she heard two children came running and shouting papa papa papa. And ranveer goes to them and hug them.

Panchi all confused :o

For today its all.. Iknow its all crap.

I am just out of my ideas.

Will give a dhasu update soon..

Till then bear this.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Papa😲
Ye kya hai Kamya
can't wait for next part

Love Nonu-Moti convo
do continue soon
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
OMG!!!!!! PAPA...
NOW I WILL KEEP ON THINKIN BOUT DIS..
ITS LOVELY... CONTINUE SOON... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Nooo Yaar Kamya... 😭
Pls don't tell me dat RV has got married 😭
I'll kill him 4 dis 😡
Can't wait 4 d next part... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Papa😕
i hope he is nt married 🤢
plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
papa😕😕
i dono wat to say😕
continue soonish😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Part 3 :

Ranveer goes and hugged the children and kissed them and the kids too kissed them.

R : Didi ko jaldi se Hello bolo.

Kids : hello didi.

P : gived a small smile and said HI to them.

R : jao jaake fresh ho jao. Main office se bas 3 hrs mein aata hun.

Kids : nhi papa aaj aap office nhi jaoge. Plzzz plzzz plz plz plz.

R : acha acha ok. I am nt going. Ok. Happy.

Kids : yiiipppeee.

R : now go and change.

Panchi was all confused. She was nt gting wat was going on.

P : nonu. Tumne mujhse juth bola.

R : juth, kaisa juth.

P : tumhari shaddi ho chuki hai aur tum do bacho ke ...

R : woo wooo hold on. Tu baith yaha..

P : nonu.

R : sshhh.. Ye bache mere nhi hai.

P : hain ? kya. Tune mujhe pagal samjha hai. Ye tujhe papa bula rahe hai aur tu bolta hai ki ye bache tumhare nhi hai. WTH man.

R : are moti meri baat toh sun.

P : bakko.

R : jaise tu kal mere ghar ke bahar padi hui thi, waise ek saal pehle ye bache mere ghar ke bahar pade hue the. They were in a very bad condition panchi. They were crying badly and they needed some one to take care of them. no one in my colony was ready to take care of them. so I thought to adopt them.They even dun know ki inke parents kaun hai. Inhe toh bhai aur papa mein difference v nhi pata hai.

Panchi was so touched from ranveer. She kissed him on his cheeks and hugged him tightly.

P : I am so so proud of you nonu. Tum kitne ache ho. Aaj ke generation tumhare jaisa ladka milna impossible hai. I feel proud to be your best buddy. And she hugged him again.

Kids came running and shouting papa papa papa.

K : didi wats your name, aur aap hamare papa ko baar baar hug kyun kar rahe ho.

Ranveer panchi smiled at their innocence.

P : main tumhari papa ki best friend hun. Toh hug toh banta hai. Waise tum dono ke naam kya hai.

ZAIN ANGEL they replied...

P : wow so cute name.

A : papa ne rakha hai.

Z : aur aapka.

R : ye moti.

Panchi hit him on his hand. Nonu.

P : panchi.

A : aap bahut achi ho. Atleast uss padosan se toh bahut bahut jaida achai ho.

They all laughed.

A : didi aap hamare saath bahar ghumne chaloge

P : kahan.

R : who hum teeno ne bahar vacations par jaane ka program banaya hai. GOA.. tu v chal na panchi. Mazaa aayega.

P : hmmm. Par ek condition par.

R : kya.

P : agar zain aur angel mujhe mummy bulaye instead of didi.

Zain angel : okk mummy..

R : jao jao jaldi se packing kar lo.

They both ran to their room for packing their stuffs.

R : y did u said them to call you mom.

P : agar tum unke dad nhi v hoke unke dad ho toh y I can't be their mom.

Ranveer tu mahan hai.

P : chalo packing nhi karni.

HOPE YOU ALL IKE THIS NEW CONCEPT.

WAISE THIS A CHURAYA HUA SCRIPT FROM MVIE ' HAMARA DIL AAPKE PAAS HAI '.

NOT TO WORRY AAGE KI STORY ALL MY OWN IDEAS.

NJOY READING.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Awiee Nonu is just too sweet

So proud to him

Can't wait to read more

Goa trip

It will be fun

So do continue soon

Take care

Lots of Love

Geet


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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awww nonu n moti mummy papa... how cute s that... n rv s so amazingly good...waiting for the family trip... goa...sure will b fun.. thanks for this super cute update...

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