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Posted: 11 years ago
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Panchi POV :

I Didn know wat I was going to do after this incident. I really want to die. The person whom I trusted a lot had ditched me, just coz of another gal. Right no wi just wanted only one person with me, my nonu my ranveer, my bestest buddy. Bt I can't call him coz he will be tensed after knowing my condition. It was raining heavily, an di thought to leave this house and wanted to go to my nonu. Bt I dun know where he is leaving now. It has been 1 year I have not contacted him. I left the house. I was just walking alone on road. Clod wind was blowing and it was raining. I kept on crying for wat he has done to me. I didn know where my destiny will take me.I sat down to take rest and I slept down.

Ranveer POV :

It is so nice weather. I was standing in my balcony and enjoying the rain and remembering the tim ei spent with moti. Hmmm... I still love you moti an di miss you a lot. Bt today I am missing you more. It has 1 year I have not talked to you. You dun know how difficult it has been for me to leave without you. Bt wen you are happie I am happie. My phone rang. It was neighbor soniyaa. God this gal I so irritating. Raat mein v chain se nhi rehne degi. I picked it up.

S : hi Handsome. Kya kar rahe ho.

R : tree pe chehad ke fruits tood raha hun.

S : tumhari mazak karn eki aadat nhi jayegi na. BTW main etumhe call kiya hai y ebatan eke liye ki tumhare ghar k eget ke paas ek ladki soyi hui hai.

R : kya ? tum pagal toh nhi hogayi ho.

S : pagal hun lekin tumhare pyaar mein.

R : whatever and he cuts the call.

I went down to see that really Is there any girl sleeping. I opened the door and I saw a girl. Sleeping there. She was with a bag. She was shivering. It was dark I cudnt see her face. I touched her forehead and she was having high fever. I picked her up and took into the house and placed her on the couch. I switched on the lights and I saw the face..

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE MY NEW CONCEPT.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Kamya
Love starting
RaHi are separated for 1 year😲
can't wait to read more
so do continue soon

Lots of love
Geet

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Oiii intresting lag rahi yaar continue soon ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey like the beginning...do continue..duur rehke bhi rahi manage to find each other at times f crisis...nice... thanks for starting a story on rahi..Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee start👏
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowieee Kamya...👏
Dis is really Good... 👍🏼
D contrast in Rahi's thoughts abt d rain was beautiful... HATS OFF 👏
Update Sooonnn...😆
Edited by luv_u_Bharti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kamya awesome start ...loved it 👏
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing start kamya...plz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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luving it continue soon pls
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Its great start👏 and please update next part.

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