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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
KAMYA LOVED IT 👏
PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE SOON😃
AND I THINK THAT GIRL IS PANCHI 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Honestly m in love with it <3
Concept is superbbb <3 👏 Damn excited to read the next parttt
THANX FOR THE PM & DO PM ME WHEN UPDATED !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey. Pls continue soon. Its lovely...:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

PART 1:-

Panchi POV :

I Didn know wat I was going to do after this incident. I really want to die. The person whom I trusted a lot had ditched me, just coz of another gal. Right no wi just wanted only one person with me, my nonu my ranveer, my bestest buddy. Bt I can't call him coz he will be tensed after knowing my condition. It was raining heavily, an di thought to leave this house and wanted to go to my nonu. Bt I dun know where he is leaving now. It has been 1 year I have not contacted him. I left the house. I was just walking alone on road. Clod wind was blowing and it was raining. I kept on crying for wat he has done to me. I didn know where my destiny will take me.I sat down to take rest and I slept down.

Ranveer POV :

It is so nice weather. I was standing in my balcony and enjoying the rain and remembering the tim ei spent with moti. Hmmm... I still love you moti an di miss you a lot. Bt today I am missing you more. It has 1 year I have not talked to you. You dun know how difficult it has been for me to leave without you. Bt wen you are happie I am happie. My phone rang. It was neighbor soniyaa. God this gal I so irritating. Raat mein v chain se nhi rehne degi. I picked it up.

S : hi Handsome. Kya kar rahe ho.

R : tree pe chehad ke fruits tood raha hun.

S : tumhari mazak karn eki aadat nhi jayegi na. BTW main etumhe call kiya hai y ebatan eke liye ki tumhare ghar k eget ke paas ek ladki soyi hui hai.

R : kya ? tum pagal toh nhi hogayi ho.

S : pagal hun lekin tumhare pyaar mein.

R : whatever and he cuts the call.

I went down to see that really Is there any girl sleeping. I opened the door and I saw a girl. Sleeping there. She was with a bag. She was shivering. It was dark I cudnt see her face. I touched her forehead and she was having high fever. I picked her up and took into the house and placed her on the couch. I switched on the lights and I saw the face.. I was little surprised. Little wat ?

I was in big shock. Panchi in this condition. I went outside to see that where is avi. Bt I didn see anyone. I went back to panchi. She was suffering from high fever. I took her into room and called doctor. Doctor did the check up and gaved the medicine and left. Tears were rolling down through my eyes. Fo rthe first time I have seen her in such a bad condition. Hundreds of question were revolving in my mind. I was just waiting for the morning.

MORNING SCENE:

Panch opened her eyes and saw a new place. She gt up and saw her best buddy infront of her. She could'nt belive on her sight.

P : nonu ( she shouted )

R : moti. Moti tu uth gayi.

He ran towards her and they hugged each other. They broke he hug and agin hugged each other. Ranveer cuped panchi face and kissed her forehead.

R : moti kaisi hai. Ab kaisa feel ar rahi hai.

P : pehle tum ye batao main yaha kaise aayi.

R : tum kal raat mere ghar ke bahar soyi hui thi. Mujhe mere neighbor ka phone aaya ki koi ladki ghar ke bahar hai. Aur maine dhekha kit u hai. Moti ye sab kya hai. Teri aisi condition kaise hui. Tell me yr.

Panchi started crying, and hugged ranveer.

R : moti plzz bata n ayr.

P : nonu, Avi ditched me.

R : wat ? saaf saaf bata na.

P : uske life mein dusri ladki hai. Usne mujhe dhoka diya.

R : tujhe koi misunderstanding hui hai. H eloves you a lot yr.

P : nhi nonu. Pehle mujhe v yahi laga par maine khud use ek larki ek saath mere room mein ek saath bed par dhekha. ( and she started crying again ).

Ranveer POV :

I was literally shocked after hearing panchi story. Man toh kar raha tha ki av jaake us AVi ka murder kardun. Bt I need to control panchi.

Ranveer wiped her tears and hugged her 😭

R : ab rona band kar aur fresh ho jaa. Aur breakfast karne aajaa.

P : nhi mujhe jaana hai.

R : kaha jaana hai 😡

P : pata nhi par min yahan nhi reh sakti. Log ky asochengein.

R : thapad maarunga main tujhe. Tu kahin nhi jaa rahi hai. Tu ab se mere saath ho rahegi. Samjh gayi.

P : par nonu.

R : main kuch nhi suna chaht ahun. Its final decision. Meri Best frend mujhe itne din baad mili hai. Now I can't afford to lose her. Gt it.

P : hmmm.

R : now gt ready.

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT.

THANX FOR THE COMMENTS. MEANS A LOT 😊

RIGHT NOW I AM UT OF IDEA.

WILL UPDATE SOON.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tooo Goooddd... 👏
Finally, Rahi united... 🥳But Panchi in such a bad condition...😭 😭 😭
Dat Avi... 😡 😡 😡 DOG...
Luvd it...
Continue Soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
That Avi😡
how could he do this to our Angel
But of course Nonu is always there for his Moti
Love the way he console her
can't wait to read more
so do continue soon
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
nice one👏
caring Nonu
plz some romantic scenes in the next part😳
plz update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Ranveer se pehele me avi ka murder kar dugi 😡
nonu moti united that's great🥳
plz update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Like the build up kamya...
Waiting for more..nonu n moti together finally..
Nice storyline...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Hey. I am anjali. I m new here. Loved d update. Gr8 story. Pls continue soon..

Pls continue ur other one also. Eagerly waitin for both

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