Panchi OS- * I am not Missing you * - Page 2

Originally posted by: myownarea

Nice work Geet :) I loved the way you wrote this. First her vehement denial then her reluctant acceptance then declarations. I have also been looking forward to writing on Panchi , they've been inspiring a lot of work lately hehe! But I'll take this piece as inspiration to write more too so thank you and keep writing :)

Originally posted by: s2singh

Hi geet...thanks for PM...

Wow...amazing ...u have captured the real essence of Panchi...the real Nonu-moti...though i am a kisha fan...i adore Rahi...i like them a lot...something is unique about them...and u have captured all that...

once again thanks for PM

smriti

Originally posted by: sneha02

Thanks for capturing the relationship f moti n nonu so beautifully in words.. loved it all.. the transition from denial to declaration s so rahi..really missing panchi in the show so real nice timing too..thanks once again n hope to read more from u...

Originally posted by: kriti094

I really don't hav words to describe this amazing os
i loved d way u perfectly portrayed panchi's emotions
D transition frm i don't miss u to i miss u badly was simply fab
panchi's life is rv
n i love d way u presented it on ur os
thnk u so much for writing this
waiting for more stuff on rahi frm u

Originally posted by: RAHI_SS

its Amasing Geet👏👏...enjoyed reading 😊

loved it 😛 keep writing more on RaHi

n thank u for the pm

Originally posted by: loveukisha

I just love it Geet though i am kisha fan, but i think your OS is making me fan of rahi.I know rahi are cute & adorable😊 but your work make them more cute😳

Originally posted by: harshita1996

Geet😳 How can u be such a fab writer that i m always short of words..

Lovely update..

Amazing jst Wow..😃 Panchi was not missing him..

Bt she was missing him badly..Moti was missing Nonu..

Not missing bt Missing badly..:)😃

Wow.. u described it so damn beautifully..<3

Panchi's feelings were jst amazing..

Geet my pagali loved it..!!

Thanks fr pm..

Lots of love..

Big hug..

Muahh..!!!

Originally posted by: tinaswea

Beautifully written! 🤗

I juzz loved it!!

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey Smriti dear..Thanks a lot for commenting..I am glad u liked it..In spite of being a KiSha fan,u commented on My RaHi work🤗..Means a lot...Thanks once again😳

Originally posted by: yusramazhar1

em kinda speechleess , like really its the best one shot i have ever read. totally rahilicious <3
thankyou nd hugsss for the pm.
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