~Its Over~ KiSha OS

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hola buddies😃
its been a while since I wrote anything on KiSha
n even though I havent seen the latest episodes..
I did read WUs recently and hence came to know abt the KiSha patch up...
KiSha's relationship has seen it all
ups downs...
Misunderstandings of all sorts...
so...welll I have been missing KiSha intensity
their fire...the KiSha we always knew...
sooo here's what came to my mind when I heard abt Kiya's decision to leave for California...
keep ur jootas n chappals ready😆😆
love
Rads😃

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@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Its Over

" Let me clear out things for all of you...see this...I got admitted to American school of Music, California n I m going to US KD!! I really wanted to prove all of u that I m NOT NOBODY!!"
" dada mujhe aapse nahi padhna..aap itni chillate ho ki koi aap ke saath nahi rehna chahega"
" KD bhai jab aapko koi control nahi karta..aapko Kabhi kisi cheez ke liye nahi tokta toh aap kyu? "
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KD's mind was swirling...Kiya was leaving to US!! Leaving him behind...to pursue her career...so what did he have to do??
he wont be selfish...he wont stop her...no matter how much it hurts...
She is finally standing up for herself...I wont let myself be a hindrance...
KD resolved...and didnt know when tears streamed down his eyes as he drifted to a dreamless uncomfortable sleep!!
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That hurt ...that pain...she couldnt see them in his eyes as he congratulated her earlier that morning...no I cant hurt him...after all that he did for her..
always the protective one..
always there for her when she needed him...
" dont depend on me too much..otherwise how will u survive when u leave for US"
but she realized she couldnt think of a future without him in it...
yes career was important and ofcourse I will become A singer but not leaving him behind...
she finally resolved that night that she wouldn't leave for US
and dreamed of them together..life ahead...with them very much in it.
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NEXT DAY

Kiya sneaked into KD's tent early the next morning to tell him of her decision...but to her uttermost surprise he wasnt there!!
after wandering about she finally found him standing near the lake..lost in his own world..she hugged him from behind which made him turn instantly ..when he looked back she could feel something ...different in him...their gaze met briefly and then she just couldnt resist she came closer...
with every word she spoke
"KD I've finally decided that I wont go to US...coz for me U're more important..."
she was sooo close to him..that she could feel his breath...she could count his heartbeat...as she moved forward to hug him...to her uttermost surprise he held her with 1 hand and maintained a distance between them with the other...
" Kiya Gujral...dont stop me today...there are a lot of things I want to talk about today...things we need to talk about..."
he trailed off n yet she somehow knew it wasn't something good...coz she could feel his pain in every word he spoke...she'd never seen him like this...so vulnerable...so...
" I keep telling people to grow up..I have recently been tooo selfish...all I thought about was me myself...so much that I ignored You n Piddhi...I hurt my brother ...I left home...just thinking about myself...but no not anymore...I wont let u give up things for my sake Kiya...this is a Huge opportunity for you...which would take you to places...I've recently imposed a lot of things on you..a relationship is not about imposing..its not about ego..its not about being a hindrance of any sort on the other...it isnt...so..."
there was a brief silence an uncomfortable one...
"nooo dont say it" Kiya's heart ached but words didnt come out
KD's eyes finally met hers...rather pierced her soul as words came tumbling out of his mouth..he was trembling as he spoke the next set of words...afraid to break down...fighting back tears ...he finally said those forbidden words...
" u'd once asked me to reconsider our Relationship...
here's my reply to you...
Kiya Gujral...I Keshav Desai...in my full conscious set u free...live ur life...ur way...succeed in whatever u pursue...its about time it happens...being with u was epic...but I dont want be a hindrance in your life...its about time we focus on our respective careers...Baba n Shubh need me...Baba has done sooo much for me...its about time I understand and take up my responsibilities..u're a fab singer..its about time u show ur family ur real worth...shut ur Mom n Anya's mouth once and for all...its for our own good...time to move on...in other words..."
he choked , she cried...their gaze still held...his grip loosened...
" ITS OVER" he let go off her hand...silence prevailed as all the buddies saw what was happening...but before anyone could react...before anyone could comprehend...he was gone...his eyes red ...his face had a painful expression...she was devasted ...her knees gave way...and her fall was freee...but now she didnt care...
IT was ALL OVER!!

Edited by -Serendipity- - 11 years ago

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Mugdhaa

@NonComposMentis

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Radsy, that was really good!!

I loved KD's speech.

There always comes a time when you have no other choice but to let people go...

While all was over for them here, the future holds so much.

Where they might just start anew...

I loved this, Radsy!

it really was a perfect closure! :D

Especially as it is according to the current track!

Love,

Mugs.

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DreamCatcher..

@DreamCatcher..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Radsii🤗

I read ur writings after long time that to on kisha..Feeling good:)

Amazing OS yaar..

Ur way of explaining the emotions n writing will be always fab n i luv it..

Pls keep writing more

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis
Radsy, that was really good!!
kiddoo..do u really mean it??😲😳😳
I loved KD's speech.
I always find KD to be the maturer one..I wanted a mature closure...and KD's always the one who accepts his faults and tries correcting them...thats what I love abt his character hence this speech seemed logical
There always comes a time when you have no other choice but to let people go...
While all was over for them here, the future holds so much.
Where they might just start anew...
yes its a breakup and yet is open ended..glad u noticed😃
I loved this, Radsy!
it really was a perfect closure! :D
Especially as it is according to the current track!
I was a bit apprehensive but I m glad U liked it...so I m relieved😆😆
Love,
Mugs.

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..LuvlySmiles..
Radsii🤗
Haari🤗
I read ur writings after long time that to on kisha..Feeling good:)
m so glad to see u too😃
Amazing OS yaar..
I m more than glad to know that😃
Ur way of explaining the emotions n writing will be always fab n i luv it..
Pls keep writing more
ofcourse I will darling😃

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KDreamer

@KDreamer

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

I loved it...really...

Bt if sumthng like this will happen ...i ll cry...

I cant see kd crying...

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KDreamer
I loved it...really...
Bt if sumthng like this will happen ...i ll cry...
I cant see kd crying...

me too can never see him crying😭😭

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Smriti Singh

@s2singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi...I liked ur OS a lot...but seriously i dont want any breakup between them...i cant see kisha crying...

I want them to focus on their career/individual growth but i also want them to support each other for the same...

smriti

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: s2singh
Hi...I liked ur OS a lot...but seriously i dont want any breakup between them...i cant see kisha crying...
I want them to focus on their career/individual growth but i also want them to support each other for the same...

smriti

its an open ended story Smriti...I said he left from thr...
now it can in any direction ..
a fresh start of their relation
or them still supporting each other and taking the tough decision of conc on their careers with her going to US n him establishing himself in MUMBAI n having a fresh new start in their relation ...at a later stage..
this wasnt the end...may be a start to a beautiful future
its the way u see it that matters
u saw the half empty glass in this OS
I saw the half full glass While writing this piece

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