~Its Over~ KiSha OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: krazy4KD

Rads I alvays love ur riting specially the vay u rote emotions ^_^

This one I also loved it..

KD's pt as I can feel... 😳

Loved it

Originally posted by: ItsMe_Ammu

Radsy that was too good yaar...🤗

After a long I felt something for Kisha, felt a connection which I thought was lost...Thank you for bringing it back.. I will be super duper happy if this happens in TBP...

Even I haven't been watching the show these days and it will take something like this to bring me back...

This one caused a tug at my heart...

Once again Radsy...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Sorry Rads for the late comment but kya karun, I'm a bhulakkad. :P

I meant to read it par res karna bhi bhul gayi. 😆
no problem dudette😃

Coming to the OS,

The opening, KD getting yaadein of people pointing out his selfishness and then him beating himself up over it. Loved it!

Shubh's dialogue especially touched my heart. <3
yup Shubh's dialogue had touched me too hence the incorporation

Then Kiya's POV, the way she realised that he had always supported her and had been there for her in her bad times and even though they had their fights, they had their good times too. Then Kiya realising ki she can't leave him, the part was wonderfully written. :)

well coz he has...always supported her ..and what does he get in return most of the times? her never ending rants..she needs to realize his importance too hence this part

Then their conversation, more of a one-sided convo but yeah, you get the gist.

KD ka speech was touching yaar! It's so true. 'Kuch paane ke liye kuch khona bhi padta hai' and this is what happened here too.

"I've recently imposed a lot of things on you..a relationship is not about imposing..its not about ego..its not about being a hindrance of any sort on the other...it isnt..."

This line was very well written! 👏
I wanted a mature closure hence this

Then, in the end, KD realizing his responsibilities towards his family. After all, they come first and then the break up.
yes I feel he's straying away from his family and his responsibilities towards them hence I added this part

The whole OS was touching Rads!

Must say, one of you best works nahi but one of your deepest works! :)

awww...the best compliment I received on this story thank u thank u😃😳

Love,

Ananya! :D

Originally posted by: -Serendipity-

Originally posted by: yoyolo

LOVED IT!

I could feel her pain and KD's emotions as well...

What he said was completely true and still so sad. :(

Sometimes, we don't have a choice ...

Really nicely written and you described their emotions really well!!

That was a really good one, Radsss ❤️