Musings in the Blue *OS* - Page 5

Originally posted by: Adry

Yeah right...that tone says it all...:/

Haww you mean on 8th itself??!! :O maha epi ke din

you'll be missing it then???

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Yeah..par test is on 8th..and until and unless they keep a test on 9th..I should be able to...

And nai, toh Net toh hai hi. :P

I can always wake up at 3 ;)

Originally posted by: Adry

I don't like watching it online...feel nahin aati :P

Ahh back to your normal routine i see...how do you get up at ungodly hour?? i switch off the alarm and go back to sleep😲

Originally posted by: coolpixie

Res.

Unres Elinor! <3 Finally! :D

OMG! Such a beautiful piece! Arigatou! <3

I will start with the first story. In this story, I immediately placed kashaf and zaroon, mostly because in the last episode of the zgh, kashaf leaves the house after fighting with zaroon just like this. So, I pictured them when I was reading it for the first time. but, after reading it the second time, I couldn't help but be touched by the situation! This kind of fight that can happen in any couple's life, you captured it perfectly! Your attention to details is marvelous, those little little details add up and make a glorious and beautiful picture. I was seriously touched by this little piece. and I absolutely loved this line, "No. I broke it. So I'll fix it...and what's more...I'll fix us...I'll fix us so we can go back to being the way we were...and all that happened...would be nothing but a bad memory...never again to be relived..." ,god such a beautiful end, the simple remark that no, I will fix it! A perfect closure. Kashaf and Zaroon? Eep! I totally forgot about ZGH! :O No worries, though. Gonna catch atleast one more epi before school reopens. :) Elinoorr!! <3

and then the second story, this paragraph I'm about to paste is just so brilliant that I absolutely had to put it in my comment,

Love. He was in love with the one person...who could never ever be his, a fact which he knew best of all. She was already in love with someone else. Someone, who so obviously wasn't him. How he wished it wasn't true; he wasn't true. How he wished it was him she loved. How he wished he had never entered her life. How he wished he had never fallen for her. How he wished she still had feelings for him. How he wished she'd never moved on withhim...

So many contradictory feelings, he wants to let go her, yet wants her to still have some feelings for him, he thinks he should have never fallen in love with her, yet wants her to still fall in love with him. That hoping and wishing that the situation turns around and he gets the love of his life. This piece had vichi written all over it the first time I read it, but again after reading it the second time, I am just bathing in the gloriousness of such feelings and your portrayal of those feelings..again the perfect ending with these very words, "He'd always be the one to comfort her, to know her troubles and to make her, smile through her tears. And no one could ever change that fact. He could live with it.", This! The fact that this realization comes at the end is just so sweet! and, ultimately that's his love for her! Perfecto!<3 Damn girlie, you described it SO perfectly! <3

the third story, It had the desperate yet this longing plea of a lover, that please just don't let go of my hand. Those words in the letter fully reflected the lyrics you used, "'Cause I don't wanna lose you now, I'm looking right at the other half of me". Loved it, just simply loved it! I'm glad that his pleas and the feelings in that letter did not go to waste because they were just way too precious. Ohhh!! Mirrors was the one part I wasn't sure of at ALL! I'm glad the letter mirrored the lyrics ( No pun intended. :P)

and the fourth story, OMG! My favorite! I was squealing like a little girl while reading this, both the first time and the second time! I absolutely absolutely loved it!!! From the beginning to end, every single thing about it was just perfect and adorable! The fact that she couldn't sleep because he wasn't there, the fact that she was holding his shirt, trying to find comfort by holding his things. AHHH...the feeling of missing someone so much, so freaking beautiful!!! Just for this little piece alone, you deserve a..👏. Somehow, it reminded me of every married couple! The feeling of missing the husband..and, getting the bliss, just by seeing a simple 'I love you' from him..ahhh..Absolutely adorable! Again, a perfect end with,

"Was busy, sorry. I love you."

She sighed in bliss, and fell back on the bed, clutching her phone and his shirt to her chest once more.

Then again, she thought, as she snuggled back into his pillow, love is said to be a form of madness, after all.

ahhh..I blissfully died.. It's my favourite bit too! :D There is only so much of angst that I can bear, y'know. That's the reason why Hurt/Comfort as a genre appeals so much to me, because there is healing after the initial pain. <3

and, the last but not least, the fifth story, a beautiful ending in commemorating the whole cycle of a relationship! Just no more words by this point! This is a perfect closure in saying that you know what, even if we fight, it's only you I want to be with because if it's with you then every one of those fights is a treasure! Loved the ending line, Not yet, they thought, the love is still there...and I'll make sure it stays forever..., If only all the couples thought like this, then the divorce rates would be so much lower! Regardless, a beautiful ending to a beautiful story!

Overall, I think this is your best work till date, the best! I absolutely and utterly loved it! So many diverse situations, but in the end all of them having one thing in common amongst them, that being their love for each other. This was perfection, and you're officially declared as one of the best writers by me! Honestly, you excel in this genre, the way you take the details in account , you create a scene by bringing in all those details and completely draw your reader in. It is an art. I have no words, and can only do this..👏

Hayyeee!!! <3 *squeals*

Last but not least, I guess you expressed your deepest condolences through this work, and I would also like to express my deepest condolences through this comment, and hope that swetha's soul is in peace, and her family is able to live with her beautiful memories and is able to pass through this tough time. Even though, I didn't know her personally, she will always be remembered by her family and friends for the person and girl she was. ❤️ RIP<3 Elinor, that's a damn sweet gesture.

Btw, mugzy, sorry for this awfully long comment, but I guess I got carried away while reading your beautiful work along with listening "she" by charles aznavour. I am in love with that song, it just gives me this amazing feeling, and I think your work enhanced that feeling by 1o times. Give it a listen if you haven't, it's a beautiful song<3

Sorry? SORRY? Are you kidding me?! THIS is THE best comment I've EVER got!!! It completely, COMPLETELY floored me!

I'm sorry my replies don't make much sense, but you know...it's times like these, when I'm just SO overwhelmed..that words fail me. I love you! I just, totally totally TOTALLY love you! <3 <3🤗🤗

Originally posted by: DevilishAngel95

I read this long back but couldnt comment...sorry...

This was beautiful Mugs!!

All the parts are amazing and very well written...

i especially loved the fourth one...

I feel this piece is truly one of the your best ones!! 😊

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Mugsieee m back!

after 2 months😆

anyway finally i read this OS!

what to say about u and your writing u already know your my fav

i loved the way u divided it into parts!

KiSha,KiSha,KiSha all the way,it was KiSha in each n every part in my mind!

i just could not imagine any1 there!

the first part!

The way he couldnt just be without her n she behaving in a cowardily manner to see him after what happ

perfect!the way it as described perfect!

the second part,he loved her,she dint?she loved some1 else!

beautifully described👏,he could not be the oe who could flatter her heart but he could make her smile,be next to her n that was enough for him to stay alive!

how beautiful is that on earth????😭

the third part-madness or love?she couldnt slip without sleeping in his arms?she wasn't the one dependent on some1!it was not madness it was love as it is a part of love!

so cuteee,you always make me go gaga over all these stuff!

really its like i fall for these stuff like in a min!

n the last part fighting,argueing had become a part of their life now!

but they love eachother!all this happens n surely does happen!

You are the only writer who makes me fall for love,emotions,care,affection,every freaking time!

amazing OS surely again ur best one!

love ya <3

n sorry for being so late!