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Prologue:
Seventeen year old Kiya has always been the second-best compared to her older sister,Anya.Now that Anya is getting married to a great business man,kiya is even more invisible to her mother.The wedding is set on Los Angeles.But just when kiya thinks life can't get any worse,she meets the best man's idiot of a younger brother.Keshav Desai is the unluckiest guy on the planet.So,with KD's luck,what starts out as an innocent errand turns into an accidental vacation to mexico.To make back to Los Angeles in time for the wedding,Kiya and KD must survive rough terrain,strange locals,and worst of all each-----other.But along the way,these accidental tourists might just stumble upon love.
Chapter 1-Page 4
Chapter2-Page 6
Seventeen year old Kiya has always been the second-best compared to her older sister,Anya.Now that Anya is getting married to a great business man,kiya is even more invisible to her mother.The wedding is set on Los Angeles.But just when kiya thinks life can't get any worse,she meets the best man's idiot of a younger brother.Keshav Desai is the unluckiest guy on the planet.So,with KD's luck,what starts out as an innocent errand turns into an accidental vacation to mexico.To make back to Los Angeles in time for the wedding,Kiya and KD must survive rough terrain,strange locals,and worst of all each-----other.But along the way,these accidental tourists might just stumble upon love.
Chapter 1-Page 4
Chapter2-Page 6
Chapter3(a)-page 9
Chapter3(b)-page10
Chapter4-page14
Chapter5-page17
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This is the prologue of the story.let me know if it is good or bad.Should I continue?
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This is the prologue of the story.let me know if it is good or bad.Should I continue?
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