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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
I open this randomly because Im just so bored and because it's by you and i press 'pg dn' and see this line:

And I go to a school for spies.


Do I need another reason to NOT continue reading this? Heck no! You just wait for my comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Prachi*



Well, this is not a total romantic FF, just a heads up.
Its more about friendship and romance. :P
Oh and spies! 😆 Err. I don't care as long as it involves spies 😆 But yea, a pinch of everything is needed for perfection 😳
So read and let me know if you like it.

Main character is NOT a TBP character. It is my imaginary character. But you will be introduced to Panchi and Kiya. And you will see their side of story involving RV and KD.
This is based of a novel, but the plot is mine.
I won't reveal the book until I am done, what if you go read it first? 😆 Blah. I demand to know 😳
Man, I am such a jobless person! 😆 But really, its an addiction. Besides, I need break from IB! LOL I can understand the addiction part AND a break from IB. You have no idea how crazy I went.

Royal Institute

There are two types of people in this world: those who know the reality of what goes on inside the walls of Royal Institute: For Exceptional Young Women, and those who don't. Wow! That's a nice way to put it 🤣

Of course, if you are reading this you must have the level four clearance or higher, and you must have known that Royal Institute isn't exactly a normal school. But if you haven't, you would have the knowledge no different from every outsider -- that Royal Institute is a typical school for snobby, rich girls. Our school was far from typical. This was the school where in last three years; I have mastered fourteen languages, expertized solving linear algebra in my head and been trained to kill anyone without using any weapon other than hands. Though mother ones told me that the strongest physical weapon is your hand. My mother -- just incase you are curious - is the headmistress of Royal Institute. bold- bloody woah!!


Royal Institute just got back to normal. Normal is the last thing this can be 🤣 I love the sarcasm!!

She paused. I have heard this speech since last three years. I remember the first time I had met the sisterhood. One day after my father's news of never coming home was given to me. Even at such state, my mother had enthusiastically given her speech. I wondered if I would ever be able to be like her. Awh man. She really is something!

Royal Institute was a prestigious school for exceptional young girls. Did I forget to mention girls? This place is all time girls, all time no man allowed with exceptional case of plastic-surgery-getting faculty members for better measure. No wonder with the no romance part 🤣

He walked up to my mother and before he went on to sit at his chair, he -- I almost fainted -- winked at my mother. HOLY Sh-MOLlY!! 😲

"Saxena!" She replied. "Jay Saxena!" She sounded like female version of James Bond, yet introducing someone else. I thought the same.. Bond... James Bond LMAO!

"I am going to prepare you for what is out there." He pointed at the ceiling. "I am going to make this class really hard for you, and that is why I won't force you to be here. You will be moved to Research and Development next years if I have the slightest doubt that you can't do this. Impress me, and next year you will go a floor lower." He said, and walked towards the door. "Class over." No joke!! He isn't here to kid around. Dude, I LOVED the way he asked in different languages and then the way you've described all the little fancy totally spy-kind stuff! You make me more addicted to the thought 😆


Let me know of ANY gramatical, or mechanical mistakes. Okay I didn't read this until the end since I was commenting as I read along. But yes, there was one grammatical error I noticed.

Read, like and comment =) Read- check. Like- check. Comment- half way there 😆



So yea... You have my comments for chapter one. I SOO loved the beginning of RI. Well explained. Each and every person's intro and the mechanisms you've built in here. All the highly developed techs as well. I have no doubt you'll follow this story perfectly and each chapter will add more spice to the lives on these 8 ladies and mostly Neesha Rai. Oh, almost forgot to mention. I alos like how you've created your own character and not used any TBP character to play the main role. Always appealing to me. Now I shall have my dinner and then continue reading. Though, if I get lazy, you might not see my comment till tomorrow. I might go run off to watch some show. Or better yet, find MI:2 online. ☺️

And NOW, I'm done with my comment. (as soon as I click post reply. Laters!
Love, Khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

I open this randomly because Im just so bored and because it's by you and i press 'pg dn' and see this line:


And I go to a school for spies.


Do I need another reason to NOT continue reading this? Heck no! You just wait for my comment



KHUSHI!!!
Holy Mother of my chocolate fudge! 🤣 🤣

Thank you for reading! Ah, my Covert Partner! 😆

I just saw your comments! If I knew Spy thing will interest people more than romance, I wouldn't have skipped out all the "cool" stuff. 😆

THANK YOU!

Will try to reply to the AMAZING comment above ASAP! Got an essay due by midnight! =/ Lol!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"And ladies," He said with his hand on the door, "if this operation hard," I don't think anyone was breathing. "It is supposed to be."

wow... love this Mr. Saxena. and i m very excited to meet KD. reading on the next part to find out...
and this ff is just awesome... the best that i hav read till date... completely in luv...

regards
Jhankaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
part 2
lovely update yar... but u have just left it on a cliffhanger... i hate it yar... really excited to kno more about this... plz plz plz update soon... waiting for it as anything...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Prachi*



KHUSHI!!!
Holy Mother of my chocolate fudge! 🤣 🤣

Thank you for reading! Ah, my Covert Partner! 😆

I just saw your comments! If I knew Spy thing will interest people more than romance, I wouldn't have skipped out all the "cool" stuff. 😆

THANK YOU!

Will try to reply to the AMAZING comment above ASAP! Got an essay due by midnight! =/ Lol!


PRACH!!! LMAO! Your sense of cursing!

LOL, Your welcome. but you do know my comments will be highly irregular, right?

Ahaha! You should've asked me! I have an FF in similar genre (which I recently discontinued because of something something) and even there, many of them love the mixture.

O-My! Essay during breaks as well? I'm gonna enjoy my 11th last free Thanksgiving while I can! Good luck!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy4lyf

"And ladies," He said with his hand on the door, "if this operation hard," I don't think anyone was breathing. "It is supposed to be."

wow... love this Mr. Saxena. and i m very excited to meet KD. reading on the next part to find out...
and this ff is just awesome... the best that i hav read till date... completely in luv...

regards
Jhankaar


Thank you! Err, I am sorry but you won't meet KD..YET! Thanks for your comment though! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy4lyf

part 2

lovely update yar... but u have just left it on a cliffhanger... i hate it yar... really excited to kno more about this... plz plz plz update soon... waiting for it as anything...


Thanks once again! For two comments! Haha! It's my speciality--Cliff hangers! 😆 Will update ASAP :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..


PRACH!!! LMAO! Your sense of cursing!

LOL, Your welcome. but you do know my comments will be highly irregular, right?

Ahaha! You should've asked me! I have an FF in similar genre (which I recently discontinued because of something something) and even there, many of them love the mixture.

O-My! Essay during breaks as well? I'm gonna enjoy my 11th last free Thanksgiving while I can! Good luck!!


I don't think I can curse without pun on IF, so...Lmao!

I know! Your irregular is an understatement, but as long as you comment once a month, or once bi-month, its fine! 😆 Wait, its GREAT!

Really? What's the name? I might read it if I have time! I am going to twist my "The Cover" and make it all spy-stuff. No more lovey-dovey stuff! I get sick of it! 😆 *Looks who's talking! I watched IHLS fifty thousand times*

Yeah! Government essay! 2000 words! It was ridiculous! -_- But now am free all break! :P
But yes, enjoy till it lasts! Next year is gonna get harder!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Exciting line by line!
I was more than half sure that Neesha had met a boy from Ashwamedh.
That was a nice touch.

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