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Kesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sweet_violet

Yay . .Cherry liked it!!!!!😃😃😃
now I feel relieved. .
ofcourse u r my priority madam😃

Awwieee...😳

Ab itna bhi mat bigaado mujhe :P

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Rads

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ..Babydoll..
Awesome Start Rads and i love the title aswell <3

u liked d title. . yay😃

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: amiee125
I love your title! And this is the track im waiting for even in the show :-D Update it soon :-)

me too😛

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Satarupa

@..Satarupa..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

AWESOME Prologue...😊

Plzzz do continue and pm me the next update...😊

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: 0-Sata_rupa-0
AWESOME Prologue...😊
Plzzz do continue and pm me the next update...😊

sure😃

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Satarupa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Sweet_violet

sure😃

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Nice prologue dear...continue soon n pm me...nicely written...dats wat i always think wat u say regarding kd correcting himself after knowing d truth...wat abt playing wid any1's feelings or making an evil plan...i really hate two-faced persons...u showed all these things properly😊

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Nice prologue dear...continue soon n pm me...nicely written...dats wat i always think wat u say regarding kd correcting himself after knowing d truth...wat abt playing wid any1's feelings or making an evil plan...i really hate two-faced persons...u showed all these things properly😊

me too hate 2 faced ppl😡

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zzinia2411

@zzinia2411

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

omg! the ending was super cuttteee!😳 PLEASE do continue 😃 really liked it 👍🏼

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Part 1

Time : 6a.m.
Day: Monday
Venue: Choupati beach
Early in the morning . .. when the sun was rising . . .peaking in from the clouds . .and when viewed from the water below .. .u thought u were in some sort of paradise . .. !!!!
The birds were chirping .. n the only other sound that could be heard were the rising n crashing of the waves of the beautiful beach. . .
It was such a serene environment .. that u cud simply sit there for hours doing nothing but admiring nature's beauty. . ..
thats exactly the kind of environment KD needed at the moment . ..
to calm down the tornado errupting inside him . ..
For the 1st time in his life . .he was so much ashamed of himself . .
he was in so much full of guilt that he could actually errupt . ..
why ?
why didnt he hear to his heart?
his heart always told him that she was innocent . .
that it was all a mis understanding . .
yet . ..
like a fool he blindly followed what his eyes saw n the brain interpretted. .. .
didnt even care to confirm his belief . .
now how will he face her ?
She isn't wrong in taking her own time to forgive him . .
after all she's as egoistic n hot headed as him .. .
and he's hurt her her to the last T
he wouldn't be surprised if she never ever forgive him . .. !!!!
even the thought made him shiver!!!
because of him . .
she'll again go back to her shell . .
keep her real self at an arms distance from others . ..
But was he completely at fault?
under the circumstances . .
any1 would have reacted the same way ..
what with Kiya's hand entwined with his .. .
he had felt so cheated ..
so ... . . .
well yes . ..thanks to the incidence .. . he could completely understand Kiya's feelings completely . .
The inner turmoil inside . .the uneasiness . .
him not been to control the situation was all new to him ..
He'd never hurt some1 before .. n that too a girl ... !!!!!
What had gone wrong with him ..
n why were Kiya's feeling ..
her emotions so important to him ?
"coz U r the 1 responsible for this hurt Kiya" said his inner voice ..
yes . .. thats it .. . . .. . ..
Now what to do today?
chase her all over the place n keep saying sorry ?
try to help her wherever necessary?
naaa. . he had to do something huge. .
something convincing .. .
but what n how ?
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hope u all like this part

Edited by Sweet_violet - 12 years ago

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