Hurting Myself -- KiSha -- OS -- KD POV - Pg 4 -- - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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realy love this specialy the emotion of kiya..please continue & dont forget to pm me dear. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: ..-Chabhilal-..

Loved it alia !!!!
Poor Kiya it was her birthday :(
Loved the friendship between juhi nd Kiya



Kithe hai buddyyy!!??
IF is being a jerk to me, i try pming u but it say errooorrr.. >.<

Thanks for reading!! :D <3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KiSha13

realy love this specialy the emotion of kiya..please continue & dont forget to pm me dear. 😳



Thanks! :D

Kardungi! :D <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Did I do the right thing?
Kya meine sahi kiya?

I took my moms photo in my hand, "Maa, aap yahan kyun nahi ho? Aaj mujhe aapki sabse zyda zaroorat hai." I lied down on my bed thinking about what I did with Kiya.


I kept turning in my bed I couldn't sleep, kaise sooun. Mujhe kyun itna burra lag raha hai? She means nothing to me right?

Stop lying from yourself Keshav.

In this past month, I got to know more about chicklet and she nothing like I expected her to be. Today when that tear fell from her eyes my heart silently cried.

I took my mp3 and my jacket and walked towards the door.


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I was sitting on the wet sand. With headphones plugged in my ears,


" Hua joh dard bhi toh
Humko aaj kuch zyada hua"

Kiya saved me but how? Today when we got close my heart was beating too fast. When I get closer to her why can't control myself?

I closed my eyes and let the music let me relax.

"Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love"

I should've never done what I did.

I took my phone out and started to text Kiya

"I am sorry Kiya, I should've never done that, I keep hurting you and you know what it hurts me the same. You are flawless, you dance amazingly, ur style, ur beauty everything is just flawless, never be afraid to be yourself. People are jealous of u, for ur information. I am sorry, I was always a jerk to you. I never treated u right.. Today was just too much, the tears that fell from ur eyes directly hit my heart and it was crushed today, I don't know why it hurts seeing you cry. I am not lying nor this is any of my plan. I am going to stay away from your life forever, we'll pretend like we don't know eachother, k? I am trouble and will only cause you trouble I am ass and u deserve better than me."

I looked at once again, re reading it. I slowly started to erase it.

I closed my eyes and a tear slipped from my eyes. I never cried in my lifetime for anyone except my mother and I am crying for chicklet? Must be the guilt.

Stop Lying KD!

I got up and started walking towards my house.

Kiya Gujral and Keshav Desai are never meant to stay together. Keep this in your mind KD.


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Hows it? :D

KD's point of view. :)

Edited by xKishaxForevahx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice yaar...love the way you are potraying the emotion of this two..thanks for the lovely update & thanks for pm me..continue more.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
oh god..its beautiful...u portrayed both of them very well...
aww kd u n kiya r made for each other.😳.
alia, damn i want more...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much u pm me and it is really awesome... continue writing... u write really good and the emotions u portrayed were amazing.. HATS OFF👏 THIS IS FOR U🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!! it was amazing👏👏 loved it ❤️ continue writing...nd do pm me 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG i luved it...superb yr ..lovely fab...<3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Nice...liked the way you portrayed the two's emotions. But just couldn't get enough of it, was too short! Wished it was a lil longer. Thanks for the PM.. :)

-Shreya and kanishtha.

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