OS: I'm Sorry/I Know How It Feels [KD-Kiya] - Page 3

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-Jwalamukhi- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

SHIFALIII😡 I'm mad at you! Every other day I used to beg you to write something and now that you do you don't even tell me😳


😳 Haw! Me sorry!😡 But I thought you didn't read any OS/FFs anymore!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: *Shifali*


Thank you and for sure I'll PM you when I decide to write something else.😳


Thank you for the compliment and for sure I'll PM you when I write something else!😳

Thanx...I'll be waiting😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
loved it
plz pm me wenever u write again
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: *Shifali*


😳 Haw! Me sorry!😡 But I thought you didn't read any OS/FFs anymore!



Yeah I don't😳 Unless the FF is complete OR if I really like the person's writing in which case I don't care if I have to wait 238927382 janams for an update. This wasn't a FF and I like your writing. Dungar

Anywho, me loved it =) The way you described how they were both feeling, I could kind of picture it in my head so woot!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazysky

loved it
plz pm me wenever u write again


Thank you!😳 And for sure I'll PM you the next time I write!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-



Yeah I don't😳 Unless the FF is complete OR if I really like the person's writing in which case I don't care if I have to wait 238927382 janams for an update. This wasn't a FF and I like your writing. Dungar

Anywho, me loved it =) The way you described how they were both feeling, I could kind of picture it in my head so woot!


Ravjotan! ROFL! Awe!☺️ I like writing my things so they look good as a movie in your head!🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
another awesome os !!!1 loved Kisha the sudden change in kiya must have shocjed KD so much!!!1 loved the sorry part awesome n thenKD trying to understand wht happend rite now was cute loved iot do write m ore
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: *Shifali*


Hey!

At first I was thinking of writing a 2 part short story, one with KD's POV and one with Kiya's but then I decided to squish it all in one.🤣 And for sure I'll PM you next time😳


Well you still can make this story of two part. After all we didn't get to see KD's PoV in detail.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
ur writing is good
described all the feelings they felt clearly
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
This is was beautifully penned Shifali.Amazing OS.Keep writing more!

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