Ending(Updated last chapter on Pg 30)(25.07.19) - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago
Chalo akhir thahaan k news paper ki planing start Ho gayee pr undono ko doubt hai, Waise hona bhi chahiye q k unke saath itna kuch ho Chuka hai

Vasu baccho K liye khush hai I hope k thahaan family k jaise hi Dhruv ki family bhi poori Ho jaye

Aur us unknown person K liye surname "Mr. Raichand kaisa rahega
Nice update upasna 😊 and waiting for next
Edited by saakshiii12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Toulup

I need some suggestions for the surname of Mr. Unknown.


I might not be giving updates regularly.


Mr. Jindal kaisa hoga?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Unlike the original show, at least thahaan here is shown to work and think of the newspapers and the publishing.. But I am waiting for the mysterious unknown Mr... update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update 👍🏼
I think this publisher works for that man who has kidnapped Aditi...i hope ThaHaan find out his intentions and cancel the deal
poor kids...i hope they get their mom back asap

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Posted: 7 years ago

12:10

At a restaurant

Mr. Gupta was already there when Thapki and Bihaan arrived at the restaurant. They ordered their food. After some minutes a man came. It was the same man who warned them about going ahead with the deal with Mr. Gupta.

Mr. Gupta: Bihaan, Thapki yeh mera beta hai, Saurav. (Bihaan, Thapki, This is my son, Saurav.)

Saurav shook his hand with Bihaan then with Thapki.

Mr. Gupta: Yeh hi apke saare kam sambhalega. Tum log baat karlo. Main abhi aata hoon.(He is the one who will be handling your work. I'll be right back.)

Saying so, he headed towards the washroom.

Saurav: Papa ne apko apne company ke bare mein kuch kaha? (Did dad tell you anything about his company?)

Bihaan: Nahi. (No.)

Saurav: Aur aap logon ne kuch pata karne ki koshish nahi ki? (And you did not try to find anything?)

Bihaan and Thapki got a bit surprised with his questions and his tone. Saurav let out a sigh.

Saurav: Kuch mahinon mein ye company nahi rahega. (In some months this company will no longer be there.)

Saurav halted a bit to see how the two were reacting to this. Then he continued,

Saurav: Sirf aap logon ke project iss company ko bacha sakta hai. Agar ye magazine popular ho jaayega to hum apne saare losses ko cover kar payenge. Lekin isme bahut saare risk hai. Agar aap humare saath kaam karne se na bhi karde toh mujhe bura nahi lagega. (It is only your project that can save this company. If this magazine becomes popular, then we will be able to cover our losses. But there is a lot of risk in this. Even if you refuse to work with us, I won't feel bad.)

Saurav glanced at the washroom.

Saurav: Toh aap log kya karenge? (So, what will you do?)

Thapki: Hume sochne ke liye thoda vakt chahiye. (We need some time to think.)

Saurav: Main samaj sakta hoon. Ek request hai: Papa ko ye na bataye ki maine aapko sab kuch bataya. (I can understand. I have a request: Don't tell dad that I've told you everything about the company.)

Saurav took out his pen and wrote his phone number on a tissue paper. He gave it to Bihaan. Just then Mr. Gupta came back.

Mr. Gupta: Bihaan beta ye number abhi apne phone pe save karlo. Akhir Saurav ke saath hi kaam karna hai. (Save this number on your phone now itself. After all you will have to work with Saurav.)

Night

Outside the house

Bauji was sitting outside the house. Gulabo was giving him company. Bihaan noticed him. He came back with a shawl. He wrapped Bauji in it and sat beside him.

Bihaan: Aap baahar kya kar rahe ho? Aaj kuch zyada hi thand hai na? (What are you doing outside? It's a bit too cold today?)

Bauji: Bihaan, tum aur Thapki aaj kahan the? Pichle teen dinon se tum dono kaane ke samay pe ghar pe nahi the. Kya sab kuch theek hai? (Where were Thapki and you today? Since the three day you two were not at home at lunch time. Is everything alright?)

Bihaan: Kuch kaam tha. Isiliye hum ghar pe nahi the. (There was some work to be done. That's why we were not at home.)

Seeing the enquiring look on Bauji's face, Bihaan decided to tell him that they were going to go on with their newspaper idea.

Bauji: Tumne pehle kyun nahi bataya? (Why didn't you tell this before?)

Bihaan: Vo... hum sab ko surprise karna chahete the. Aur aap kisiko ye baat nahi batayenge. (Well... we wanted it to be a surprise. And you won't tell this to anyone.)

After a while Bihaan asked Bauji his opinion about whether to go ahead with working with Mr. Gupta or not.

Bauji: Jo theek lage, vo kar. (Do whatever feels right.)

Bihaan thought about Saurav. He had told them the truth despite knowing that they will probably refuse working together. But there is something else he saw in Saurav's eyes, maybe hope. He wanted to save his father's company. Bihaan knew that.

It was some voices that disturbed Bihaan's thoughts. Vasu was saying something to him.

Bihaan: Huh?

Vasu: Andar chalo. (Come inside.)

Dhruv: Bihaan, kya soch rahe ho? Andar chalte hai. Aaj mere channel pe kuch khaas aane vala hai. (Bihaan, what are you thinking. Let's go inside. There is something special that will be telecasted on my channel today.)

Inside PN

Everyone was watching the TV, waiting to know what so special was about to be telecasted today. Finally the new show started. While everyone was enjoying the show, Bihaan found something very disturbing. He discreetly went to his room. He then searched for the reporter he just saw on TV on the internet. It turned out that he had been working for 4 years at Dhruv's channel. Bihaan looked for the other reporters working there. After some minutes, he found another known person.




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Posted: 7 years ago
OK toh thahaan ki help hi kar raha hai unko pehle se sb sach batakar pr kya pata may be uska koi hidden agenda bhi Ho sakta hai

Bihaan ne sbkuch Bauji ko bata diya Thik Hi hai q k thahaan ka joh nature raha hai humesha se K sbkuch woh akele hi karte hai kisi ko batate nhi hai yeh unhe kai baar mushkil me daal deta hai

Koun Ho sakta hai woh reporter Bihaan ab uski jasoosi karega, usko toh news paper K baare me sochna chahiye

Update accha hai pr thoda bahut thahaan Scenes miss kiye, I know k story me abhi Romance K liye jagah nhi pr kuch pyaar bhari baate toh Ho hi sakti hai

Nice update please jaldi update Dena
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update. Every thing is so confusing. Don't know who is positive and who is negative. Suspense is killing me. Post the next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

PN Living room

Thapki noticed that Bihaan was missing. She went upstairs to see if he was in the room. Bihaan was so engrossed in his phone that he did not realize that Thapki was there.

Thapki: Tum yahan akele kya kar rahe ho? (What are you doing here alone?)

Bihaan did not hear her.

Thapki: Bihaan?

She placed her hand on his shoulder which made him come back to reality. Thapki sat on the bed besides him and questioned him what was wrong. Bihaan showed her the phone.

Bihaan: Yeh raha Samar aur Tina. Shayad humne unhe pehle bhi dekha tha. (Here are Samar and Tina. Maybe I saw them before.)

Thapki: Vimal ne kaha tha ki shayad kahin na kahin tum in sab se pehle bhi mile ho. (Vimal had told us that maybe you met these persons somewhere.)

Bihaan: Agar weh Dhruv ke yahan kaam karte hai to kya pata hum inse kabhi mile the ya phir TV pe dekha hoga. (If they worked with Dhruv, it is possible that I met them or saw them on TV.)

Thapki: Yeh sab tum bhool kyun nahi jaate ho? (Why don't you forget all these?)

Bihaan: Ye vo sapna hai jo hum apne dimaag se nahi hata sakte. Hume thoda sa vakt de do. (It's like a dream that I can't get out of my head. Give me some more time.)

Thapki: Ek baat yaad rakhna: Main sirf aur sirf tumhari hoon. Chaahe vo Aryaan ho ya koi aur, koi bhi tumhara jagah nahi le sakta hai. (Remember one thing: I'm just yours. Whether it is Aryaan or someone else, no one can take your place.)

Bihaan chuckled.

Bihaan: Aryaan nahi, Aryan. (Not Aryaan, it's Aryan.)

Thapki: Kya farkh padta hai? Abhi nicche chalte hai. (It does not matter. Let's go downstairs now.)

Bihaan: Tum chalo hum kuch der baad hum aate hai. (You go. I'll come after some time.)

As soon as Thapki came downstairs, she saw Dhruv leaving the house while the others looked worried.

Thapki: Kya hua? (What happened?)

The family members in turns narrated what had happened. The new show has suddenly been replaced by another old one. Dhruv had to go to the office to see what went wrong. By the time they narrated the incident, Bihaan had already come downstairs. They waited to know what was happening at the office. Finally Dhruv called them and said that everything was under control. After some minutes the show started to telecast again. The incident was considered to be a minor one but the reputation of the channel will definitely get affected since it is something that does not happen often.

Next day

9:00

Bihaan and Thapki went to Mr. Gupta's office to sign the contract. After that Bihaan brought Thapki to a deserted house.

Thapki: Hum yahan kya karne aaye hai? (Why did we come here?)

Bihaan: Ye raha humara office. (This is our office.)

Thapki: Itni jaldi iska intezaam ho gaya? Andar chalte hai. (You have already made the provision for this. Let's go inside.)

Inside the house

Bihaan: Jagah kaisi hai. Ek dum p for perfect na. (How is this place? It is p for perfect, right.)

Thapki: Hmm aur Gupta ji ki office bhi paas hai. (Hmm and Mr.Gupta's office is close.)

Bihaan: Maine kuch logon ko bulaaya hai saaf safaai ke liye. Kuch der mein aate hi honge. (I have called some persons to clean this place. They must be coming in some minutes.)

Thapki: Hume patrakaron ke bare mein bhi sochna chahiye. (We must think about employing journalists as well.)

Bihaan: Saurav khe raha tha ki vo humari madad kar sakta hai. Usey pooch lete hai. (Saurav was saying that he can help us. Let's ask him.)

Thapki: Nahi. Mujhe lagta hai ki ye kaam hume karna chahiye. (No. I think we should do this.)

Their talks were interrupted by the cleaners. Thapki and Bihaan supervised and helped them in cleaning the place.

Next day

Morning

Thapki and Bihaan are looking at the advertisement they placed in the newspaper for the job of journalists for their kids' magazine.

Later that day

They interviewed some 9-10 candidates and selected some of them.

Shop

They selected the paint colours for the office.

Next day

The house cum office

Two painters came and started to paint the interior of the office. After instructing them which colour to apply in which room, Bihaan and Thapki headed for the furniture shop. Bihaan had asked Bauji to come with them so that he could supervise the painters while they selected the furniture.

Furniture shop

They bought desks, shelves, chairs and all other furniture that they will be needing for their office.

The house cum office

When they returned there, they saw that the painters had pained the room with the wrong colour. Bauji was nowhere to be seen. He was not even replying to their calls. This worried them. After some minutes, he came back with the kids.

Bihaan: Bauji bache yahan pe kya kar rahe hai? (Bauji, what are the kids doing here?)

Bauji: Bore ho rahe the toh socha ki bacchon ko yahan le aaoon. (I was getting bored. So I thought of bringing the kids here.)

Bihaan: Kya Bauji? Humne aapse kaaha tha ki kisiko iske bare mein pata nahi chalna chahiye. (What is this Bauji? I told you that no one should know about this.)

Ananya: Hum kisi ko kuch nahi batayege. (We won't tell anything to anyone.)

Bihaan: Promise?

Kids(yelling): Promise.

Thapki asked the painters to continue with the other rooms. They could repaint this room tomorrow. Meanwhile they discussed about how they should decorate the place. The kids were very eager to help in decorating the place. The seven made a list on what else was needed to make this place a better one. After two hours the work for the day was completed. The Pandeys headed home after locking the future office.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice update chalo thahaan ka office ka kaam toh zoro se chal raha hai accha hai, aur ab toh shayad bacche bhi office ko decorate karne me inki madad karenge
Bihaan dream aur Samar, Teena toh kya joh kuch bihaan ne Dekha woh sach tha

Yaa phir aisa toh nhi koi sazish joh sach bihaan K saath hui pr ab usey yaad Nahi aur usey usne dream maan liya Pr aisa koi q karega aur kis liye

Aur agar ye dream sach toh phir kya us mystery man ka insabse koi wasta hai, ab mujhe doubt hai pr main tumhare next update ka intezaar karungi

Really very nice update and waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: saakshiii12

Very nice update chalo thahaan ka office ka kaam toh zoro se chal raha hai accha hai, aur ab toh shayad bacche bhi office ko decorate karne me inki madad karenge

Bihaan dream aur Samar, Teena toh kya joh kuch bihaan ne Dekha woh sach tha

Yaa phir aisa toh nhi koi sazish joh sach bihaan K saath hui pr ab usey yaad Nahi aur usey usne dream maan liya Pr aisa koi q karega aur kis liye

Aur agar ye dream sach toh phir kya us mystery man ka insabse koi wasta hai, ab mujhe doubt hai pr main tumhare next update ka intezaar karungi

Really very nice update and waiting for next

It's nothing to worry about. I wanted to put a closure to that 15 year leap. Somehow Bihaan experienced those moments even if it was like a dream. Just like he visualized Ramesh as Munna, he visualized these reporters as Samar and Tina. I think that I have wrongly written the scene. But I wanted to show that Bihaan was affected by what he thought had happened(that 15 year leap.).

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