FF: The Land of Beloved (Ch 66 -- Last Chapter on Pg 120) -- Updated 1 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rinka_Ritz

Tumhe hamesha poor bihy😭 dikhta hai? poor thapki nhi dikhti?😉

nahi😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey buddy.. Thts intriguing.. Waiting to knw secrets.. N of course thahaan managing married life..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What superb writers you all are! This is such a tremendous beginning of a story, Aisha - A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
Of course, we'll love Thapki - whichever way you'll portray her 😆

And so happy to see none of you is thinking of those really KHARAB, evil twists and turns we've been suffering for months. Suspense, drama, love, romance, a prank here or there - just fun stuff to enjoy, and tide over this Thahaan-less time 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samantha007

Hey buddy.. Thts intriguing.. Waiting to knw secrets.. N of course thahaan managing married life..




Thanks a lot 😃
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Originally posted by: T4Thahaanfan

What superb writers you all are! This is such a tremendous beginning of a story, Aisha - A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

Of course, we'll love Thapki - whichever way you'll portray her 😆

And so happy to see none of you is thinking of those really KHARAB, evil twists and turns we've been suffering for months. Suspense, drama, love, romance, a prank here or there - just fun stuff to enjoy, and tide over this Thahaan-less time 😃




Thanks dear for ur encouraging lines 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 2

What was "she" doing there???? How did "she" reach there??? No one has ever entered "his" room without his permission and this girl or woman or watever was lying comfortably in his bed. His shock first turned into irritation and then into anger. He walked quickly towards his bed with the intentions of waking her up and asking her to leave "his" room but when he reached the bed and looked at her face, he saw the traces of tears on her cheeks. His heart melted and he dropped that idea. But now he did not know wat to do next. How to deal with this new situation and how to come out of it. The decision that he had taken in the moment of weakness has started to show its consequences. His Maa was disappointed in him and he had a bundle of sheer stupidity lying right in front of him.

He did not want to think more about it as he was already very tired and wanted to rest so he looked around the room to find a place to lie down. His "Love Nest" sofa/chair was too small for him to sleep. He decided to rest on the two seater sofa in his room. He tried to fit himself into the sofa by changing several positions but none of them felt comfortable. Angrily he got up and went to his bed. She was not just sleeping comfortably but also sleeping in his side of bed. It annoyed him even more. He went to the other side and fell on his bed. He looked at her face to see if she was disturbed or not. She did move a lil and changed her side towards him. He quickly moved his face away from her to the opposite side. After few seconds he turned back to see if she was awake but she was still asleep. He cursed a lil and decided to sleep.

Apparently he was asleep but his mind was reminding him of things that had happened just few days ago. He was sitting in Vasu's room and his heart was beating very fast. He was trying to understand wat his Maa wanted him to do. He did not want to say yes to it but he had no choice.

Vasu: Bihaan! U must do this at any cost. I have not asked u ever for anything but u must do this much for me. Ur Bau Ji took this decision emotionally and never thought abt its consequences. But after all these years, I can not let his decision affect the peace of my house.

Bihaan: But Maa Bau Ji will never agree to that.

Vasu: Bihaan! U must not tell the whole truth to ur Bau Ji. In fact U need not to say anything to him. He must not know the whole truth. Let him know wat he knows. U just take this letter and deliver it to that witch. That is all I want u to do. Won't u do it for me???

He woke up due to the sound coming from his back side. He suddenly turned back and saw "her" talking in her sleep. It reminded him of where and with whom he was. He cursed some more but then decided to listen to the girl's words. She was making no sense but it made him aware of the fact that she talks in sleep. He suddenly realised that he does not know anything abt her. All he knew was that she was Bau Ji's best friend's daughter and her name was Thapki. Such a weird name but it suits her weird personality was the next thought that came to his mind. He looked at her face. She had fair complexion with nice features. He could not see more as the room was dark. He suddenly realised that he was looking at her and thinking abt her. He quickly turned his face away again and tried to sleep. Few minutes later he was asleep.

The alarm woke him up in the morning. He looked at the alarm clock and realised that he was getting late. He opened his eyes and saw a hand on his chest. He literally jumped out of the bed. "The thing" next to her was lying so close to where he was sleeping and had her hand on his chest just before he moved out of the bed. He did not like that at all. "She" must know her limits. No physical contact with him is allowed is wat he thought to tell her during their first real conversation. He quickly went into the washroom to get ready for the day.

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At the dining table, Bau Ji was reading newspaper and Suman Bhabhi was serving him breakfast. Bihaan greeted Bau Ji and Suman Bhabhi. Bau Ji got happy after seeing him.

Bau Ji: Come Bihaan. I was waiting for u. How is Thapki?

Bihaan took the seat next to Bau Ji and ignored Bau Ji's question. He looked at Suman Bhabhi and inquired abt breakfast.

Bihaan: Suman Bahbhi where is my breakfast?

Suman Bhabhi: So sorry Bihaan Devar Ji. I thought u will take off from office today so I did not make breakfast for u. Just give me 15 minutes and I will prepare for u.

Bihaan: No no just leave it. I will eat some thing in the office. I am already late. Btw where is Maa.

Suman Bhabhi: She is not well so she is taking rest

Bau Ji: U do not worry abt her. She will be fine.

Bihaan: Maa is not well and no one told me. Lemme go and check her

Bau Ji: Bihaan beta, it would be better if you leave her alone for some days. Let her rest and digest this new development. She is better that way.

Bihaan understood Bau Ji's point and came back. He said bye to Suman Bhabhi and Bau Ji and went to office on his bike.

Suman Bhabhi: Bau Ji, Y Maa always do this to Bihaan Devar. He loves her so much but she...

Bau Ji: U know na y and we can not do anything abt it. Just pray to God that Thapki brings that happiness into his life which he deserves since ever.

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Suman Bhabhi came to Bihaan's room and woke Thapki up. Thapki was so tired that she did not want to get up but finally had to as Suman Bahbhi wanted her to freshen up and eat sthg.

Suman Bhabhi: Hey Thapki now wake up.

Thapki: Is it already morning?

Suman Bhabhi: Its 11 am and people are already awake. You also get up and freshen up. I have prepared good food for you as you must be hungry.

Thapki: Oh yes I am hungry. But I will take shower. Lemme get ready and I will come downstairs

Suman Bhabhi: I hope you did not have any problem at night. When did Bihaan Devar come to his room?

Thapki: He did not come to the room. I slept alone

Suman Bhabi: Are you sure? I think he did coz where else would he have slept then?

Thapki: I do not know. I was damn tired and sleepy

Suman Bhabhi looked at Thapki to check if she was lying or telling truth but her face showed that she was not lying. Actually she knew Bihaan well and was concerned abt his reaction, when Bau Ji asked her to take Thapki to Bihaan's room.

She went downstairs after telling Thapki abt where the things she might require were. She was in the kitchen when she heard Vasu's sharp noise and the sound of a thali falling on the floor. She ran to see wat this was all about.

To be contd...

Chapter 3:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4872950&TPN=6


Edited by Kar_Nan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
This is amazing work Aisha ! Loved it 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Very nice update di.. so one development we got..there is something related with the letter... waiting for thahaan face off... update soon di
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
U knw what!! Its going really good! plz continue n bring thahaan closer n depression of vasu far!! 😛 UPDATE NEXT SOON!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's getting more and more mysterious... Pls update it and try to give some sort of clue about the scret...

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